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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hey mana...awesome Shot...yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

raj...dil ka doctor...bilkul sahi hai...Naina...Anaesthetist...yeh bhi sahi hai...!!! dono ek dushre k liye bilkul perfect hain...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ritu yahan bhi raj k piche padi hui hai...par ek baat achhi hai us ki...as a doc...voh jo karr rahi thi voh sahi tha...😃 😃 😃

raj aur naina ka first encounter sach me baht funny tha...!!! Raj ne sahi kaha...pregnent hone k liye shaadi ki jarurat nahi hai...he he he😆 😆 😆...!!! bichari naina...bina wajah k...lecture attend kiya...par Raj ki halat bhi patli ho gayi...sachhai jaan ne k baad...😆 😆 😆

Par raj k dad baht hi achhe insaan hain...lagta hai pahli hi nazar me Naina ko bahu maan liya ...varna raj k sath kaam karne ko kyoun kahte...he he he...jokes apart...😆 😆 😆

par last scene tohhhhhh...kya kahun yaar...yeh toh ek damm zabardast tha...raj ne kitne achhe tarike se naveen ko apne aur Naina k bare me bataya...aur upar se yeh order bhi de diya ki voh yeh baat us k dad ko bhi bata de...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ok....last ques...doctors itne achhe hote hain kya...😛??? khair agar Raj doc hua toh ...main samajh sakti hun😛...par bakiyoun k bare me doubt hai...😆!!! welllllllllll...main tere bare me toh bilkul bhi baat nahi karr rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki mujhe pata hai...tu achhi hai ya buri...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

n dont worry...tu aise hi OS k bombs se attack karti ja...main GHAYAL hone k liye taiyaar hun...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

awesooooooooooome........
superb.............
fantabulous.......
excellent............
wonderful.......
just too good........
thanx for the pm.......

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Simply Rocking.....wonderful OS !

i enjoyed it ....i luved it when Raj said ki Naveen ko enesthesia dete hai n that will b the safest way.......gr888 work
keep it up........😃

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Awesome!! Wish i could press the 'like' tab twice....the story is beautiful!!👏👏

It would really have been great to have Navin alive in LRL.....you have just showed how much masti and fun there would have been.

Raj kitne boldly apne aur naina ki baat Navin ko phone mein keh deta hai. Ab jija thode hi apne saale se darega.😉

Its a superb fic....loved it.👏

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

wow mana bohot he sweet up diya haai raj aur naina sorry dr naina fights and at last they fell in love aur raj kya naveen convo was so funny i just loved it

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Hi Mana...

I really think that I should have given u an OS as well...this was so brilliant...and don't worry, we don't mind u bombarding us with OS's and updates in the least... in fact, I love it...hope you keep us bombarding with more...

Now coming to the OS...it was brilliant...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

You depicted Raj and Naveen's friendship really well...👏Naveen is dating Raj...that is so good...and raj is fed up of Ritu...😆😆😆😆😆😆 that was funny...and Raj is right...wo zor lagane wala joke was...uhhh... Ritu is really a make up box...

Ab MLA ki rishtedaar ho ya koi bhi jo...sex determination is a crime.... u have handled that topic with great care...the moment Raj rushed away, I knew a misunderstanding was imminent...and Naveen and Naina laughing at raj's embarrassment was so funny.... 😆😆😆😆😆😆

And you really ended it on a beautiful note.... Raj aise hi bindaas achha lagta hai...the way he told it to Naveen was awesome.... Chal ab jaldi se ya to ek UD ya fir koi ek aur OS post kar....

Take care

Byeeee

Love
Guglu

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

wow!!!!!!! m njoying ur one shot's dis was yet another beautiful and awesome one....👏👏👏

luved d naughtiness and cuteness of the fic.....😳😊👏👏

luved d dialogues as well...👏👏👏

keep it up...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

follow wid next1 soon. ....😛😛😊

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Awesome os.
hey mana pls iss pe hi ek fic likh,, itna accha concept hain and it will grt if u write a fic on this topic,
loved this os.
loved the dialogue between raj and naveen.

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388456

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hiiiiiii Mana....

U know i read this before.....but at that time i was running late.....so just clicked the like button......Neverthelesss i read it again....hehehehe....and this was as amazing....I had this constant smile all throughout replaced only by spurts of laughter here and there.....Rajveer and Naina's first encounter was sooo cute....Miss Naina....Unmarried and pregnant....hahahaha....it was fabulous....hehehehe

Love,

Rajita