awesome update
loved it
they are all so cute
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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awesome update
loved it
they are all so cute
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Part 16 (A small Update)
@(Hotel Kingston *After Sometime*)
@Ammy-Mayank's Room
Mayank: so finally, Kandy has done something right
Ammy: yeah!!...got lost 😆
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@N2R Room (Nupur-Nuts-Ridzi)
Nuts: main yaha ho! 😛 *just enters the room*
Ridzi: where were u? 😕
Nupur: hum kitne pareshaan the 😳
Nuts: sorry yaaro, I know tum log pareshaan hoge par jab main uthe... wo mujhe na ek handsome sa ladke ne... ne lift ke liye poocha... so main uske sath chale gaye.. boat mein 😃 I felt something telling me that...... HE is the ONE for me 😛 Mera Mr Perfect, Abhishek
Nupur-Ridzi: ohhhhhhhhhhh !! 😉
Nupur: Then kya hua? loveria in Italy ?? 😉
Nuts: arre kaha.......wo ah gaya na bech mein!
Ridzi: kaun kaun? 😕
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@MAK Room (Mayank-Ammy-Kandy's Room)
Kandy: Main! lo main ah gaya! 😃 *enters the room*
Ammy: Oh no!...we thought u were lost! your back..damn!
Kandy: It would be good if I would have got lost or died 😭
Mayank: I Agree! 🤓
Kandy: but I am alive n not lost 😃 but infact, now I have truly found myself...after finding him...Abhishek 😃 but I prefer to die 😭 That stupid idiot girl NUTS 😭 kabab mein hadi 😭 between me n abhi 😭
*Mayank-Ammy stare at each other n get out of the room, locking Kandy in alone, and an un-aware Kandy goes on telling his sad-love-story to the walls 😭*
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@N2R's Room
Ridzi: chod na, u will get a better boy! 😉
Nupur: HAAN! Abhishek ko Kandy ke liye chod de... We will search Salman for u
Nuts: Nai! I want abhi... aur wo ishe hotel mein hai 😃 shaam ko party hai na..hotel mein.. waha patalongi ushe 🥳
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@MAK's Room
Mayank: party!!! not again !!! now what party is this???
Ammy: I dunno... the hotel has organized some party for couples!
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@N2R's Room
Ridzi: only for couples? 🤔
Nupur: OH NO!
Nuts: haan so ismein prob kya hai? I will go with Abhi... vaise bhi this is Italy, sab chalta hai so you both girls can be a couple... 😃
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@MAK's Room
Mayank: whhhhatttttttt????? 😲
Ridzi: nooo waysss! I n Mayank..and couple, are u kidding me?
Kandy: tho itne jaldi girlfriend kaha milenge tum dhono ko? 😕
@N2R's Room
Nuts: boy-friend mil sakhta hai but sab cheapozzz milenge! ya tho wo Mayank aur Ammy hai na... they can be your partner 😉
Nupur: Mayankkkkkk???? NOOO! 😲
Ridzi: Ammyyy!!!????????? NAI YAAR! 😲
*Both think for 2mins then say...*
Nupur-Ridzi: We are couple!.................................for today!
Nupur: chalta hai na..kaun dekh raha hai
Ridzi: haan....ek hi din ke tho baat hai... its not like forever
*consoling themselves*
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@Late Evening
*All dressing up*
Background song plays now--- (luv mein filminess zaruri hai)
Ridzi looks at herself in the mirror n notes some change in her face, today
❤️❤️❤️~Ho Aisa Lagta Hai Jo Na Hua Hone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Nupur feels after how much ever she tries... she can't hold her heart or feelings to herself...its just running out of her control/hands
❤️❤️❤️~Aisa Lagta Hai Ab Dil Mera Khone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Ammy looks in mirror n thinks that why was Ridzi starring at him.. checks if any marks are on his face? but then smiles
❤️❤️❤️~Koi Chehra Nigaahon Pe Chhaane Laga~❤️❤️❤️
Mayank takes a lil more effort to dress up today then usual.. thinking of the time he spend today with Nupur!
❤️❤️❤️~Koi Ab Roz Aankhon Mein Aane Laga~❤️❤️❤️
❤️❤️❤️~Oh Aisa Lagta Hai Jaise Nasha Hone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Ammy *not-wantingly* dreams of dancing with Ridzi
❤️❤️❤️~Aisa Lagta Hai Hosh Mera Khone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Mayank dreams of Nupur making tea for him...every morning
❤️❤️❤️~Ho Aisa Lagta Hai Koi Mera Hone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Ridzi feels all happy-new feelings in her heart
❤️❤️❤️~Aisa Lagta Hai Har Faasla Khone Ko Hai~❤️❤️❤️
Nupur feels a nice-fright-nervous feeling in her heart
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@N2R's Room
*Nupur all alone in her room alone..dressing up for the party, wearing her accessories etc. Lights go off*
Nupur: arre yeh lights ko kya hua? yaha bhi lights jaati hai... AC tho on hai *goes to the light switch! someone holds her arm n pulls her in the darkness*
Nupur: 😲 *stunned..cant re-act as scared "who is this?"*
Mayank: shhh... it's me! *holding both her arms*
Nupur: Mayank?? Tum??? Yaha??? Kaise???
Mayank: Main yaha !! Tum Yaha !! Hum Yaha !! Kaise? that I dunno too 😕 but it's all planned...written in heaven!
Nupur: what are u saying? writ..wirtten..he..hea..heaven? *stammers* heaven kaha se ah gaya?? I dont understand
Mayank: u never understand! but I hope u do understand..someday!
Nupur: Mayank! U had any work with me that your are here..in my room? *changing topic*
Mayank: Yea, work n a very important one! There is a fact u know? n it seems like we are running from it from quiet some days...
Nupur: I dont wanna know anything!
Mayank: but I wanna say! Because u know I am not a type of a hypocrite.. whatever I have in my heart n mind.. it's there out for everyone to know because I always speak my mind..but I cant this say it this time but I wanna say it today...so lemme say it
Nupur: No Mayank, Please..stop it
Mayank: LEMME SAY IT! *shouts at her*
Nupur: *gets a bit scared n keeps quiet*
Mayank: *pushes her slightly towards the wall, goes close to her, touches his forehead to hers, his nose to hers...n both quiet, just feeling the presence of each other! Nupur heart beats race! That 2 mins silence speaks a lot of things which the two only can understand* I won't come again.... now, its your turn! *says n leaves her and her room*
Nupur to herself: bye Mayank! *a lil sadish tone*
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@Hotel Corridor
*Ridzi is walking in the hotel corridor going towards the party-hall n she trips n falls'..dammmmm flattt on the floor*
Ridzi: ouch! Mumma'*she soon realizes she dint fall, but someone made her fall by putting their leg in her way*
Ammy: aaah! Dadda! :P *says in teasing tone standing behind her..very proud of making Ridzi fall' big teasing grin 😃*
Ridzi: How dare u?
Ammy: What? WHY are u always behind me? 😕 now what did I do??? *innocently*
Ridzi: doosro ki raasta mein tangg(leg) adhana 😡
Ammy: Tum doosri thodi na ho??? 😉 but Whatever dude !! 🤢 *starts to go..passing Ridzi' but she puts her leg in his way, He also falls dammmmmm..flat on his face*
Ridzi: *giggling a bit* Whatever dude *teasing him*
Ammy: arggggggggggggggggg 😡 *huff-puff fuming anger*
*both get up n Ridzi goes right'Ammy goes left but then come back realising they have to go one way, straight n same place*
Ammy: why are u following me?
Ridzi: ulta chor kothwal ko daante?!?!?!
*both walk straight to party hall*
Cont...Soon 😳
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Ritu
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