MN FF - Truly Yours Part 3- PG 17 [9/30]

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Alisha2887

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Brilliant update Zoah. Loved it a lot.

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Alisha x

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Hey Zoah,

That was soooooooooo beautifully written, just reminded me of the Ronan Keating song, when you say nothing at all. Man I have a hard time expressing my feelings at times too. Feel soooooo bad for MN.:( Do continue soon!

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: myownarea
beautiful ZO!!! I love the way their eyes conveyed their love for each other!! 😃

Thank you so muh Divya 🤗

It great to get a compliment such a great writer like you

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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
nice
thanx 4d pm

Thanks a lot

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Originally posted by: kulsumd
awesome update.

Thanks a lot

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Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Zoahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

u never pmed me this before😭

how come??!!!!!
*Khaffa muh*

sachi mein I love the concept

so Mayur slpit after 12th grade

Mayu went to US with his mom n Nupur to Morena with her dad

n then 6 yrzz later they meet again

n Mayuzzz faince?!!!!
wow !!!
can't wait to read more

n the siggg chooo cuteeee !!!!

loved it !!!

Part 1

awwwwww rocking sis I just love this part sachi mein itzz amazing !!!
so Mayu sees Nupur n Nisha hugging her n Nupur saying congratzz on her marriage with Mayu

awwww I just love how u describe everything u are an amazing writer sis !!!
just love this part have no wordzz for it !! do continue ASAP na !!
I have soo many questionzz about this Mayur

how they met?

why they split?

n many more !!!
n haan plezzz do add me in ur pm list na

luvvv ya🤗
-Lina-

Oh Sis, I am sorry for not pming.

I must have forgot 😳

Thank you liking the concept and this part!

Will surely PM you

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was soooooooo nice i just love it

Thank you so much

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Originally posted by: -sam-
wow zoah,
That was beautiful!
Very well written
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm

-samidha

Thanks so much Sam

Am glad you liked it :)

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Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Beautiful..... Its really nice... The way you explained past and present ..the feelings and thoughts of Mayank..everything perfect!!😍

awww thank you so muchdear

I am so glad you liked it

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Originally posted by: alishaL786
Wow!! 😊 Your FF is truly amazing!! 😊 I love it to the core! Thanks for the pm and please update soon!
~Alisha~

Thanks a ton Alisha

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Originally posted by: -Jess-
RES

@Akki - I'm first one... 34-33... Lalalala!!!

Waiting......😃

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Originally posted by: achoose
beautiful update dear............

Thanks so much hun

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Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey zoah, this is very beautiful// the past and present contrast is amzing!.. you excel in writing,

Thank You for the Pm =)

Sanam

Thank you so much Sanam

Am so glad to hear from you :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
amazing part plzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

Thank you so much

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Originally posted by: -Daania-
Zoah 🤗

So, you're finally updating this FF. Yay!

I already loved the concept and now the first part is brilliant too. And that is quite a refreshing change that you're writing from Mayank's POV.

Very well written Zoah. i could feel all the emotions you were trying to explain.

Beautifully written. Awesome story.

Do continue soon.

Loads of love <3<3

-Daania

Thank you so much Daania 🤗

Yay I updated this FF and am so glad you loved it

Yeah, tried dif style for a change 😃

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Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990
wow..nyc part huni!!

Thanks a lot Praty

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Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988
zoah!! tujhe finally time mil gayi iss ff ko update karne ka??......good for us!!😊as u toh became an id ka chand!!!..dikhai hi nehi deti!!..😆

well..coming back 2 d update...m realy pleased wid d short yet satisfying update...⭐️but plzz yaar,..ab se jaldi update karne ki koshish karna..plzzzzz🤓...tk cr hun..

luv mayur always!!!🤗

Thanks a lot Swati

Gld you liked it

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Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT
Brilliant update Zoah. Loved it a lot.
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Alisha x

Thanks a lot Alisha

Am so glad you liked it

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome update.loved it.
continue soon.

Thanks so much Di 😃

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Originally posted by: Senny
Hey Zoah,

That was soooooooooo beautifully written, just reminded me of the Ronan Keating song, when you say nothing at all. Man I have a hard time expressing my feelings at times too. Feel soooooo bad for MN.:( Do continue soon!

Thank you so much Senny

Will continue soon

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Ah! Zo!
That was a wonderful start!
Written wonderfully well darling!
And i had the when you said nothing at all feeings all through me! WOW!
Continue asap!

AK!

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

awwwww...........i loved it yaar!!!!

it was soo good!!!

i could actually see this happening!!
i loveddd it....

im so intrigued now.... who's milind... who's alisha? what was dere past? why mayur broke up in the first place!

lookin fwd to the nxt part!

xxxx