Pyaar I-M-Possible(ammy-ridzi, mayur)FF pt31-pg110 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago

@devina-achoose-shaffy-mayurati

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(sorry i dunno sum of ur names )
thanks guys for reading n commentin... 🤗

pls, do cont to comment so tht i knw ur liking it 🤔😳

Luv
Ritu
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful.....update...dear luved mayur scene..it was superb...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ritu.....
do continue sooooon this time....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read part 28

lovely part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 15 was awesum

Happy tht story is progressing really well
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Posted: 14 years ago

@night-dreamer, thanks dear 😳

@amaukhi, yups will cont soon 😳
@sariska, i hope u read pg 30 too. thanks 😳
@krazy4kash, reserved??? bt thanks for readin 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 15

@Morning'..

Nupur: *wakes up, sits dwn, eyes close, yawns, opens eyes' and is 😲😲😲* where am I?????????????? *finds herself in a mini-cute-boat..middle of the water, no one to be seen* HELLO? Is this a dream?
Mayank: nopes! *standing right behind her*
Nupur: *turns n looks at him* u..u..are...Mayank? what..? where are we? *panic*
Mayank: I guess'we are on a boat! *Innocently*
Nupur: I can see that too but how..how did we land up in here?
Mayank: by feet *innocently* I mean'u were sleeping so I had to carry u
Nupur: 😲 whattttt???? Whyyyy?????
Mayank: because I always wanted to be with her this way, all alone'around nature..Just the two of us
Nupur: her'??????? 😕
Mayank: YOU!
Nupur: wait..wait..i am..just not getting u 😕 *confused*
Mayank: u never can get me or u just dont wanna get me? leave that' have some Tea? *starts to make tea*
Nupur: 😕 *still confused n dazzed looking at him*
Mayank: here u go! *gives her cup of tea*
Nupur: THANKS! *irritated*

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@Island

Ridzi: *yawns n gets up...doesn't find anyone around..all alone in tent* Nupurrr Dii????? Nutsss???? *goes out searching* Nutsss'Nupurrr diii'kandy'.Mayankkk'..Armannn Malikkk 😕
Ammy: did anyone take my name? I am here *sitting on top of a branch of a tree*
Ridzi: *looks up* U! where is everyone?
Ammy: went back to the hotel! *clicking pics of a bird n its nest on tree*
Ridzi: whhhatttt wenttttttt??????' how can they go like this??
Ammy: what do I know 😕 when I got up..no one was around'except this note *throws to her the note*
Ridzi: *reads note "we are goingsee u at hotel"* 😲 Nupur Di ? Nuts? How can u leave me alone with this idiot n go *cranky face*
Ammy: IDIOT????? WHY' are u scared of me? 🤔 *raises his eyebrow*
Ridzi: NO WAYS! 😳
Ammy: but I am scared of u.. *jumps down from the tree* main akela jawaan ladka n tum akeli jawaan ladki = darne ki baat'' hai na?? *just trying to irritate her*
Ridzi: SHUT UP! Dont talk rubbish..main tumare rape nai karungi
Ammy: how can I trust u???! :p
Ridzi: STOP KIDDING NOW'n TEMME WHERE IS EVERYONE?
Ammy: I said they are gone back to the hotel + I gave u proof also *note*.. and now I am leaving too sooooo' bye!
*packs his stuff in his bag and starts to go* u are coming?
Ridzi: NO! I'll wait for them! Not gonna fall for your stupid prank!
Ammy: cool! U can wait.. the whole day n night n night n day' BYE BYE!
*Ammy waves bye n goes while Ridzi sits there waiting*

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@Boat

Mayank: *looks at Nupur's face* I am sorry if I upset u! actually just saw this beautiful lil boat so thought to go back to hotel via the boat' n I brought u along' thought u would b surprised n happy! But I guess'u are not!
Nupur: Surprised? I was like shocked!
Mayank: *looks down making an upset face/disappointed face*
Nupur: but this was a very pleasant shock then any surprise! *big grin 😃 as she looks at the scenery around her (mayank included in the scenery)*
Mayank: *looks up at her n smiles seeing her smile*
Nupur: tea? Lemme make u sum tea now.. *makes tea n gives him* here
Mayank: thanks *sips*
Nupur: vaise main duniya ke.....sabse sabse sabse karaab chai bana lete ho..worst tea maker :p
Mayank: in that case, tum hi mujhe har subha tea'chai dena!
Nupur: aise kaise de sakhti ho'i am not your mom or wife! *says without realizing what she said* I mean'
Mayank: ??? *gives her a naughty expression* tho bann jao
Nupur: *blink blink* what mom?
Mayank: No the second option u gave...
Nupur: *cough cough* hey u knw real good hindi!...I am impressed! *changing topic* itne bhi videsi gawar nai ho !!! u wanna learn more?
Mayank: If u teach'okay..go on
Nupur: Ok say (mischievously) pakka phed pe paka papita'paka phed ya paka papita'pake phed ko pakde pinku'pinku pakde paka papita 😃
Mayank: p..pinku'pakka'pappu cant dance saala?
*Nupur laughs'while Mayank admires her laugh*

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*Ridzi starts to pack her stuff! Notices Nupur n Nuts have taken their bags 😕*
Ridzi: this means they have really left..leaving me ? 😲 Arman was not joking?
*takes her bag, goes n sits in a big passenger boat*

A Man comes n sits beside her: Hey'wassup?
Ridzi: *goes lil far n ignores him*
Man: u are alone?
Ridzi: huh? emm..err'*remembers kal-gunda events* NO! I am not alone
Man: u look alone n seem to be lost
Ridzi: NO! I am here with my..a..emm
Ammy: Hubby! 😉 *comes behind her n keeps his hand on Ridzi's shoulder..haq se n sits beside her*
Ridzi: *looks at him with wide open eyes* HUBBY'U?
Ammy: *nods yes* we are actually on our honeymoon
Ridzi: WHATTTTTTT?????
Man: Cool! Husband wife'and honeymoon! Gr88 place' enjoy! *man gets up n goes*
Ammy: Dont worry, Just wanted to chase this guy issliye keh raha tha'varna mere bhi itne bure din nai aai ke tumare sath honeymoon manana pade! *makes a weird face as if he is tied on a phassi*
Riddzi: SHUT UP!
Ammy: go far from me! itna paas paas bethongi tho kuch ho jayenga'then dont tell me! ;)
Ridzi: *goes far..irradiated* humara kuch nai ho sakhta!!!!!!!!

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@Mayur's boat

Nupur: so, now say' chandu ki chacha ne chandu ki chachi ko chandini raat mein'chandi ki chamchi se chutney chatai? 😛
Mayank: chandu chacha'chandini ko chuni? Ok u say ti voglio bene
Nupur: ????? whats that?
Mayank: its just "I love u"'''..in Italian
Nupur: huh *becomes quiet'lil shy*
Mayank: say say' say more!
Nupur: what?
Mayank: anything' Just Talk.. love to hear u speak
Nupur: *silent*
Mayank: Ok this one's dedicated to u'
Nupur: ?????????
Mayank: *starts to sing* Life was like a moonless night,
Shrouded in the stars,
Beauty can be such a fright,
But now you'
Nupur: *looking at him shocked n dreamily*
Mayank: *conts to sing looking in her eyes* But you are my life now
Can't you see
I'd cross oceans
I'd swim seas
Nupur: *joins singing* To be with you
That's enough for me.

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@AR's passenger boat

A random Girl to Ammy: Hey Handsome!
Ammy: Hi!!!!!!
Ridzi: oh no *holds her head*
Girl: *comes n sits b/w Ammy-Ridzi*
Ammy: I am...
Ridzi: harr ladki ka dil ka....Arman !!!
Ammy: Exactly..Arman...nam tho
Ridzi: suna hoga'!!!! Grrr..how typical
Arman: listen u, I can speak for myself *to Ridzi*
Girl: Arman! nice to met u! I am Katrina
Ammy: Katrina' awesome name
Ridzi: aisa nam tho pure duniya mein nai hai'"Katrina"'really awesome name *sarcastic*
Ammy: yups awesome name but not more awesome then u *says to Katrina* (PS: Ammy is a decent flirt not a jerk kinda bad flirt) u are sooo beautiful, Katrina.. I dint believe in Love at first sight'
Ridzi: 'until I met u? what a chessy line! dialogue kahin suna suna sa lag raha hai 😕
Ammy: I am not chessy 😲😡 dont call me chessy 😡 or''. 😡
Ridzi: or what? CHESSY CHEESY! :P *teasing him*
Ammy: SHUT UP! 😡 someone is jealous!
Ridzi: why should I be jealous?
Ammy: bad manners! Jab dho log baat karr rahe ho bech mein nai bolte *to Ridzi*
Katrina: whats going on here??
Ammy: No! not to u Kat'just teaching sum people manners *looks at Ridzi*
Ridzi: u n teaching manners? Wow! Now thats really awesome :p
Ammy: tooo much of disturbance here'lets go there
*pulls Kat's hand n takes her to the other side of the boat* Lets play a game? 😉
Kat: which game?
Ammy: My favvvvv game! It's called the love-game! By the end of the game..two people fall in love!
Kat: oooooooo
*Ridzi doesn't look at them but can hear them speak*
Ammy: All we have to do is look into each other's eyes without blinking our eyes.. if u blink then u lost
Kat: Allrite startttttttt *excited*
*Ridzi looks at them'a bit jealous now*
*Ammy Kat looking in each others eyes. Ridzi doesn't know what to do' gets up n goes to them*
Ridzi: EXCUSE ME!
Ammy: shhhhhhhh'go go away..do not disturb
*Ridzi shakes Kat n makes her blink*
Ridzi: she's out'she Lost!
Ammy: u cheater! *says to Ridzi* Anyways I WON! *says to Kat*
Kat: OH! I dont mind that!
Ridzi: *goes b/w Ammy Kat* u won because of me! play with me n win n show! *challenging tone*
Ammy: challenge? Aajao maidan mein!
Ridzi: aajao!
Ammy: nah nah'aise nai.. kuch shart vart lagao
Ridzi: shart???????
Ammy: lets bet!!! as in if I win' u will have to do watever I say
Ridzi: n if I win?
Ammy: then watever I say u have to do' simple!
Ridzi: *confused* ok!

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@Mayur's boat

Nupur: Hey idea..!
Mayank: what now?
Nupur: come with me! *pulls Mayank's hand n makes Mayank stand up n makes him stretch his arms/hand!..n she too stretches her hand/arms...at edge of boat n both stand in titanic pose*
Mayank: *laughing at Nupur's madness which he really seems to admire now*
Nupur: wowwwwwwwwwwwww *feeling the cold breeze on her face* I always use to see this in my dreams 😃 and movies !!! 😃
Mayank: but this moment seems better then dreams *says in Nupur's ears*
Nupur: *lil blush*


*Background music is a must nw, so the song they were singin continues-*

~I want to stand with you on a mountain
I want to bathe with you in the sea..~


*Nupur is giggling n Mayank is smiling seeing her giggle soo much*

Nupur: I wish this moment never ends! *just says*
Mayank: It shall never ever end!

~I want to lay like this forever.
Until the sky falls down on me... ~

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@Passenger Boat..AR

*Ridzi-Ammy sit opposite each other n look in each other's eyes*
Kat: Go Ammy'Win it again!
*Ammy looking in Ridzi's eyes' moving his eyeballs up down..right left..round n round to distract Ridzi.. But Ridzi is looking seriously starring deep into his eyes..*
Ammy: mwaaaaaz *gives Ridzi a flying kiss to distract*
Ridzi: mwaazzz *sends back flying kiss*
Ammy: 😲 u kissed me?
Ridzi: yeah! Flying--------kiss! *smiles'thinking Ammy is so kidish*
Ammy: why are u smiling? U have not won the game, yet! Or is smile n distract is your strategy to win the game?
Ridzi: hmmm *still smiling because Ammy is taking the game so seriously as if it's a big 50lakhs game* (Thinks: he is such a lil kid'! ab gussa bhi nai ah raha)
Ammy: (why are u smiling? *he ask her with his eyes expression* Ajeeb ladki!)
Ridzi: (says 'nothing happen' with her eyes expression)
Ammy: (eye expression: kuch tho hai..?)
Ridzi: (eye exp: nothing! Said na NOTHING! *strict*)
Ammy: are u falling in love with me?
Ridzi: hmmmm' I think so *says dreamily*
Ammy: whatt?
Ridzi: *realizes wat she said n blinks her eyes so that Ammy wins n becomes happy*
Ammy: Yayyyyyyyyyyy'I won! *jumps off his seat happily n whistle*
Ridzi: I lost *looks at him as if happy to loose this time*
Ammy: n NOW *raising his eyebrows twice* THE SHART/BET!!!
Ridzi: 😲 *she had forgotten about the bet* no no'I dint loose. Lets play once more
Ammy: nai nai nai! AB U HAVE TO DO WHAT I SAY
Ridzi: hmmmm say what I have to do?
Ammy: *comes close to her face* kiss..
Ridzi: 😲 kiss?????????????????
Ammy: I mean kisse aur time bataoga 😉 kiss-e aur time! the shart is pending

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@Mayur's boat

Mayank: hello'hello Miss Nupur *in her ears who is stilll in dreamy land* we have reached!
Nupur: reached??? *sad* whyyyyyyyyyy?
Mayank: why, u dint wanna reach?
Nupur: No! I mean yea.. *sad* yeah yeah! *getting back to normal* YEAH!
*Nupur to herself: yeh main kya karr rahe thi? Wats wrng wit me? this is all not right' its just not right' I cant trust him' its not even 10days that I know him aur yeh main kya karr rahe ho' NUPURRRRR!!!!!!! *gets off the boat n runs n takes a cab n leves*
Mayank to himself: Hey Nupurrrr *😕- whats wrong with her? *follows her but she goes quickly*) bye Nupur!

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@AR's boat

Ridzi: *lookin at Ammy'dazzed'dreamily*
Ammy: hey hello'*waving hand front of Ridzi* aise kya dekh rahe ho! I know I am very handsome'and u cant just get your eyes off me !! Hello RID-hima? *shakes her*
Ridzi: *its like a mini current passes thru her when Ammy touches her. heartbeat starts racing* kya..kya hua? *blink blink..snapping out*
Ammy: hona kya hai' wohi hua jo hona tha!
Ridzi: wat??? *heart beats race more fast*
Ammy: humari manzil..destination ah gaye! chalo ab' hotel nai jaana?
Ridzi: hmmmm *to herself: whats happnin to me? why is my heart beating so fast as if something is gonna happen...happening?*
Ammy: again u are dreaming? BYE! *gets out from boat takes a cab n goes*
*Ridzi gets out of boat' trying to understand the new emotions arising in her heart' n that too for Ammy?!*

*Ammy stops his taxi, gets down n come tos Ridzi..n pulls her hand n takes her along with him'n she goes with him dazzed..without a word! makes her sit in cab n go*

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*All reach Hotel Kingston n go to their repected rooms*

Ammy: whats wrng with this girl *Ridzi* aaj kuch zyaadha hi ajab ghazab act kar rahe hai? 😕 so difficult to understand her...

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Mayank: I just cant understand her*nupur* what does she want? It's too Complicated! 😕

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Ridzi: Complicated Arman Malik! sometimes such a innocent kid.. n sometimes like a devil... but he is not soo bad' or even if he is' why he suddenly seems so good? 😕

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Nupur: Mayank is Good..I know! but I just cant do this'kise stranger pe trust nai karna chaheye! I am happy as I am' dont need anyone to play around with my feelings! 😕

Please do leave in your comments..

Edited by ritu1618 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY

VERY VERY NICE UPDATE.
LOVED THE SONG
PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON I AM WAITING ......
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update
do continue soon

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