ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11] - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

kis ne kaha is me kuch kami hai...??? maine kami dhundhne k bahane teen baar padh liya...par mujhe toh kahin bhi kami dekhne ko nahi mili...!!! bal ki jitni baar padha laga ki kaash tu mere samne hoti toh pakka...jhappiyan deti aise FAB ud k liye...

romantic tha...par itna cute ki kya kahun...
kisi ek part k bare me batana mushkil hai...
mujhe toh sab kuch achha laga...!!! saree scene...us k bich me dono ka halka sa nok-jhonk aur us us k baad raj ka naina se intro karwana...phir dono ka apne rishte ko naya aagaaz dena...phir ice-crm...phir naina k taraf se hi sahi...par dono ka finally ek ho jana...
kahin kuch bhi kami nahi thi...!!! aur tune bilkul thik kiya...jahan tujhe lage ki tu cmftble feel nahi karti...use likhne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai...!!! writer agar kuch zabardast likhe toh uski sweetness khatam ho jati hai...!!!
sach akhun toh is ud ka suru se le kar akhir ka sara part mujhe baht achha laga...itna achha laga ki ...aaj tak mujhe tujh se baat kar k bhi nahi laga tha...jab tune mujhe mera naam pucha tha...
ab se maam...thoda jaldi jaldi ud karna...okay...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
arre tujhe 2nd thrd k liye CONGRATS toh kahna hi bhul gayi...
👏 👏 👏 👏CONGRATS👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

sabse pehle Thanx 4 the update.................😃.......... my wild guess turned right that u'll update in new thread 😆 😆 😆.... ab yaar tumhaari vajah se hi to yaad aaya ki naya thread shuru karna hai😆😆thanks to mujhe karna chahiye😊😊
coming to update..........no need 4 me to say that it was awesome.....👏 👏 👏........... njoyed reading........😃........frankly worth waiting 2 months ( i think last update was 2 months bak 😉 😉 😉.... i m sooooo happy that u felt this😊😊
loved my romantic Rajveer............😳 😳 😳.......... he is so sweet & understanding..........😳 😳 hey bhagwaan raj ek hai aur "my" kehne waala kitna saare😆😆how well he understands Naina......... lucky girl naina........😃.... so finally they took their relationship to next level..........😳 😳.......... yes naina is lucky indeedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
now wud wait eagerly 4 next part.......... 😃.......... so, continue soon & soon means real soon........ dont make us wait like last time......😃 😃 😃...
once again thanx 4 update.........🤗 thankyou soooooo much for commenting....and yes i'll try to update soooon😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: preet09

Hi.......How r u? 😊
congratulations for co mpleting the 1st thread 👏 👏 👏 and thanks for updating this fic thanks dearSmileSmile

Now, coming to the update ⭐️ ⭐️
Its an awesome update, just loved it. I just loved the way Raj is so understanding and so sweet.😳 😳 😳 He understands her really well and can do anything to make her calm and I am sure he will definitely help her to forget those bad moments of her life. yes dear...jab raj hai to kis baat ki chinta...uske hote naina sab bhula hi degi...SmileSmileSmileand yes he's vryyyy understanding.....lrl mein bhi to dekha thaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...I just loved the scene at pool side.......his understanding. The way he do small things to make her calm are too gud. i m glad that u liked that scene😃....Just a perfect update..⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.....ab please jaldi update karna.😊 Please dnt kept so waiting for so long and thanks for the pm 😊 thanks for commenting dear.... m trying to update soonSmileSmile

Luv Preet
😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

How r u???
Congratulations on second thread..As a writer u were brilliant n your story made us crave for more..👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanks dear....u know i feel really odd when some calls me "a writer"....coz i feel i m not that.....there are soooo many beautifully written fics that i dnt stand anywhere....but still u all make me feel sooooooooooo special...thanks dear....thankyou sooooooooooo much😊😊
This part was one of the best in this story..😃👏 ..How do u manage to write like dis all the time..??😃 i m sooooo happy that u liked this part as well😊
Saree scene was just too sweet..Raj is really naughty n this time Naina is specchlees..She really don't know wat to say..😆😆😉 yes raj mein ab real pati ki aatma ghus gayi hai😆😆
Raj was wanting to take another step in this relationship but only if Naina was ready..I really wish that all the girls get hubby like Raj..He is just so understanding n sweet..I 'll rather say perfect😍 yes he is perfect and i wish this too that all girls should get a husband like him....then we'll happily say..."marriages are mde in heaven"😳😳😳
But Naina was bit hesitant due to her past n Raj completely understood her position..
Naina was really guity but her husband is one in a million..he took her to have ice-cream ..Naina was astonished at this..She told him abt her fear n he cud feel her pain.. naina ne kabhi socha bhi nahin hoga ki uska pati usse aise time pe icecream khilaane le jaayega😆😆😆
She should thank God for giving her such a understanding husband.😊
This time Naina took the initiative n den there was no looking back..Only love spoke..Finally Raj n Naina r one..😛😊😃
Why u always say that ur part is not gud..It was not gud it was very very gud.. thankssssssssss dear....
n u dont need to explain all the scenes..It is quite understood n way u described them was beautiful..vey subtle n cute..really loved it.. i m very much relieved after reading ur comments...thanks for commenting dear.......keep reading😊😊
Pls continue soon
Bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_58

wow awsome update

superb
mindblowing
very romantic
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soon thanks dear for such beautiful and encouraging words....keep reading and commenting😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: strawberrychip

beatiful update...

no words...thanks for commentng dear...keep reading😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

Beautiful part

Mind blowing...brilliantly written thanks dear...i m glad that u liked it😊
Enjoyed reading it..
hope every girl could find such a understanding husband i wish the same for every girl😊😊
please continue soon thanks for commenting dear....keep reading😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
hey pls update... it has been a long time since u updated.. plsss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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pls update soon.its been alomg time.

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