ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11] - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIII HOW R U ?
CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD DEAR👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
AFTER A VERY LONG TIME U UPDATED😃
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THIS
AWESOOOOOOOOOME UD DEAR
LOVED IT
MINDBLOWING
RAJ IS SOOOO ROMANTICAND UNDERSTANDING HUBBY LOVE HIM
RAJ AND NAINA SCENES R SUPERABLY PRESENTED
PAATA NAHI TUM YE ITNE UNIQUE SCENES KAISE LIK LETI HO
U R A BRILLANT WRITER
EACH AND EVERY SCENE JUST FANTASTIC
I ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT
THANX U SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS
PLZ UD SOOOOOOOOON
WAITING FOR THE NEXT UD

LOVE U LOTS 🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

A very beautiful updt....loved d way u presented raj.....👏👏
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a very understanding yet very romantic.....😳😳
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😳tooo good ....👏👏 nice dialogues as well......
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updt was awesome.👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Congratulation for the new thread....
Awesome update. too good.loved it.
raj is so caring, understanding husband and romantic also.
he not only love naina unconditionally ,understood her also.
this is true love.
continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiii dear,
how r u?
For the second thread ....your fic rocks dear 👏 👏 👏 👏
Update is awesome as always...raj n nainas saree scene is lovely...Raj naina ko kitna tease kar raha tha , n naina ki blushing..u have written the whole scene so beautifully ...the scene infront of the mirror...fabulous scene dear
Raj naina ko kitna acchi tarah se samjhatha haina....naina is so lucky ...loved the ice cream n the pool scene
Finally Raj naina took their relationship to next level..the whole update is so cute n sweet
thanku so much dear for updating this fic ...n please post the next part soon....waiting eagerly

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shona91

superb part finally dono ek ho gaye
please jaldi update karne ki koshish karna
bye
take care

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

kis ne kaha is me kuch kami hai...??? maine kami dhundhne k bahane teen baar padh liya...par mujhe toh kahin bhi kami dekhne ko nahi mili...!!! bal ki jitni baar padha laga ki kaash tu mere samne hoti toh pakka...jhappiyan deti aise FAB ud k liye...

romantic tha...par itna cute ki kya kahun...
kisi ek part k bare me batana mushkil hai...
mujhe toh sab kuch achha laga...!!! saree scene...us k bich me dono ka halka sa nok-jhonk aur us us k baad raj ka naina se intro karwana...phir dono ka apne rishte ko naya aagaaz dena...phir ice-crm...phir naina k taraf se hi sahi...par dono ka finally ek ho jana...
kahin kuch bhi kami nahi thi...!!! aur tune bilkul thik kiya...jahan tujhe lage ki tu cmftble feel nahi karti...use likhne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai...!!! writer agar kuch zabardast likhe toh uski sweetness khatam ho jati hai...!!!
sach akhun toh is ud ka suru se le kar akhir ka sara part mujhe baht achha laga...itna achha laga ki ...aaj tak mujhe tujh se baat kar k bhi nahi laga tha...jab tune mujhe mera naam pucha tha...
ab se maam...thoda jaldi jaldi ud karna...okay...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

arre tujhe 2nd thrd k liye CONGRATS toh kahna hi bhul gayi...

👏 👏 👏 👏CONGRATS👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi! im Naina😊
new here n love ur fic very much 😊
sabse pehle CONGRATULATION for completing 1st thread⭐️👏
now update is superb👏
mind-blowing👍🏼
awesome⭐️
excellent⭐️
very romantic😳
written beautifully n brilliantly👏
raj is so understanding n naina is lucky girl for having such husband😍

Do continue soon its long tym
plz pm me next tym

thnx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

hey guys i m sorry for the delay..thanks for waiting...here's the next part...

part30

7a.m

naina stirred in her sleep feeling cold...she moved her hand to cover herself with the blanket properly but before she could do that she felt something warm against her back protecting her from the chilly morning air...she sub consciously turned around to hide herself in the warmth that the thing was providing her...

then after a moment or two she felt something wet on her bare shoulder and this time she opened her eyes only to find herself in her husband's warm embrace...naina felt his bare chest against hers holding her tightly...flashes of last night which were still fresh in her mind and heart made her blush...

then she looked at his face...he was in a deep sleep...his face was as calm as ever may be a bit more than that...he looked too cute with his hair all ruffled up...naina couldn't help but admire his handsome face which was now too close to hers...naina realised that he had kissed her shoulder subconsciously in his sleep...she moved a bit closer to him although there was no scope for that and started running her fingers in his hair...

she felt as if she wanted to do this from a long time...maybe since her academy days...she can't tell the exact day but yes this was a constant wish in the back of her mind...

after playing with his hair for sometime she went back into his arms and started thinking about the events of last night that how she felt nervous and started crying, how he took her out for having icecream..then when she took the first step and finally surrendering her soul and body to him...she smiled recalling the moment when she cried in pain and he had kissed her tears away mumbling words of comfort and love against her skin...

he surely made the night perfect as he had said...she made a silent promise of keeping the memories of the night alive in her heart forever...

after sometime naina tried to get up as they have a flight to catch...but the more she tried to move out of his embrace the tightier his hands became around her...

raj[with eyes closed]-where are you trying to go?????

naina was shocked to see him awake...

naina[lowered her eyes]-aap kab uthe?????

raj[teasing her]-jab aap mere baalon ke saath khel rahi thi...

naina bit her tongue on being caught...'

naina-vo...vo main...khel thode na rahi thi...main to bas...

raj-bas kya????????

naina-bas dekh rahi thi ki...aap ke baal bhut lambe ho gaye hain...

raj[teasing her further]-really??????to tum shayad mera new hair style decide kar rahi hogi...u can cut them according to ur wish...i won't mind at all...

naina[blushing]-ab aap mujhe chedna band kareinge????

raj[sighed]-mujhe jitna chedna tha vo main kal raat ched chuka...u can have ur turn if you wish to...

naina's breath was caught in her throat at this and she turned even redder than a tomato...

she quickly tried to run from there but then the reality hit her...she definitely can't do that for she needed her clothes first...

on the other hand raj noticed that she was about to run but her bare form stopped her from doing so...luck was definitely on his side...

raj-kya hua naina?????kuch chahiye[he asked rolling his tongue]

naina[innocently]-close your eyes...

raj-why??????

naina-ahh...vvo...vo mujhe taiyaar hone jaana hai...hum late ho rahe hain...

raj-to maine kab roka hai...jaao...

naina-par...

raj[enjoying this completely]-par kya naina?????

naina[irritated by now]-aap kitna badal gaye hain...main aapko kitna shareef samjhti thi...

raj[raising his eyebrow]-vaise main bhi tumnein bhut shareef samjhta tha...kal raat se pehle tak...

naina opened her mouth to argue on this but then she thought that it would be better to act...

before raj could understand anything naina was already pulling the single blanket which was covering both of them...

raj[dramtically]-arre naina...kya..kya kar rahi ho??????don't be soo desperate...

naina[angrily]-shut up...

raj[with his eyes wide open]-what??????u told me to shutup??????hello...remember i am your senior...

naina-mujhe yaad hai...lekin abhi hum duty par nahin hain is liye mujhe order dene ki koshish bhi mat karna...infact jo main kehti hun aap vaisa hi karien vahi accha hoga aapke liye...

then she was again at her work...

raj-naina leave the blanket...

naina-no you leave it...

raj-naina i need it...

naina-no i need it more than you...

and then naina used all her force and grabbed the blanket and ran towards the washroom leaving raj there...

raj closed his eyes and then suddenly opened them...

raj[to himself]-arre main khud se kyun sharma raha hun...aur iska badla main zaroor loonga naina se...

he smiled sensing the change in himself...he was happy from the bottom of his heart after so many years...and the credit goes to his naina...the love of his life...who he loved immensely...he felt that love was a very small word to describe his feelings for naina...the actual word should be "worship"..

after sometime...

naina was getting ready and raj was sitting on the bed with his gaze fixed on naina...

raj[loudly]-waah kya baat hai...

naina-kya?????

raj-nahin kuch nahi...naina tum in kapdon mein comfortable ho??????????
naina looked at herself from top to bottom but couldn't understand what he was trying to say...

naina-kya hua?????mujhe kuch samjh nahin aa raha...kuch kharaabi hai???????

raj[with mischievious smile]-nahin...vo itne dino baad tumne itne saare kapde pehne hain...saans to theek tarah se aa rahi hai na????????

naina immediately smacked his arm hard...

naina-chup...hum ghar jaa rahe hain na???wahan bhut accha impression hai mera...bekaar mein maa ke saamne meri image kharaab ho jaayegi...

raj[laughed]-accha to ye baat hai?????maa ko impress karne ki taiyaari hai????hmmm but don't worry vo already tumse bhut impressed hain...

naina[nagging]-aur aap ye baar baar mere kapdon pe comment kyun karte rehte ho????

raj-simple kyunki tumhaare naye naye avtaar dekh kar main ascharya chakit ho jaata hoon..

naina[confusingly]-ascchh what???????

raj[with a fake shocked expression]-naina tumhein hindi bhi theek tarah se nahin aati??????god...kahan fas gaya main..

naina[angrily]-aap ek kaam karo...aap mujhe chod do aur apne liye apne layak ek intelligent ladki dhoond laao jisse hindi acche se aati ho, jo dhake dhake se kapde pehne, jisse khaana banana aata ho, saree pehna aata ho,jo bilkul gussa na kare and last but not the least jiske saath aap fasa hua mehsoos na karein...

saying this she threw her hair brush on the dressing table with full force and turned to leave...

raj caught her from behind and wrapped his arms around her tightly...

naina-chodiye mujhe...

raj[kissed her cheek from behind]-arre baapre itna gussa...main to mazaak kar raha tha..

naina-mazzak to nahin lag raha tha...

raj-lo fir to tum nahin main kisi kaam ka nahin hoon..dekho na mujhe theek tarah se mazaak karna bhi nahin aata...aur maine tumhein naraaz kar diya...aur ek baat aur...mujhe kisi aur ki zaroorat nahin hai...mujhe apni ye choti si gusse se bhari hui aur tod fod karne waali naina bhut pasand hai...

naina[cutely]-main choti nahin hoon... main ab itna gussa bhi nahin karti aur maine kya toda?????

raj[pinching her nose]-galat...tum abhi choti bacchi jaisi ziddi aur pyaari ho aur gussa tumhein abhi bhi bhut aata hai aur...jahan tak kuch todne ki baat hai to vo dekhiye...recent example..

naina ne dekha ki uske abhi hairbrush patakne se dressing table ka mirror crack ho gaya hai jo obviously usne maarne ke baad notice nahin kiya...

naina looked at the mirror and then at raj who was smiling at her lovingly..

naina[embarrased]-vo...vo...maine dekha hi nahin hair brush kahan maar dia maine...

raj[laughed]-chalo accha hai...dressing table par hi maara...kahin mere sarr par maar dia hota to ab tak to main...

naina-chup...iske aage kuch mat boliyega...

raj[smiled]-accha baba nahin bolta...ab agar aapka gussa thanda ho gaya ho aur aap tayiaar hain to chalein???flight ka time ho raha hai...

naina nodded and then they both left for airport taking all the beautiful memories of the love filled days with them...

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back in delhi...

when raj and naina finally reached home both were very happy to see maa standing at the door waiting for them...ahh but not without a puja ki thali...

maa[in her full mood]-kitni der kardi meri aankhon ke taare...teri maa to teri raah dekhte dekhte aur budhi ho gayi...

naina laughed instantly at this whereas raj had hand on his forehead...

maa-dekh to maa ke pair choone ki bajaye apna sarr pakad ke khada hai...

raj was about to bent when maa stopped him...

maa-dono ek saath...agar serials dekhe hote to aaj ye baat pata hoti tum dono ko...

raj-maa aap ho na...fir serial dekhne ki kya zaroorat hai???
maa-chup kar aur jaldi karo tum dono fir mujhe apna aashirwaad waala dialogue bhi bolna hai..

raj and naina both smiled and bent togther this time...

maa-khush raho...bhagwaan tumhein duniya ki har khushi de aur mujhe jaldi hi khushkhabri sunne ko mile...

raj gulped hard at this and looked at naina who was looking at him confusingly..it was very clear that she didn't get what maa just said...but like this was not enough naina threw another bomb...

naina-kaunsi khushkhabri maa??????

raj[murmering]-naina..chup..main baad mein samjha doonga..

naina[loudly]-baad mein kyun??????abhi kyun nahin...maa kisi khushkhabri ki baat rahi hain aur aap mujhe chup rehne ke liye keh rahe hain...[then to maa]-maa aap bataiye na kya keh rahi thi aap...

before maa could answer that raj ran inside with the excuse of meeting aryan...

maa[smiled]-sharma gaya...

naina-maa kya ho raha hai????mujhe kuch samjh nahin aa raha..

maa-buddhu ladki...main keh rahi thi ki ab jaldi se mujhe dadi banna hai...

naina gasped in shock as if some ghost was standing in front of her...

maa[teasing]-chal ab mooh band kar aur andar aaja..

naina silently followed maa but couldn't help to keep the red colour off her face...she cursed herself to embarass raj like that...but then she admitted to herself that it'll be the most beautiful thing to happen...to have a part of him in her...no other thing in this world can replace that feeling...

naina was lost in her dreamworld when she saw aryan running away from raj and raj trying to make aryan listen to him for once...she smiled as if she had already visualized the future when the same thing will happen with their own kid running around...

then she went to meet aryan...

naina-arre arre ruko..kahan bhaag rahe ho aap?????

aryan stopped hearing naina's voice and ran to hug her... naina too hugged him tight and planted a kiss on his cheek...

naina[smiling]-to ab bataao kyun bhaag rahe ho aap?????

aryan-aap kyun chachu ko saath lekar aaye?????inhein vaapis chod aao..

raj[shocked]-what????

aryan[angrily]-aapko kisi ne bataya nahin jab do log baat kar rahe ho to beech mein nahin bolte...bad manners...

naina suppressed her smile and said-nahin aryan aise nahin bolte...chachu aapse bade hain na????

aryan-par mujhe inse baat nahin karni...

raj sighed and took aryan in his arms...

aryan-neeche utaaro mujheee...

raj-bilkul nahin...pehle aap bataao ki itna gussa kyun ho aap????

aryan[pouting]-aap ne bola tha ki roz phone karoge lekin itne dino se main wait kar raha tha aapne ek phone bhi nahin kiya...abhi main aapse kabhi baat nahin karunga...aap har baar aise hi karte ho...

before raj could answer that naina answered for him...

naina-ohh...phone kaise karte chachu itne busy the wahan...

saying this naina gave a teasing look to raj who was shocked to the core..

raj[murmered]-naina kya bol rahi ho????bacche ke saamne????

aryan-kyun busy the???????

naina looked at raj who gave her a dangerous look in return...

naina[to aryan]-aap mere saath apne room mein chalo main sab bataati hoon...

aryan-ok chalo...chachu neeche utaaro abhiii...

raj hesitated at first then felt stupid for thinking something like that...naina won't talk anything of that sort in front of a child...it was obvious that she was teasing him...

raj-accha jaao...

naina smiled and took aryan in his room...raj also followed them inside...

on entering a room aryan saw a big bag on his bed...

aryan-ye kiska bag hai?????????
naina[cutely]-aap hi ka hai..khol ke dekho...

aryan excitedly opened the bag and saw many gift wrapped boxes in it...

aryan[exclaimed]-ye sab mere liye????????

naina[sat besides him]-haan ye sab aapke liye...

aryan[happily]-thankyou chachi...

naina-mujhe nahin chachu ko thankyou bolo ye sab unhone liye hain aapke liye...

raj and aryan[both together]-kya??????????

naina hinted raj with her eyes to keep mum...

aryan-chachu laaye hain??????
naina-haan tabhi to itne din aapko phone nahin kiya...dekho itne saare gifts hain...inn sab ko khareedne mein bhut busy the..ab bataao vo kaise phone karte?????

aryan was seriously considering to forgive raj...afterall he was busy buying gifts for him...on the other hand raj was still in shock...he didn't purchase a single thing..it was all naina's choice...he now understood why she had said that these gifts will help him...

he looked at naina who smiled at him...he actually wanted to kiss her there and then but rejected the idea with aryan around...

aryan[suddenly]-ok maaf kiya...

raj[smiled]-pakaa??????
aryan-haan...thankyou chachu...saying this he didn't wait for another second and jumped on him to hug him tight...raj was finally relieved that aryan was not angry with him anymore...he did miss his little bundle of joy all these days and now with him in his arms and naina besides him made him the most happiest person on this earth

end of part30...


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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1402544/all-for-your-smile-2-rn-fic-part-37-pg57-24-11-11?pn=11

Edited by rajeev fann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Hi dear 😊
1st one to comment😆
update was brilliant,lovely n romantic ❤️😳❤️aur main out of words😳 ho gayi hu
morning part is very romantic n they fight for blanket n naina ran away with blanket😆😆 aur raj teased his wife wo toh bahut badal gaya hai😉
naina k dresses par comment kiya raj ne aur naina k gusse ka shikaar hua woh bechara mirror😆
😆 but raj ne use mana liya akhir woh experienced hai use manane main😆😉
raj ki mom full serial mode main wait kar rahi thi
😆 aur raj-naina k aate hi maa ne dialogue bhi shuru kar diye😆
naina embarasses raj n herself 😳in front of his mother
naina also tease raj in front of aryan😉 n raj is lyk😲
naina ne aryan ko itne saare gifts de kar manaa hi liya 😊
akhir aryan ne raj ko maaf kar diya😃
raj is happy that naina understand him n he loves her alot❤️
plz do cont soon

Loves
Naina😊🤗


Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

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