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Posted: 15 years ago
sooo the epilogue was great, and i didnt see too much of AR, but you explained your reasoning for that... overall i thoroughly enjoyed this ff, it was very different and your writing style was very nice as well... i'll be eagerly waiting for ur next ff, plz pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ling that was soooo awesome. i cnt even express how much i love the simplicity of this ff and how you gave attention to every couple and character. i loved it!
tnx for the pms
Tahmina
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever

Chapter 12-

Liked how Nikki brought back some sense in Atul LOL. She is a good friend to everyone. So, in the process of healing Atul you brought Anjali closer to him. I like the way you develop the plot. :-)

Chapter 13-

This is why people say 'Ignorance is bliss'! :) Atul still has a long way to go. Riddhima has evolved into a strong person.

Oh my! The lives of Atul, Armaan and Riddhima seem to be intertwined. Once the connection between Atul and Riddhima is unveiled, another connection between the childhood of Armaan and Riddhima has shown up now!

Chapter 14-

Riddhima knew it before! A good twist in the tail 😃 This story was full of childhood twists till the end. Loved the way Nikki and Armaan summarize in the end. 😆

Err...would it be too much to ask of you if I tell you that I want both Epilogue and a detailed comment about title, storyline and characters? 😳 I am always greedy...I want more and more. I didnt expect this story to finish too soon, so you would have to make up for my disappointment 😆

Anu



Hello Anu,

Thank you very much for commenting on all the unread chapters in one go. I have already posted epilogue and a closing comment too. Do read and let me know if there is anything left unanswered.

Isn't 15 chapters enough for a story? I guess everyday posting kind of made it race by.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Ling
Thankyou sooo much for posting the epi...it was fantastic, length wise and content wise. This cleared out many things. And then the closing comment- I was eagerly looking forward to this one. It was really helpful and the title was truly justified. Im again thankful to you for taking this effort.
the process of exploring characters was very enlightening and enjoyable.
Do sned me a pm when you start the next story.
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naureen_aly

awesome end to the awesoem ff

u better start another ff soon
well i was planning to write .why did u put less of AR but before i write u have said by urself and u r rite other characters also drerved better ending
love every bit of it from the start to teh finish



Hello,

Thank you very much for your comment. I will start another story soon and first chapter will be posted tomorrow. I hope that you will give that one a shot too.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvarna....

Hey ... I read this fic only after your chapter 13 was out. And have caught up with the epilogue on time. Loved the way the characters and storyline have unfold. In between, was sorta scared as well. Well, the way your descriptions were running, at one point in the night I switched on all lights and then slept. Just to avoid imaginary ghosts. Well, all said and done, loved your writing style and the pyschological play.



Hello Suvarna,

Thank you very much for your comment. I am happy that you gave this story a shot and stuck with it till the end.
It may sound sadistic but I am glad that incident happened to you as it would mean that writing is effective.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago

This part as aleays was brilliant and I would loooooooooooooooooooove to read a proper epilogue.

TC,

Sona

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: munnibai

That was such a sweet epilogue. Thank you so much for that.
And...thank you for the pm.

Could you please do me a favour...could you please send me a pm when you start with your new story. I would love to read it.

Thanks again.



Hello,

Thank you very much for the comment. And you are welcome for the PM.

I will PM you when I update next.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

The epilogue was good but as you yourself said it seemed a bit different compared to the writing styles if the main chaps...but I guess that's the readers fault for being so greedy for your writing... :)

Anyway, coming to the title and the charcters, everything was very well written and established.

Good Work!

I just have one question - why did you use DMG charcters?

PS - the meaning of your screen name seems to he something you practice in IF - no posts other than in you ff...

Looking forward to your next work... :)



Hello,

Thank you very much for the comment. I am glad you noticed the shift in writing too.

I don't have a specific reason for using DMG characters. In I-F I have seen that AR attract more readers. And also since the story is set in a hospital, it was easier to use DMG characters.

Thank you very much. Introduction post will be out tonight and first chapter tomorrow.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat_j

hey Ling, I just happen to stumble upon you fiction....Honestly the title caught my eyes & I just had to read it......

Fabulously written & expressed.....
cheers!!!!
chahat



Hello Chahat,

Thank you very much for the comment.

Thanks,
L

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