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Posted: 15 years ago
oye mera reply kahan hai?? 😡😆
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Originally posted by: coolvini4u

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check page no. 28..........but gve me a suggestion...shud i post a short update as there is nothing to write coz next part thr will be aR meet.......

this part is short.....coz its totally armaan's POV>...i dont understand shud i stretch it or not?plzzzz gve me suggestion...
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check page no. 28..........but gve me a suggestion...shud i post a short update as there is nothing to write coz next part thr will be aR meet.......

this part is short.....coz its totally armaan's POV>...i dont understand shud i stretch it or not?plzzzz gve me suggestion...

woh nae yaar .. mene 29 page par last me ek post ki woh...... 😆😆

and yaar, tu dono parts ko merge nae kar sakti kya? like bahut jyada long ho jayega toh bhi koi prob nae ..we are always waiting for it....😆.. but agar u r posting short part toh fir long part kal-parso tak pakka se post kar dena yaar.. just waiting for AR to meet soon.. and ....😉😆
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Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Ankita !!

u came back ... lol. .please please jaldi update karna .. m so waiting for you to continue it soon...

love
Vini



ya came back..actually did not go anywhere..😆😆

busy with studies but then again i was in a fix how to characterise armaan.kyunki serial mein mera armaan itna rota hain...woh dekhne ke baad mujhe usse koi losse character dikhane ka mann nahin karta......so i have to think a lottttttttt regarding his character and finally i have portrayed his character....

and regarding update ok i promise i will update within 5 days after everyone's comment......and next part surely be AR meet....i will make sure u guys get enough dose of AR in every part from now on....will make sure so that i can b able to put hotttttt hotttttttttt scenes ......and i need some encouragement which actually missing....😉
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ok my dear lovely people,plz dont kill me for making you wait....actually i was very worried to create armaan character...i mean i was feeling hurt to portray armaan as a absolutel playboy...coz in serial he bears so much torture and besides many of you rqsted not to show armaan as a playboy...so here i am with his POV..i did not know if u guys will like it or not...after thinking a lotttt i have given a logical deduction to his character.....and regarding sid, i will make sure that armaan punch him and kicks him out of my FF....i so wanted this thing to happen in soap but agar soap mein naa sahi toh fir mere FF mein hi sahi...😆😆..no offence to KW..he is a sweetheart...i just disliek sid....and plzzzz bug me for upadte...u know i am very muchh lazy to write...so if u guys bug then i can atleast try 2 give update sooonish...😆

PART#4

"Rahul,look at armaan,he is drunk beyond measure.we need to do something."Nikki worriedly informed rahul who was busy in sending sms in his phone.

Rahul looked at armaan reluctantly and again got himself busy in sending sms.

Being agitated,nikki gave a smack on rahul's neck and said angrily,"for God's sake,can't you see that his life is at stake?we are his friends and we need to help him out from this disorder."

"and nikki,what can we do yaar?we are trying for that since long.but everything is vain.Everything in his life is at sixes and sevens but we can't do anything for him because he never understands his own good.tell me how can we help him???"rahul exclaimed helplessly as he stood up from his seat.

Looking at armaan,he told nikki,"look at him , he is staggering but still he is gulping down glasses after glasses of vodka and how shamelessly dancing with that b****?i just cant see these things.neither I can see nor I can say these things to muskaan.i ...i really don't understand yaar what to do.i am too helpless to help my friend.i don't know what is wrong with him?i don't know how I will watch out that my best friend is drowning himself in deluge?" A drop of tear trickled down from his eyes as he let go off his emotions for his closest friend to another close friend of him.

Nikki kept an assuring hand on his shouder and said that everything will be fine.

"I still believe that there will be someone who will come into his life and learn him the meaning of life.who will stand by his side and and take him from the dusk to dawn of his life.just wait and watch rahul.raat ke bad subah toh zaroor hoga.i hope the day is not too far."nikki said dreamily.

"Though I really don't know about that but I still pray to god that your words come true."rahul told nikki hugging her.

"now let's take him to the hotel.We need to catch tomorrow flight at evening , remember?yeh mahashay toh subah ke barah baje uthenge.so we need to pack his things up like everytime."

"I know yaar."nikki smiled as they shared a moment of joy between them.


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"oh my god,abhi??you are here.i so wanted you to be present in this party.i so missed you dear."riddhima exclaimed in joy after running towards door as she saw abhi standing with a bouquet of flower at the door.

reciprocating the hug,abhi said,"how can I miss my best friend's success party?this is for you dear."abhi said after handing over the bouquet.

He then met everyone in that party including atul-anjali,sapna-amit,muskaan and Dr. shashank and other guests too.

"I am so happy that you can make it to my party.actually I was missing you so badly but I thought you might be busy with seminar so you can't make it.but now my success is complete in real meaning as my all loving people are here." Riddhima said.

Abhi rased his eyebrow and asked,"Are you sure that your all loving people is present here?"

"yeah,who else?"riddima asked surprisedly.

"Well, I know about someone whose name start with A,I think HE is not present here or HE is present?only difference is that HE is in your dream,in your heart,in your mind?"abhi teased her mercilessly.

Riddhima turned various sheds of red as abhi hit her weakness.but then again,after gaining composure,she whisper in abhi's ears,"please abhi for god's sake,DO NOT spil the bean yaar otherwise I have to go through a session of questions and a long and lengthy lecture."

"ok baba ok.don't worry,I am not going to tease you now.chill babes."abhi winked.

Their chit-chat got interrupted when they heard Dr. Shashank's voice from the stage.every eye turned towards him as the spotlight fell on him.

"Ladies and gentleman,today is the best day of my life as my favourite daughter has gifted me the most beautiful moment by winning one of the most prestigious award in her life.it is the start for me to witness the resurge of her career.and being the obedient daughter , riddhima is, she always tried to make us happy without any expectation from us.but I need to admit that you are the best daughter in this whole world.i know I have been able to give you nothing compared to the happiness that you have given us but beta trust me I always wanted your happiness , nothing else.i know in that process I might have given pressure on you but still I wanna say that whatever I have done is just for your good.there was nothing else."shashank's voice quivered and tears start falling from his eyes.

Riddhima ran towards her father.hugging her tightly , she said,"don't say anything papa.i know.i know that sometime you guys forced me to do something but it does not mean that you people don't love me.you people love me and I want nothing more than that."

The guests present in the party burst into clapping after witnessing the bond between father-daughter.

"Enjoy people."Dr.shashank said before coming down from the stage.

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The bright ray of sun peeped through the curtain and armaan woke up only to find that nikki and rahul packing his stuffs.he kept his hand on his forehead as his head was aching like hell.

"take that disprin with the glass of water.its good for your hang-over."nikki suggested ponting the glass on the table beside her bed.

Armaan took it without uttering a single word and said avoiding any eye-contact with rahul-nikki,"kal raat kuch zyada hi ho gaya?isn't it?"

"Is it something new that u r asking?its your normal daily routine.at first getting drunk,then dancing shamelessly and then stammering and then sleeping without removing dress."rahul and nikki said in an angry tone.

"I know.i am sorry for that."

"how many times will you say sorry armaan.its not just one day matter.it happens everyday and we are tired of listening sorry.change yourself otherwise forget us."nikki added exasperatedly.

"nikki yaar,now you are going overboard."

"No armaan,nikki is absolutely right.you never understand what you should do and what you should not do.you are behaving like a scoundrel."rahul said angrily.

"you have crossed all the limit dude.please don't force me to say something which you don't like.or rather I should say that I should leave this room."

"don't shout at rahul,armaan.he is absolutely right.and if you leave we cannot do ur rest of the packing.so just stay here and pack ur stuff.we are leaving."

Rahul and nikki left armaan's room without saying a single word.

"Riddhima ! Riddhima ! Riddhima !"Armaan punched the wall in anger and frustration.

"The name can never be removed from my mind and soul.and her effect is growing rapidly.not only in india, but also in USA she is showing her effect.What a shameless and clever girl she is !"Armaan clenched her hair after caressing his hands through it.

Taking out the wallet from his pocket,he caressed a picture of a girl around eight yrs,with thick frame spectacle and ponytail.a drop of tear trickle down from her eyes.

Armaan said in a husky voice," You have caused a great harm to everyone,I will make sure so that no one can be affected by you in near future.RIDDHIMA GUPTA u can make fool everyone but not me,ARMAAN MALIK.you have snatched everyone from me-my sister,my parents , my friends but I will make sure so that u cant cause anymore harm to my family.You have done enough ruin but no more riddhima,no more.i will make sure of it.i can never forgot what damage u have done to me.u have ruined me totally.loving you was my mistake riddhima.why riddhima why you have done this to me?why?i have never been able to forget that day. i am unable to forget to that KISS Riddhima.i always loved you riddhima.i was always after you because I loved your character,your sweetness,your feelings and your caring attitude towards everyone.But what have you done to me Riddhima?u cheated me! You reciprocated the kiss,even you showed that you love me but then you again went to kiss that sid.i saw you in that sid's arms.how dare you Riddhima , how dare you?i know that you know that our marriage was fixed.then how could you do that Riddhima?from then onwards,I knew that you belong to me.We were children then but still the feelings of that kiss is fresh in my mind,in my soul.i can still feel your soft lips Riddhima.You know riddhima , I have kissed so many girls after that but no! nothing can remove that feelings.You were always special to me.i know I used to say bad because of your dressing sense but still I loved you ,I loved you for whatever you are.in last nineteen years , there is not one day when I did not remember you.May be I still love you.But I can never forget that you cheat on me.and you have to pay for it Riddhima,You have to pay for it.Goddamn Riddhima,how could you do that?why do you affect me so much?why I can't forget you?"he threw the wallet towards the wall.

"i will make sure that your life becomes a living hell after marrying me.You know na Armaan malik never forget his promise."Armaan smirked after removing the drop of tear from his cheeks.


phew!!!!!!!!!!!!!! part4 is up...........i hope i can live upto ur expectations........and next part AR MEET....till then bear this torture......i know this part is short but plz dont throw rotten tomatoes toward me./...i will amke sure next part is long enough and AR meets..😆😆



Edited by ankita_ksg - 15 years ago
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Ankitaaaaaaaaaaaa 🤗

wow !! that was a 180 degree change in armaan's character.. never expected this change atleast ..
Ridz cheated him for sid ? Is Armaan crazy ?? How can he believe that even ?? and why the hell is he blaming the innocent soul for snatching away his family n everything? WHY? ...

I just hope he clarifies his misunderstandings soon. ... I want him to recognize the real Ridz.. .Did he not trust her that much .. ? I wonder wat ll happen when ridz ll come out to know about it.. Hope everything turns out well and the best for AR.. 😳

You have really written soo nicely and given a logical reason for Armaan's behaviour too.. Justs hope sab theek ho jaye..

Cnt Soon..

Love
Vini
Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_ksg



ya came back..actually did not go anywhere..😆😆 ...yaar gayab ho gayi thi na...toh mene socha kahin tu underground toh nae ho gayi ... u see "Update Soon" wali dhamkiyan are not good for health na......🤣

busy with studies but then again i was in a fix how to characterise armaan.kyunki serial mein mera armaan itna rota hain...woh dekhne ke baad mujhe usse koi losse character dikhane ka mann nahin karta......so i have to think a lottttttttt regarding his character and finally i have portrayed his character....

oh.. hows ur studies going now?? and yeah, i can understand ..dnt talk abt serial ..i dnt watch it now ... infact, i almost stopped watching TV 😆... and mera armaan !! ohooooooo ......hoooooooooo...*hoots* n *whistles* 😲🤣

and regarding update ok i promise i will update within 5 days after everyone's comment......and next part surely be AR meet....i will make sure u guys get enough dose of AR in every part from now on....will make sure so that i can b able to put hotttttt hotttttttttt scenes ......and i need some encouragement which actually missing....😉

dats perfect !! it ll give u time too ... 😃... and ohoooooo..so much dose of AR...wow!! 😍😳... m so waiting for it... and ofcourse yaar, v r there na to encourage you...... 🤗😃

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hey Ankita... welcome back hun.. finally u made it.. :)
and part was awesome.. luved the A-R-N bond even though Armaan was acting like a jerk.. but he is still a sweatheart... <3 and Abhi-Ridz bond as well.. glad to know tht they r gud friends..
awwwww the last part... woowwww so Armaan luvs Ridz.....😳😛👏 but wht happened... OMG tht sid is in ur ff tooo.... godd... why why why????? cant we have some peaceful love story of AR without him... uuggghhh anywayzzz its kk cuz as u said Armaan will give him a peace of mind in ur ff sooo itzz totally ok with me.. :)😛
and plzzz plzzzz update soon the next part and make AR meet.... and plzzz plzzz clear the misunderstanding.... cuz DMG is already giving lots ofbad days sooo... :)
thanxx for the pm and it was a great part to see the change in Armaan and the reason of his behaviour... :)
Take care :)
Preet <3
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yes even i stopped watchign the soap.its ridiculous.......DMG sucks big tym now a days.....😡

bas GEET dekhti hoon which is going gud....😊

ya mera armaaan naa????i luv armaan....kash mere paas armaan jaisa koi hota......😳

and regarding studies....dont ask me...tooo muchh pressure.......

and encouragement...i saw how u encourage richa in her thread...😆😆

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Anku darling My Armaan is gem nd more over he can destroy himself but never let her hurt from any one .
Thats why he is Armaan Malllik.................
Ridhima such a cute soul (in dmg 1) could not harm a fly than Armaan..no way plz.clear this secret soon.

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

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