'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 10

awesome part.
nice story line.
so sayank r totally freaked out by morena...
bt i felt samrat's character is a bit strange...
m i right in my thinking that samrat thoda mysterious hai out of the four?
like his behaviour towards gunji,his convo with mayank where he suddenly seems lost
well interesting toh bohot hai
cant wait for next part

res 😉

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OMG! ur such a GR8 writer........I've read almost all ur FFs!!!
I like ur work a lot! ⭐️
I loved d update! I'm really liking dis FF! I wonder wat had happened tht Gunur landed up in hospital! 😕 nd where did mayu vanish??? 😕 I really loved d flashback.....at 1st I was shocked tht mayur got sajan married only for d baby..... 😲 but I loved d Sajan scenes! can u add mre sajan scenes! (M so selfish) 😆

Luv Adya! 🤗 u can also call me Adz! 😉

nice concept

cont soon i want to know y sam is behaving like this in the end?? wht happen in morena???

hey san!!!!!!

u r just awesome yaar!!
akhir aisa kya hua tha morena me???????????
aw! then when will samrat start loving gunjan???

ur FF is sooo confusing yaar!!
m waiting eagerly to know what happened in morena!!
plzz do cont sooooonnnn
m waiting
muuah!

wow sana awesomeee part..

Loved it to the core yaar..

loved the gunur part n SaJan part..😳

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

awww sana .......horror ke saath saath mystery suspence confusion sabkuch hai tumhaari ff mein ...........i loved d update ........arrey waah .........itna lamba aur badaa update maine kabhi socha hi nahi tha ........

concept ko bhi full 10 on 10 ok .........i cannot say how damn excited i am about this ff ........

ab samjhi ......mayur donot have a child .....and mayur want a child so they see a way out in samrat ........

sam loves his bhai n bhabhi so will do anything 4 them ......

so sajan marriage ......

bholi bhaali gunjan is unaware of all this .......

sajan ka jo 1st child hoga sam will hand over 2 mayur ......

samrat has not yet thought about his own married life ........

yipppeeeeeeee😃

i know i have got all the facts right !!!!!!

true na ....????

well once agsin loved the concept story everythingy .......so do pm me .......this ff has surpassed all ur fanfics ..............awesomeeeeeeeee

thnx 4 pm ....n do pm me .....😉

regs,

neeru

awwwwwwwwww im glad u loved the stroy line as well as the part well to ur more excitment this is just start the real pic will startt when they go morena ahh well cant say anything now just keep waiting for my update which will be soon hope so.

awesomeeeeeee updt dear..
mindblowinggg..
loved it.
cont soon

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

awwwwwwwwww im glad u loved the stroy line as well as the part well to ur more excitment this is just start the real pic will startt when they go morena ahh well cant say anything now just keep waiting for my update which will be soon hope so.

thanx for such a sweet comment

keep commenting

lots of love

sanu