Can this be love? AR Mini FF Part 4 pg 9 last part - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: seert

Hey Reema,
I found the update before the pm...ok you've progressed the story really fast. I didn't expect that we'd get to the wedding w/o Armaan realizing that he loves Ridhhima. And why is Armaan so besotted with Ahana? Blushing and climbing pipes for her? I think Ahana definitely knows that Ridhhima loves Armaan, and Ridhhima's important in Armaan's life but they're about to get married. I'm hoping Armaan doesn't get married to Ahana, but then he hasn't realized his love for Ridhhima yet so why won't he go through with this marriage. And I think Ahana just has some conciliatory words for Ridhhima....oh well, sort of really confused by this part. Will wait for the next update...

story is moving fast coz its a mini ff..i didnt wanted to drag it...sorry for all the confusion😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
awesome part
wonder wat is ahana going to do noe
plzz cont soon
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: x!reema!x

story is moving fast coz its a mini ff..i didnt wanted to drag it...sorry for all the confusion😳


Oh its alrite....I'm hoping everythings clarified in the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
oooh! excellent part! cant wait for the next one.
sucks this is a mini ff. ahha..its such a cute story and your a good writer!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG post the next part I can't wait!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
OMGG. Reema 😡 You always end at cliff hangers! 😆 Loveeeeddd the update! I can't wait to read the next part! Update real soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohh plz update soon naan i can't wait plzzz plzzzz 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok ok..i'll update in a while :D

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you for your Comments!!!🤗
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Part 4
"Aahana? What are you doing here?" Riddhima got up from her chair.
"Riddhima…this wedding can't happen without you?" Aahana smiled "Come let's go everyone is waiting for you" Aahana held Riddhima's hand and led her to the mandap. Riddhima thought Armaan must have called her or may be her parents had called her.
"Sorry guys, I got up in middle of these ceremonies…I was gone to get the real bride" Everyone was stunned to hear that from Aahana. Even Armaan and Riddhima didn't know what was going on. "Yes Armaan…Riddhima is your real bride. You both are made for each other" Aahana smiled and continued "Armaan, Riddhima loves you way more than I do…her love is unconditional…and I know you love her as well, you just never realized it…I have noticed it so many times. You both are deeply in love with each other the problem is that one never confessed and one is confused. Riddhima I'm not nosy or anything but that day when I had come to your house so we can go for shopping? Well that day, before entering the room I heard you talking with someone…
"I'm just not feeling well and nothing else is wrong so stop worrying…no there is nothing that's bothering me, trust me Armaan? Don't I always tell you if something is wrong? Yeah so you have to trust me now…ok Armaan I'll see you later" saying that she cut the call. Aahana was about to enter but stopped, as she heard Riddhima cry.
"Why did you do this to me god? Why? I fell in love for the first time and all I got is a broken heart? Why does this always happen with me? I love you Armaan…I love you very much. But I'm really happy that you're gonna be happy. Aahana is a very nice girl, I'm sure she'll keep you happy all the time…but I just can't see you with anyone else, the more I try to go away from you…you come closer and do all those cute things, which makes me fall in love with you all over again…I will never be able to love anybody else. I love you Armaan." Riddhima broke down on the floor.
Aahana had tears in her eyes seeing her in this state. She left from there without saying anything.
"And that day when we went to the beach when Riddhima wanted to see the sun rise?…I saw you both talking about something and it seemed something serious, but at that time I didn't knew about Riddhima being in love with Armaan, but I definitely saw something different in Armaan's eyes that morning. He looked so happy after talking to Riddhima that morning…there was this different glow in his eyes and after that I heard Riddhima and all that and I came to a conclusion…I had figured out that you both are in love with each other, and Armaan I had often seen you staring at her…" She winked at Armaan "Even though Riddhima's heart was broken and she was going through a really tough time…she never said no to Armaan when Armaan asked her to go with him to meet me…she even did all the wedding preparations…if there was somebody else in Riddhima's place then I'm sure that person had ran away or committed suicide or something…Riddhima is one strong girl, she attended all the ceremonies knowing that she would get hurt but she didn't care about herself, she attended all those ceremonies just for Armaan. But today she couldn't see her him getting married to someone else…so she walked away" Aahana had tears in her eyes while saying all that… "I thought that I love Armaan more than anyone, but I was wrong. You love him way more than I do…I don't even know if my love is real, but I'm sure that your love is pure. He was always yours Riddhima" she said as Riddhima hugged her.
"So that means I'm in love?" Armaan asked excitedly.
"Yes beta you are" Juhi smiled "I don't know how I didn't notice that"
"Omg I can't believe it…I'm in love!!!!!!...now I understand why I had those strange feelings, I was so stupid not to understand that it was a feeling of love" he said dreamily. He looked at Riddhima who was standing there in tears. He walked up to her and held her hand "Now I know why my basket was behaving so strangely and why she was trying to stay away from me" she looked at him "Why didn't you tell me that you loved me basket? I thought I was your best friend…" he said wiping her tears.
"I was s-scared to lose my best friend…I didn't know how would you react and I was scared that you will leave me" she looked down.
"Who is acting like kids now? Why would I leave the person who loves me so much? And to whom I love" he said playing with her fingers.
"Acha? You love me? You never said it" she said while fixing his sherwani from the collar.
"Didn't she just say that I didn't realize it…I was still trying to figure out the new feelings I was having, good that she told me its love…otherwise I would never have known it" he chuckled.
"Ok so can we resume the ceremonies with the new bride?" Shashank said smiling widely.
"Sure uncle…just a sec" saying that Armaan and Riddhima walked towards Aahana.
"All we want to say is THANK YOU" they both hugged her.
Armaan and Riddhima got married. Their parents, friends, and all the other relatives were also happy.
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"Guys, is the room ready? They are on their way…" Anjali said entering Armaan's bedroom to see if was well decorated.
"Armaan will kill you guys for messing with his bed" Nikki said looking at bunch rose petals on the bed.
"It's his wedding night, he better not say anything…the decoration was needed" Muskaan said picking up Armaan's clothes from the floor "This boy never cleans his room…such an idiot" she said in annoyance.
"I already have a habit to keep my room clean" Rahul winked at her and made her blush.
"Guys they are here" Atul announced standing at the door.
"Muski…Nikki go and get Riddhima, and Rahul Atul…you both stop Armaan, we still have to bother him" Anjali winked.
"Ridziiiii I'm so happy for you" Muskaan hugged her and made her sit on the bed.
"Me toooo" Nikki hugged her too.
"Let me go to my room…I'm tired" Armaan said getting of the sofa just to be pushed back by Anjali.
"You don't look tired…does he?" Atul said looking at his face.
"He is not tired…he just wants to be with his wify" Rahul teased.
"Riddhima will sleep till the time he goes back" Anjali said.
"Ok then can I go and wish her goodnight at least?" Armaan said raising his eyebrows.
"Armaan lets do some masti as usual…I'm not sleepy tonight" Nikki and Muskaan came.
"But I'm sleepy…" he got up once again and was pushed back again.
"Armaan make some coffee for us…we're your guests" Nikki said.
"Sure why not? Anything for my guests" Armaan smirked as he got an idea. He got up.
"Now that will keep him busy for 5 mins at least" Atul hi fied Nikki.
"Armaan wait…" Anjali said but he just ran up to his room and stuck out his tongue at them.
"Nikki!!! What did you do? See he ran away" Rahul said.
"Uh sorry guys" Nikki held her ears.
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As he entered the room he saw Riddhima sitting on the bed and yawning. He smiled and went and sat on the bed.
"Umm hi basket..err I mean Riddhima…no I mean basket" Riddhima just looked at him and laughed.
"Armaan you sound so nervous…what happened?" Riddhima still laughed.
"They were irritating me" he said lying on the bed.
"Armaan I'll just get changed and come back…" she went and changed into her night suit and then started taking her jewelry off.
Armaan got up and walked up to her. And helped her taking off the jewelry.
"Basket do you feel bad for yourself now that your married a guy like me who still acts like kids?" he asked as he took off her earrings.
"I know exactly how to control you…" she giggled as she tried taking off her heavy necklace.
"Oh really…" he asked.
"Yes really"
"Then try controlling me tonight" he said getting closer to her.
"Armaan!" she blushed.
"Riddhima" he made her face him "I Love you and promise to love you forever" saying that he kissed her forehead.
"I love you too Armaan" she blushed.
"Oye Hoye…how come I never noticed this beauty before?" he pulled her closer by her waist.
"Armaan please" she buried her face into his chest as he wrapped his arms around her protectively and hugging her tight. He then picked her up and took her to the bed.
And then ahem ahem lights off...
"If you love somebody, let them go. If they return, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were." By Khalil Gibran
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Done!!!!! Hope you guys liked it...Please do comment. Love you all.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Wow Reema that was a very short ff. And 2 updates in 1 day? You really wanted this to be over, eh?
Well it was a cute part but I would have liked for Armaan to realize his love on his own as opposed to Ahana. But still, I liked the ending and how their friendship still remained intact.
By the way, nice quote at the end.

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