HUMARI KAHANI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CS & PART 1 UPDATEDPG7 - Page 5

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Character Sketch

THNK U ALL OF U WHO LIKED MY CONCEPT I KNOW I M UPDATING THE CS AND PART 1 AFTER SO MANY DAYS OF STARTING THIS FF. BUT PLZ JUST BARE WITH ME.EXAMS AND ALL ARE GOING ON SO DON'T REALLY GET D TYME TO CUM HERE. BUT IN PART OF ASKING FORGIVENESS FROM U I M UPDATING THE CS WID PART ONE. IN THE HPE THAT U'LL FORGIVE ME FOR THE DELAY. I HPE U LIKE IT THNX.

ARMAAN(A)-

is a fun luving husband of riddhima. luvs his wife dearly just got married recently. Is a senior doctor at sanjeevani. Is an orphan, best friend wid rahul. Luvs playing pranks. Is handsome and an happy go lucky guy. Is possessive about riddhima. wants to give her every happiness which she deserves.

RIDDHIMA(R)-

sweet, and innocent girl. Got married to her luv armaan. Is a senior doctor as well. Is an orphan and best friend to muskaan. Luvs kids and wants to give her husband every happiness which she possibly can give.

RAHUL(Ra)-

great and gud luking guy. Married to muskaan. Is a senior doc. Best friend of armaan. Luvs his wife but at the same tyme they have uncontrollable fights. But never get serious. Is also an orphan. Unlike his wife

MUSKAAN(M)-

a happy go lucky girl. Is bubbly and cute. Is a complete chatterbox. Doesn't remain quiet. Is a best friend to riddhima. is an orphan. Grew up wid riddhima. always willing to do anything for her friend. Is married to rahul. But doesn't know how they will get along.

BAS ITNA HI. AGAR ABHI HI PURI KAHANI AUR CHARACTERS KI PERSONALITY BATA DOONGI TOH POORI KAHANI MEIN TUM SAB KYA KAROGE? IF U LIKED IT PLZ PRESS THE LYKE BUTTON AND DO LEAVE A COMMENT.

Part 1

Abhi subha ka waqt hai. Yeh inki shaadi ki pehli raat k baad ki subah hai. Subha ka takriban 8:00 baj rahe hain aur yahan humari kahani shuru hoti hai. So let's get in.

Armaan and riddhima's house

The scene opens wid riddhima cuming out of the bathroom after taking a bath. She's wearing a red gown and water is falling all over the floor from her hairs which are soaked in water. She cums out of the bathroom and directly luks at her husband who is sleeping peacefully on the bed without noticing that she's not even there. The blankets are covering her husband so she can't luk properly.

R- (standing near the washroom door and luking at her husband armaan who she thinks is in the bed sleeping, thinks to herself) yeh armaan b na abhi tak soya hua hai. Duty pe b jana hai. Lagta hai late karwayga.(while saying this she goes towards the bed and gets a hold of the blanket) Armaan uto. (removes the blanket) warna late ho-(as soon as she removes the blanket she realizes that armaan is not there. Instead the bed is filled wid pillows which were under the blanket and which she misunderstood for armaan, starts thinking) yeh, yeh armaan kahan gaya? (as soon as she says this sumone cums from the back and holds her waist and hugs her from the back)

A- (replies to her) armaan yahan hai. (as soon as he touches Riddhima shivers go down her spines)

R- (starts hesitating, and turns around to face him) armaan, armaan, woh woh…(she wants to say to him to hurry up but just by luking at him she starts struggling to say anything)

A- (pulls riddhima towards him) haan Riddhima kaho kya hua? (is touching her cheeks now)

Riddhima is now losing her senses with armaan so close to her, they have a eye lock. Armaan is bringing Riddhima closer and closer to him while she is trying hard to move away but the feeling of his closiness is starting to make her lose control. Both of them are cuming closer and closer. Armaan is about to kiss Riddhima when the phone suddenly rings. riddhima cum to reality.

R-(to armaan, while he's still hlding her, the phone is ringing) armaan, armaan mujhe choro phone baj raha hai.

A- (while bringing her more closer to him, and says this in a intense voice) bhaj ne do (riddhima again is starting to lose her control but the phone is ringing, so she cums back to reality)

R- armaan, choro, dekho koi emergency hui toh.(armaan listens to her, but still doesn't let her go) armaan choro warna phone kat jayega, plzzzzzz(she says plz so sweetly that armaan leaves her)

A- (realizes her) acha jao. (Riddhima goes and picks up the phone, it's from the hospital, she tlks, while armaan admires her and goes into lala land, but he cums to reality, wen Riddhima puts down the phone)

R- (puts down the phone, and cums to armaan) armaan hume abhi hospital jana hoga, woh patient ki halaat bohot hi karab hai. Aur forun surgery karni paregi. (they both hurry and leave for the hospital)

Rahul and Muskaan's house

Aj inki b pehli subah hai shaadi ki raat k baad. Kyunki dono jodi ki shaadi ek hi din hui hai. Wahan toh Riddhima armaan ko uta rahi thi lekin yahan toh pura case hi ulta hai. Rahul cums out of the washroom.

Ra- (luks at muski) yeh abhi b soyi hui hai. Hospital nahi jana kya? (goes to wake her up) muskaan uto hospital k liye late ho rahe hain.

M- (irritated) ab toh sone do poori raat tang kya hai.

Ra- acha maine tang kya hai?

M- aur nahi toh kya? Poori raat toh mujhe soone nahi dya aur ab sone ki khoshish karahi hoon toh yeh hospital ka bahana. Yaar rahul sone de toh. (rahul is getting frustrated so he sits on the bed and holds muskaans hand and pulls her up, muskaan wakes up and is freaked out for the whole pulling thing and her eyes are wide open, both of them share a eye lock, but not for long muski cums to reality really fast) yaar kya hai soone b nahi deta kaankajoora.

Ra- (he cums to his senses too) muskaan ab tu-(the phone starts ringing, picks up the phone) hello? (tlks on the phone while muskaan is tryng to get out of her sleep) kya!!!!!!!(muskaan is startled to hear rahul scream so badly) haan hum abhi aate hain (puts down the phone)

M- kya hua tum itna kyun chila rahe ho?

Ra- who muskaan hume abhi hospital jana hoga patient ki tabyiet karab ho gayi hai. Forun surgery ki zaroorat hai.

M- kya!?

BOTH OF THEM GET OUT OF BED AND RUN TO GET DRESSED AND LEAVE FOR THE HOSPITAL.

PRECAP: oh uh… u have to wait

SO GUYS YEH LIJIYE CS AUR ISKE SAATH PRT 1 BILKHUL MUFT. THIS WAS HOW MUCH I CULD RITE I KNOW IT WAS SHORT BUT PLZ JUST GIVE ME TIME I PROMISE TO MAKE IT LONGER THE NEXT TYME. PLZ PRESS D LIKE BUTTON IF U LIKED IT AND PLZ DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS ABOUT HOW U LYKED THIS PART. AND IF U WANT MORE ROMANTIC SCENES THEN PLZ LET ME KNOW SO IN MY NEXT PART I'LL PUT MORE ROMANTIC SCENES. SINCE DIS ONE DIDN'T HAD THAT MANY. BUT PLZ DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS IT WILL MOTIVATE ME TO RITE THE NEXT PART. Till then bye and tc.

LUV

JIA

CUMING UP NEXT ARE:

ARMAAN AUR RIDDHIMA KI KAHANI

MAYANK/NUPUR AUR SAMRAT/GUNJAN KI KAHANI

KUCH AJEEB SI KISMAT

AND

KYA HAI HUMARI PEHCHAAN

first of all

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jia di....... 🤗 u finally updated!!!! 😲 😲 😲
I loved d CS esp rahul's one!!!!!!!!!!! 😛 😛 😛
now d cuming to part one it was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
a bit short though! ok I wanted to read more!!!! *sheepishly grins* 😳
I loved d sweet AR moments!!! reminded my of "those" times!!!! 😊 😊 😊
d RM scene was also cute!!! wanna read more...........do cont soon!!! 😊

luv Adz!

gr8 part