Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
nice part dear ... cnt soon...:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hi Jasmine...
Cute part... aww Mayank doesn't know whats happening 2 him.. lol.. it was nice the way he took care of her.. and glad Akash helped him to understand what he may be feeling... hope he confesses soon and Nupur also feels the same..
Update soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Nicely written Jasmine.. and thnx for the PM....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Hey Jasmine read your FF for the first time...

Amazing work hun.... keep it up

do continue soon.....

Luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SO MAYANK REALISED HIS LOVE 4 NUPUR..NICE UPDATE..BUT U DIDNT PMM ME
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Awesome part.....
Waiting for Mayur confession....

- Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was really nice one
Liked it
Thank God Mayu realised his love
But Nups thks same i doubt
Edited by -afsha- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey add me to ur pm list!!!.....loved ur ff....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyy jasmine
Really nice part
Continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Eternal rain drops Part 5




Mayank buys red roses and comes to college.He hums the song 'Kya mujhe pyar hai..'{Woh lamhe}.
Pooja:What happened Mayank?Are you in love?
Mayank blushes.
Akash:Who is that girl?
Reema:Nupur?
Mayank shakes his head.
R:Wow!Good choice.
Ronit:Cool.
Samrat:Lucky boy.Nupur suits you.
M:But i don't know whether she loves me or not.
S:What is the need of tension.She loves you for sure.
Mayank smiles:I'm waiting for her to come.
Mayank sings:Chalte chalte yunhi ruk jaata hoon main
Bethe bethe kahin kho jaata hoon main
Kehte kehte hi chup ho jaata hoon main
Kya yahin pyaar hai, kya yahin pyaar hai...
He imagines Nupur singing for him:
Haan yahin pyaar hai, haan yahin pyaar hai{Mohabbatein}.

Nupur arrives.
Mayank goes near her with the red roses.
N:Hey Mayank...what is this?Roses....for whom?
M:For you.
N:Really?
She takes the flowers from him:Thank you.I love red roses.
M:Nupur...i love you.
Nupur is shocked:What?
M:Yes Nupur..i love you.
Nupur slaps him.Mayank and friends are shocked.
Nupur shouts:How could you propose to me?
M:Nupur..i love you.
She slaps him again.
N:You destroyed our friendship.I thought you are my best friend.But you are a crook.
Mayank is depressed:Nupur..listen to me...trust me..
N:I don't want to hear anything.
Nupur throws the flowers at his face and leaves.
Mayank cries.All his friends come to console him.


Holi....All are playing with colours.
Samrat:Mayank...why are you standing simply?Come and have fun.
M:I don't have mood.
S:Because of Nupur?Right?She will realise that you love her sincerely.Her anger will melt and she will start loving you.She is also standing simply.Go to her.
Samrat throws some colour powder at him.Mayank has some hopes now.
Reema:Nupur...enjoy with colours.It is a colourful day.
Reema throws colour powder at Nupur.She goes with Akash.
Mayank goes near Nupur.He puts colour powder on her face.Nupur is fuming with anger.
Mayank has a naughty smile on his face.
Reema pushes Nupur.Nupur falls on Mayank.They both fall down.Nupur is on top of Mayank.Mayank smiles.He touches her.
N:How dare you touch me?
Mayank and other friends are startled.Nupur gets up and goes.
All his friends sit around him.
M:I have no hope now.
He weeps.All are upset.

A new girl enters the college.She looks simple and stylish.All are guys are bowled over by her appearance.

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