revenge with suspence....mayur ff part 4 pg 51 - Page 11

oh so sweet

promo padkar dil hi kush ho gaya yaar

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

promo padkar dil hi kush ho gaya yaar

no words yaar

me, kulsum and arjun were so cute

can't wait to read that whole scene

but the phone call

omg nupur

hope sab thik ho jaye

continue soon

luv

mahima

well thk h0ona mushkil hai
as i told u mayank gonna be killed
will update till 2 pm

updating nowi n 20 minutes

Part 1

It was mahi and arjuns fourth birthday

A huge party was there for them

All guest had arrived but all were waiting for mayank to come

All kids were anxious for it

But there was no sign of mayank nupur was roming around and was hell angry on him

k: chachi chachu kaha hai
ma: muma mele shalle flndj agaye ha
n: beta bus papa ate hoge wait u knw na his meetings
ma: yesh mama papa bhi na ajj to me un she bt nhe kalugi
mean while arjun came there
and stand in btween mahi and kulsum and hugged thm from side

ar: mum see me howj m looking
ma: mela bhai to beshtest lagla hai
ar: thnk u meli mahi
k: arjun tum to hand..shom laglahe ho
ar: thnk you kulchum

three kids were talking

meanwhile nupur got a call and she fainted

samrat rushed to her
and splashed sum water onto her
she came back to senses and started crying
s: kia hua bhabhi
n: wo mayank

s: kia hua bhai ko

N: wo us ka accident

After listening this mm nupur and samrat went to hospital

Meanwhile gunjan tookcare of childrens

Sanjeevani hospital

N: doctor kia hua mere mayank ko

Dr: to ap unki wife hai well ur husband is no more he passed away

N:wht …..

He stand there lyka statue

She wasn't reacting at all;

Samrat and mm were shatterd

They didn't knew wht to do or wht not

Here they lost sumone special

S; ( while gaining all courage) dr hum bhaya ki body kab le jasakte hai

Dr: ha bus post mortem ki report ajaye phi rap inhe lejasakte hai

Meanwhile mm was trying hard to bring nupur back to ths world

After an hour

They took the mayanks body to home

Where gunjan had prepared all things regarding his last ceremony

Mahi,arjun and kulsum were continuously weeping

Ma: mele papa meko chor kk kiu chal gaye papa wapash ao na

Ar: papa me apshe kabi bt nhe Kaluga ap buhat gande ho mele bilthday me chal gaye

K: chachu ap wapash ao na pljjjjj

G: dekho bacho mayank humein chor k jaaa chukka hai ab ab ko is ke liye pray karni chaye( while controlling her tear)

But children weren't ready to listen her

They were shattered

Thn

Ambulance arrived

Mm nupur samrat entered the house with mayank dead body

His body was fully covered as his face was badly damaged

Nupur sit at sofa .hewas still nt reacting

All people arrived but nupur was still in same position wearing red scolour sarr .wearing red bangles,mangalsutra.

Gunjan went to her

G: di plz hosh me ao di jiju ja chuke hai pplz di

N: no response

Thn kids came to her

Ma: muma papa ( she started crying badly)

This brought a tear flow from nupurs eyes

She rushed to mayanks body

And hugged her tightly and

N: mayank mjhe chor ke mat jao plz me marjaugi mje mat chor k jao

Thn she broke her bangles and mangalsutra

And changed her dreess from red to white

She again went near mayanks body

N: kyu mayank tum ne to waada kiya than a k saath jeeyenge saath marenge phir kyu aj mujhe aqkela choe gaye.tumhare bagair hum kaise jeeyenge .mahi aur arjun ka kiya hoga .kulsum tumse kitna attached ha.tum ne maa k bare me bhi nhe socha

Now she started crying again

Thn samrat came to her and wiped her tear

And comfort her

Meanwhile police came in and said tht mayank has been killed

And suspect were nupurs father and rv

Nupur was hell shocked after listening this

All ritual eneded

Nupur took mayanks raakh and promised

" jab tak me mayank ke kaatil ko sabaq nhe sikha deti tab tak uski aastiya nhe bhaogi ye mere wwada hai ."

Samrat and mm came from back

S : hum apke saath hai abhum lenge bhaya ki maut ka badla

N: ha lekin pehle bacho ko sambhalna zarruri hai

The end

Precap

Nupur consoling childrens

Six month paas by

One guy opened eyes in hospital: me kaun hu me kiya karha hu

Frndz do comment

Criticism is always accepted

res

great update sehruu....

1stly me mahi n arjun cute scene..

All were eagerly waiting 4 mayu 2 arrive wid cake..

Then d call 4m hospital,.😭😭😭

N doctor informing mayu z no more...

Omg nupur not responding... 😲

Thank god she responded...

Nupur promising takng mayu rakh vz senti..

Glad sam z wid nupsi,.

Wow precap is awwsume..eagerly waitng 4 it.

P.s.:mahi tumhe kaafi dinaun baad 1st dekh kar acha lag raha hai.

Luv
*kulsum*

awesome start dear,,,,i think the guy who died is not mayank.....and the one who opened his eyes in the hospital is mayank....wooow..am so excited...

Originally posted by: achoose

awesome start dear,,,,i think the guy who died is not mayank.....and the one who opened his eyes in the hospital is mayank....wooow..am so excited...

thnx a lot

well just wait for it
to knw whose tht guy

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

res

will wait for ur comment