'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 8

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Hi hello guys,

Ahem ahem

Here comes my first part of my 8^th FF which I have dedicated to my two janu's DOLLY N SUSH

I hope u guys will love it plz do read n comment n criticize

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Part 1

Sam's pov

I slowled down my car n stopped it near a flower shop an took nupur bhabhi's n chashmish's flower s as I do everyday'.it did not took me long to take as it was readly prepared n kept by the shopper for me because I take the flowers every day from here I paid the shopkeeper an took the flowers n came n sat in car n started driving again'

"zindagi bhi kitni ajeeb ho gayi hain jisse mujhe propose karte hua red flowers dena chaiye tha aaj uss ka lliye "GET WELL SOON" ka flowers dena pad raha hain haan sahi sunna aap logon nah get well soon ka "'main aaj bhi nahi bhula hoon woh raat jab chashmish aur bhabhi he suddenly stopped the car n signed heavely as he came near hospital'he came out of car and started walking in n stopped near a room n open the room smilingly''n said

"Hi bhabhi chashmish kaise ho aap logh" now we can finally see 2 beds on which gunjan n nupur shergill r slept wearing a breathing mask an many wires attach to them of any big big machines an their face as pale as ever in their hospital dress the nurse smile seeing sam coming inn as he daily do so'.

N:sir aap aa gaye

S:koi sudhar (he asked with full hopes in his eyes)

N:no sir aap rooz ek hi sawal puchte hain kyun

S:khair chodiye yeh sab hmm main in sa kuch akela main baat karna chata hoon

The nurse shaked her head in disbeleave as it happen every day he say the same thing an she goes out god only know what he talk with them'..

He went upto gunjan an sat beside him tears started mke their way out of his eyes..

S:"mujhe maaf kardo chashmish plz mujhe maaf kardo yeh sab kaise hua kyun hua kya hua main ab tak pata nahi laga paya tum..tum janti ho nah main tum sa kitna pyaar karta hoon plz mera khatir ek baar uth jao plz dekho main promise karta hoon tum jaise hi thik hogi hum London wapis chali jainga plz chashmish uth jao nah plz "he started crying like anything*I LOVE U CHASHMISH" he cried again seeing no response from her "don't u love me god dam answer me chashmish don't u love me bolo chashmish bolo"

He got up a cried silently he do this every day chashmish never responded back y..???he did not got anything he went upto nupur n sat beside her''..

S:bhabhi aap toh kuch boliye aap bolingi toh hi main MAYANK BHAI ko dhundh paunga nah plz bhabhi utiye nah boliye uss raat kya hua tha jab main ghar main nahi tha kaha hain bhai kya hua unhain aap ko unki koi parwa nahi hain kya plz aap bolti kyun nahi bhai bahut preshani main honga plz humain unhain dhundh nah hain boliye bhabhi ankhain kholiye boliye (he started shaking nupur harshly doc came into the room running an stopped from doing so n took him out of room)

He started crying falling on knees like anything "kyun KYUN hua mera saath aisa ek raat main hi meri duniya badal gayi mera pyaar meri chashmish aur meri bhabhi zindagi aur maut sa lad rahi hain aur mera bhai mera bhai kahin nahi mil raha khaha hain kaisa hain kuch maloom nahi kyun hua yeh mera saath aisa kyun..????????"

D:samrat beta utho c'mon get up(he made him stand straight an took him into his room n made him sit n gave water to drink)

D:r u fine now (sam nodded in positive)tum roz yehi harkat karte ho sam yeh sab karna ka bajaye tum wapas London kyun nahi chale jate

S:kya bakwaas kar rahain hain aap jante hain ki uss raat hadse ka baad chashmish aur nupur bhabhi ki yeh halth ho gayi hain bhai mil nahi rahe hain aur sab sa badi baat yeh hain ki jab bhi maina bhabhi aur chashmish ko London le jaana cha koi nah koi problem aa hi gayi kabhi flight delay ho gayi toh kabhi cancel toh kabhi hum terrific main phas gaye aap toh jante hain nah yeh sab''..

D:janta hoon par har baar gunjan nupur tumhare saath hoti thi tum akele London jaa kar kyun nahi dekhte

S:nahi''. nahi jaunga main apne parivaar ko chodh kar kabhi nahi jaunga chaiye mujhe kuch bhi kyun nah karna pade par main mayank bhai nupur bhabhi chashmish sab ko le kar hi jaunga LONDON'

D:jaisi tumhari marzi but gunjan nupur thik hongain iss ki garenti nahi hain u knew it shayad tumhain zindagi bhar in ka intezaar karna pade

S:karunga chaye kuch bhi ho jaye karunga

By saying so he went out of hospital taking a glimpse of gunjan n nupur n sat in car drove back to his other bunglow he went in to his room got freshen up n change into night suit n sat on the aram chair

S:"mayank bhai chashmish aur nupur bhabhi yeh sab suffer kar rahe hain kyun kuch pata nahi mayank uss raat sa gayab hain aur bhabhi aur gunjan hospital main hain yeh sab kyun hua kya hua maina pata laganah ki bahut koshish ki sab sa badi baat yeh hain ki main jab bhi woh ghar jahan hum honeymoon ka liye rukha tha dhundh nah nikala hoon kabhi nahi dhudhon paya hoon can u beleave it morena sa ek bangla gayab hain who'. woh bungla main kabhi nahi dhundh paya kyun..??????akhir bungla gaya kahan aur use raat aisa hua kya ki yeh sab ho gaya kash main bhi wahi hota toh shayad yeh sab kuch nahi hota but jab sab ko kuch nah kuch hua hain toh mujhe kyun nahi kuch kyun ki main ghar main nahi tha isiliye..????but dam ghar gayab kahan ho gaya "

"Jab mujhe bhabhi aur cashmish ki khabar mili main direct hospital gaya n jab ghar dhundhnah shuru kara mayank ko dhundhnah shuru kara toh koi nahi mile"

:Sab sa badi baat jab hui jab maina police walo ko address diye woh dam stupid logh keht hain aisa koi farm house hi nahi tha aur nah hi aisi koi jagh hain morena main aur mer pass bhi koi sabut nahi tha yeh prove karna ki aisa koi bungla hain yeh THA"

"Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aya mayank ka saath saath pura bungle kaise gayab ho gaya akhir yeh sab hain kya mujhe yahan ana hi nahi chaiye tha honey moon pa"

"1 mahina ho chukka hain yeh sabkuch ho kar"(he closed his eyes n started shaking his aram chair)

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Sajan's marriage night

Mayur

N:mayank tumhain lagta nahi ki humnah sam ka saath kuch na insafi ki hain

M:nahi

He said without looking up as he was typing something on computer an this question is not so rare for him to answer as she ask the same question everyday n he answer it in same way every day'..

N:mayank

M:plz nupur c'mon yaar stop it joh bhi kiya hum nah thik kiya aur jab sam ko koi problem nahi hain toh phir tum kyun itna pareshaan ho rahi ho

N:gunjan ka kya use kaise lagega jab use pata chalega ki uska pati ko use pyaar nahi sirf BACCHA chaiye

M:nupur tum aisa kyun sochti ho gunjan bahut acchi aur bholi ladki hain

N:exactly hum uska bholepan ka fayda utha rahe hain mayank

Mayank kept his laptop aside n made nupur sat on his lap

M:nupur tum bhool gayi kya hamari shaadi ki sab sa pehli sharth kya thi gunjan sa

N:nahi kaise bhool sakti hoon rishte ka time logh ladki ka khubsurti dekhte hain qualification puchte hain aur humnah kya pucha kya tum shaadi ka 1 mahina main hi maa bana chogi

M:relax nupur par gunjan nah toh kaha tha nah use koi problem nahi hain

N:hmm but hum self fish hain

M:kaise

N:samrat aur gunjan ko sirf bacche ka liye yeh sab karwa rahe hain'''

M:nupur dekhnah dhire dhire dono main bahut jaldh pyaar ho jayega aur waise bhi koi aur ladki itni jaldi maa nahi bana cha rahi thi takriban 50 ladkiyon ko humnah reject kar diya

Nupur got up from his lap

N:aur yeh sab hota bhi nahi agar humain baccha nahi chaiye hota main kabhi maa nahi ban sakti iss wajah sa samrat ko gunji jaisi ladki sa shaadi karna pada joh uski type ki nahi hain(a tear escaped from her eye)

M:offo nupur tum bahut sochti ho relax aaj unki suhaag raat hain im sure sab thi ho jayega(he said wiping her tear)

N:par''

M:shh''..(he said keeping a finger on her lips)kyun nah aaj hum bhi hamari phir ek baar pahli raat mana le

N:dhat(by saing so she pushed mayank)

Mayank came close to nupur n kissed her on her neck making her hair back she shivered on his touch like he touched her first time mayank smiled at that''.

He made her see in his eyes turning her around he kissed her on her lips like 5 min than he broke the kiss nupur shyed n hugged mayank tightly mayank opened the dori of her blouse nupur tighten her grip on mayank shirt''''.

Mayank kissed on her left side neck n nupur freed mayank n was about to go when mayank caught her hand n kissed it nupur again closed her eyes in passion'..

He went kissing her hand to the neck an than kissed on her cheek n took her into his arms n made her ly on bed n kissed her again on her lips than slowly removed her pallu n gave her love bite on left arms n ahem ahem lights off''.(lolz)

Sam entered his room sliently an went upto his cupboard an took his clothes n went ito washroom without seeing towards his bed on gunji was sitting in bride attire'..

Gunji was shock byhis act n felt like crying is arrange marriages r like this y it is like this is samrat is not happywith this marriage'.?????

Sam came out of wash room n without uttering a word lyed down on bed beside gunji n acted as if he was sleeping'''

Gunji felt bad really bad but did not uttera word an went into wash room to get change n came out n stood near window seeing moon''..

"kya maina shaadi karka thik kiya kya hamara rishta sirf ek bacche ka liye hain'' kar bhi kya sakti thi meri shaadi nahi ho rahi bolkar mom dad kitna pareshan tha if main in(mayur) ki sharth maan kar shaadi nahi karti toh shayad meri shadi kabhi nahi hoti par mera saath aisa kyun hua shaadi hui so hui ek samjhote par hui KYUN..?????"

Gunji came upto bed an slept beside samrat at night she started sneezing which irritated to samrat like anything'

S:god dam it tum kabhi AC main nahi soyi kya (he shouted in anger)

G:nahi(gunji said in low n scared voice)

S:shit gawar ladki(by saying so he reduced AC coolness by remote n slept)

Gunjan wanted to reply him but kept quit thinking it is wrong to fight with her husband on suhaagraat'..!!!!!!!

Mayur

Nupur slowly opened her eyes to find mayank arms wrapped around her an seeing this she smiled an than she remember last night a blushed deep red''

M:itna blush math karo samrat dekhega toh bahut chidayega tumhain

N:mayank tum..tum uthe hua ho aur tumhari akhain toh bandh hain tumhain kaise pata chala ki main blush karrahi hoon

M:nupur tum kya kab karti ho yeh mujhe khuli ankhon sa dekhna ki zarurat nahi hain samjhi

N:ohho filmy dialogues marna chodho mujhe'mujhe jana hain

M:flimy dialogues mera pyaar tumhain natak lag raha hain nahi(he said freeing her from his grip an acting fakely like his is hurted)

N:shut up mayank tumhara natak bahut acche sa janti hoon main

M:janti ho toh de doh nah plz

N:no

M:tum khudh pyar sa de do warna main zabaradast le lunga

N:nahi dungi

M:accha

He got up from bed n started walking towards her n she started backing off'..

N:mayank fine fine dungi ankhain banh karo

M:pakka dogi nah

N:pakka

He closed his eyes an when he did not feel the kiss heopened his eyesto findno one in theroom

M:dam it shetrapped me miss nupur shergill agar maina bhi aaj kiss nahi liya nah toh mera naam bhi mayank shergill nahi (by saying so he went into washroom to take bath)

Nupur came down smiling thinking about n she was sure he will not leave her until hetake the kiss'

She stopped on the spot seeing gunji in the kitchen

N:arry tum uth gayi lagta hain kal raat tum soyi hi nahi

Gunji just got shock from her question

G:hmm woh (gulping a bit)

N:offo ghabrao mathmain tum sa tumhare personal batain nahi puchungi

Gunji just smiled theystarted preparing breakfast when nupur asked suddenly which she wanted to ask from so back

N:tum iss shaadi sa khush toh ho nah I mean samrat aur tum kal

G:''''..(gunji stood numb not knowing what to answer)

N:kya hua tum chup kyun ho kuch bol kyun nahi rahi sab thik hainah tumhare aur samrat ka baach

S:sab kuch thik hain

Sam said coming into the kitchen n took a water of bottle from the fridge gunji signed in relief she hate saying lies..

N:thank god main toh uhi pareshaan ho rahi thi

M:ofcource leti hi rehti ho isiliye tumhari tabiyat baar baar kharab ho jati

S:well mujhe tabiyat kharab nahi balki bahut acchi lag rahi hain bhabhi ki kyun bhabhi kya hua kal raat

He said winking at gunji she got shock but smiled in relief thinking he is happy with their marriage but thought y reacted strange last night''..??????

M:chup kar samrat warna thapad khayega well aisa kuch nahi hui joh kalraat tera aur gunjan ka beech nahi hui

Sajan blushed unknownly Sammy blushed first time in life

M:omg nupur dekho toh samrat life mainpehli baar blush kar raha hain

N:haan wahi toh ab bas bahut ho gaya mera devar ko itna math satao mayank chalo breakfast karte hain

M:nupur tum bhi nah kabhi mera saath nahi deti samrat tumhain itna satatahain phir bhi

S:bhai bhabhi ko mera khilaf math bhadkaye bhabhi mujhsa bahut pyaar karti hain aap ki kabhi nahi sunagi

M:tujhe toh

He ws about to hit him

N:mayank samrat idar aao nasta kha loh aur gunjan tum bhi aao

Samrat winked at mayank an went with gunjan n nupur in dinning room mayank first was shock but than smiled as it was daily thing to happen in his house..!!!!

Sayank n gunji were doing breakfast n nupur was serving them

M:samrat

S:hmm

M:maina aur nupur nah tumhare aur gunjan ka liye honeymoon ki tickets book karwayi hain Switzerland ka (sam started coughing)

S:what..

N:yeh kyun koi problem hain kya

S:haan

N:kya problem haan

S:main aur gunjan akela nahi jayainga

N:kyun'

S:kyun ki aap aur bhai ko bhi saath ana hoga

Gunji looked at him in shocksh thought he would never go on homeymoon but y he is doing this all thing ohgod everything is out of her hand dam..

M:hum

S:haan kyun ki aap dono shaadi ka ek saal ho gaye hain but aaj tak honey moon nahi gaye

M:sam but office

S:offo don't give me un reason excuse plz

N:but..

S:no ifs no buts u guys r coming or else I will not go

M:fine

N:what fine

M:we will go waise bhi sam is right (he said winking at her)

S:oyye hoyye

The three some smiled

Gunji was really feeling out of pic DAM..!!!!!!!

N:thik hain jayainga but MORENA

S:m:MORENA nahi nahi ja sakte

N:kyun

M:aisa hi bas

N:no way mayank mujhe morena hi jana hain aur waise bhi it is our farviout spot right than y not

S:hmm bhabhi woh gunjan ko pasand nahi ayega nah

N:gunjn ko kyun nahi pasand ayega I m sure she will love it kyun gunjan

G:jee

N:dekha that's final we r going morena tomm

Sayank looked at each other n kept quit gunji noticed that n thought there n unkown fear something in their eyes'''

After doing breakfast in

Nupur was floding her clothes when mayank slilently came in n hugged her from back n kissed on her cheek''..

M:hi jaan

N:hellohi chodh packing main help karo we r going tonight

M:aaj hi

N:haan c'mon

Mayank stood shock

N:aaj ka baad hamari life badal jayegi

M:shayad kuch ankhi raaz bhi khul jayainga(he said in his mind)

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Gunjan was standing near window still confuse by sam behaviour went samrat came inn n went upto gunji n stood beside her when he looked at her he got mesmerized by her beauty the sun rays were enchanting her white milky skin n she was glowing in golden colour he was so lost that he got fallen down bumping into side table as he was backing off

Gunji started laughing like anything her laugh was giving an unknown happiness in his eyes n her laugh voice was as sweet as honey he thought

Gunji immidately shut up thinking sam may not like her laughing an stood quit sam noticed the uneasiness n got up from floor

S:hmm gunjan wo..woh im sorry joh bhi kal raat hua I should have not shouted at u

G:tum iss shaadi sa khush nhi ho kya

He asked gathering all courage she has n waited to hear YES

S:NO..!!!

G:NO' phir kal raat

S:wo..woh toh mera dost ka saath main race haar gaya ghar ate waqt tumhare ghar sa isiliye main gussa main tha if tumsa baat karta toh hamari ladayi ho jaye bolkar I dd not talk to u now im fine

G:oh I thought u r not happy with marriage

S:y I would be u r so beautyfull

Gunji shy

S:hayye mar dala

He said keeping hand on his..gunji blushed even more

Just than mayank enter the room

M:sam

S:yes bhai kya hua bhabbhi ka saath ladyi yeh bhabhi ko koi gift dena hain yeh bhabhi ka saath romance karna naya idea chaiye

M:sam shut up we need to talk

He said dam serious

S:ok im coming (they talked by eyes n gunji noticed that mayank left saying he is waiting for him on terras)

G:samrat

S:hmm

G:koi problem hain kya

S:matlab

G:nahi tum aur mayank bhai jab sa moren ki baat chali hain alag behave kar rahe ho kyun

S:aisa kuch hainn tum bhi khama kha bhabhi ki tarah tense ho rahi ho aur waise r u ready for our honey moon

G:kya

S:honey moon

M:SAMRAT'''''.

S:aya bhai..offo bhai will no leave me until he talk to e anyways u keep dreaming wht all we willdo on honey moon main abhi aya

He went upto door turn back n winked at her than smiled gunji was first shocked but than she too smiled'.

S:I hope this marriage work out n I can be able to give a child to bro n bhabhi (sam thought n went to meet mayank)

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Samrat enter teras to find a tense mayank he went an kept a hand on shoulder

S:I know bhai aap kya soch rahe hain

M:morena jana thik nahi hain

S:but kyun bhai

M:kyun kit u ahi janta kyun

S:bhai plz maina joh hua use yaad nahi karna chata

M:but kyun

S:aap nahi jante

M:ok yaad math kar but bhool bhi math im saying u we should not go

S:fine phir jaa kar bhabhi aur gunjan ko sab bold eta hain

M:what nonsense teri shaadi tot jayegi phir

S:I don't care

M:ok fine we r going morena but dontforget for just a week we r going

S:ok but bhai morena main aisa hua kyat ha

M:mazak chodhc'mon lets go

Mayank went

S:but sach main morena main hua kyat ha n what we just talked

He said to himself n stood shock n confuse not knowing what they talked or what he said'''.

Loads of love,

Sanu.😊