MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 18

Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update!!!
mayanks mom was amazing...loved her...
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Senti update

Mm was really angry on her childrens

If she wuld be ok toh she wuld hav slapped both of them😆

Its really shocking Mayur are getting seprated jus because of silly fghts😲😲

Hop they get togther soon

Liked MM's suggestion Order or watevr u say

She is jus The Best😉😆

Love her😉

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

oh wow
part 2 was so cool
i really loved the overflowing emotions
awesome
i loved it
thanks for the pm
n do update soon
pooja

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

ressssss

edited

mrs. shrma can be the most rational person on hospital bed too! Yeah.. Unlike YOU 😆

..........and ME!😳

what happened btw mayur?? and why this much hatred kenda feelings? Bata du.. Itni jaldi? I am a sadist and i love torturing people..muahahahahaha

ye kya ho raha hai? mjht mein mayur seprated. rabi-sanu's ff mein bhi sad turn and all going sad sad Life is sad and thats the saddest reality..I have come to terms with it now..

yay! 3 months together. this will mark the things to happen good! I hope so..

arre wah! badi research karti hai yaar! itni padhai mein karti to iit clear ho jati ( am sounding like mom??.... so wat? sahi bola 😉 ) *groans*

btw.. wo allegations wala turn mast tha. shilpa aunty ko raasta mil hi jaata ahi inko ikatha karne ka! Yeah.. I like shilpa Aunty!!!!

and m glad u r doing this the ur heart's way. ab jaldi jaldi update karo... or i'll spam ur thread too! (vo tomain waise bhi karungi 😆 ) Update? You know how it is.. i'll try though...

love u Love you too..

*d*

p.s.- aaj p.s. hain 😉

p.s.- sorry for late reaply. You should be..Oh just kidding..😆

p.s.s.- u know wat nupur is not gonna be there in mjht anymore.... not even as ghost 😲 i hate CVs 😭 No comments.. I am tired of commenting on this now.. I removed my signature for you..

p.s.s.- p.s(s) khatam 😉

Love,
*devil*

p.s. love you..

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

akansha...1stly,congrats 4 d starting of ur new ff!!👍🏼👏.Thank you...now abt ur ff, so here we hv got yet another writer among us...truly dis forum has so many genious n talented persons...u r definitely 1 among dem.. thank you again.. 😳

jst completed reading both d parts..n d title page too..must say..m finding dis ff..as a hatke..a bit diffrent..😎 so m curious 2 c how dis will proceed..do continue soon..n its perfectly ok..b sappy,b coy..watever..but kp d memory of nupur alive dear..alwys!!!🤗 I'll try my best dear..

luv mayur always!!!🤗 Yeah..

Love,

Akansha

Originally posted by: pagli91

Hey Akansha...

great update... love Shilpa and her attempts at trying to make them work it out... hope these 3months will help matters and not make it worse... plz get them back together quickly... and update soon. 😃

Originally posted by: naina0123

loved it as always.. Thank you..*bow*

thank god for this wonderful person called Shilpa!!😆 Yeah!!!

looks like something went seriously wrong between mayur..oh well..am sure they will resolve everything..at least for shilpas sake.. They'll do it for their sake.. They are mad for each other.1!!!

i really like your style of writing Aki...waiting 4 more..continue sooon... I'll try to write..

🤗


🤗Aki

Originally posted by: rads14

awesome part..!!!
really superb..loved it..!!
eager to read the next part..
cont soon

wow....

such a lovely part

i hope those 3 months resolve their poblems....

i m loving this ff

plz update asap

and thanx a ton for the pm

shilpa aunty is just too gud

awesome

these 3 months OMG i want romance.....!#@$#@%

with love

pari