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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: lilmzsunshine

i have a question - did you portray him as a cheater due to the rumors about his personal life??? Just hit me a few moments ago that THAT may have been the story behind the story maybe?

Just wondering?

Oh My Gosh! NO WAY. That NEVER even came to mind.
I am just being creative thats all...and anyway, part 3 is yet to come...it ends of "Dhokha".
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Sneak.



Oh My Gosh! NO WAY. That NEVER even came to mind.


I am just being creative thats all...and anyway, part 3 is yet to come...it ends of "Dhokha".

Ok cool .... Just checking ... Bit of a coincidence what with the rumors and all.

Ok, impatiently awaiting yr third installment :)))
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
yipppeee... yahhhooo... cant wait for the finale...
write soon....
love,
ambryn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Hi Guys,

Just thought I'd give you a little teaser of the third part of Jaaniye.
It will be called
Mora Piya
The third and final part of the "Dhokha" series will bring a twist with it.
Hopefully it will answer all your unanswered questions.
This is a section from Mora Piya, It IS NOT necessarily from the beginning, it could be the middle section or it could be the ending? Who knows. I guess you will have to wait and see...or should i say "wait & read" :P
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Mora Piya
The sun rose and hit the hotel's executive penthouse suite, more importantly it hit the bed where Armaan lay quietly with a sleeping Riddhima. The sun hurt Armaan's eye and disturbed his sleep. He woke, yawning..."Aah, What a night! I tell you, this pretty woman lying on me can really make me go crazy! But i guess thats love for you"..He was thinking about getting up but he didn't want to move Riddhima...she lay there quiet and he thought to himself "Man, she has never looked so beautiful".
He ran his finger down he silky smooth face and moved a strand of hair which was in the way, as he did so, she slowly opened her brown eyes to see, what could be classed as a dream. Armaan's face was blocking the sun light, and this way the sun shon around his head as if he was a god. She thought "Hai, what have I woken up to...this is like a dream. Mm, he's so hot" She smiled and kissed his face. They both sat up together, Armaan shirtless, with his boxers on and Riddhima sitting there in his blue shirt. "Only I know how much I've missed having you in my bed" This statement somewhat shocked Riddhima, she replied...with a raised eyebrow "Having you in my bed, Hmm..you make me sound like one....one of those....you know..."girls"". "Arre!! Kya! Nahi...don't be silly baby, I meant...you know..you laying there with me, and me waking up to see your face. That romantic sort of "having you in my bed." Riddhima laughed as she got out of the bed...Armaan grabbed her arm and pulled her back in. He was lying down again, "Stop it Armaan, you have to get out of this bed, you lazy bum! Chore mujhe!" "What is this Yaar!? Chore mujhe, has started again..." "Armaan"...He let her go.
"You didn't tell me to stop last night, there was no chore mujhe, tab kya hua tha" Riddhima stopped and turned to face Armaan, her face was red...she grabbed a cushion from behind her and threw it at Armaan's face "Ugh!!! Armaaaaaaaan" She shouted in frustration..and embarrassment.
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They both stepped out of the lift, and began walking towards the doors of the hotel...when suddenly a manly arm came out of no-where. It threw itself onto Armaan's muscular face, he had recieved a punch from an unknown man. He fell to the floor, Riddhima screamed in shock...her designer bag fell to the floor as her grip on Armaan's hand broke as he fell. Armaan, looked up, he had no idea who this guy was standing above him. Then, a tall, brown haired, girl stepped forward. Riddhima looked up to see this girl. After all that had happened, why did this tammasha have to come round the corner. "Teri Itni Himat?" Shouted the unknown guy, as the girl tried to restrain him. Armaan stood up, he had a reputation of being a strong, masculine romantic guy, and had been in many fights before hand. He got up, and gave this guy the wacking he deserved. "Don't you dare touch me again, I don't even know you" The brown haired girl walking towards Armaan, before she could touch him, Armaan stretched out his arm and stopped her. "Don't even think about coming near me, you've caused enough trouble"
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Woo! There you go. Hope you like it!!
PART 3 IS COMING SOOON!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Wow....loved the teaser.....have some inkling as to the twist....but not gonna say anything till I read the update!!! Thanks.....but when will you post the whole update?
Edited by AKANargis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Loved the teaser! Can't wait to read the next part, it seems really interesting!

Thanks for the PM too!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow....loved the teaser.....have some inkling as to the twist....but not gonna say anything till I read the update!!! Thanks.....but when will you post the whole update?

Thank you :) PM me your inkling, I would like to know what it is :) It may help me..:P
I should post it by Sunday, LATEST Monday.
x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Great sneak peak! Loved it! Plz do tell me when u update again :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Awesome teaser I think it's the chick he kissed!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
nice teaser
cant wait 4 the part

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