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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the appreciation guyz!! 😃 ..lolz its fun writing fanfics coz the characters are like puppets in your hands-lolz i see where tnd get their weird sense of power controlling their characters and making them do stupid things 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Im going to carry on my story at the request of all u sweeties who are bothering to read it😃..

Jassi enters the boardroom and feels unusually nervous-the room itself has changed quite alot since the last time she saw it-but yet all the members are still the same..she remembers how anxious she would feel everytime she was summoned to this daunting room..

'Jassi..'

Jassi is brought back to reality by the sound of Puru Suris voice..

Puru:'Aao jassi vahaan kari kyun ho?..hum sab tumhaara intezaar kar rahe the..'

Jassi makes her way to the back of the room where Puru is sitting and stands by his side-she notices that Mallika seems to be absent and Aryan is staring at her so hard that she can feel his eyes pentrating her face..

Puru Suri(PS):'Jassi Please take a seat-then we'll start the meeting..' he smiles at her reassuringly..and jassi feels somewhat comforted and takes her seat..

PS: 'Ok everyone i think you know why i have gathered you here today-Gulmohar is facing tough times-aur ab hummein kuch karna padega..isliye maine yeh faisla liya hai ke hum Karishma ke saath merge karenge..'

Aryan:'WHAT???-Uncle yeh aap kya kehrahe hain?!..'

PS: 'Dekho aryan mujhe is waqt koi aur raastha dekhaai nahin de raha-if we want to save GM we'll have to merge-whether you like it or not!..'

Aryan looks down angrily..whilst Armaan and Raj keep looking at eachother secretly-their facial expressions showing that they are really shocked-Jassi wants to merge with GM??-they feel something is definitely wrong somewhere!!..

Meanwhile Jassi cant help but steal glances at Armaan-who has not even looked in her direction once..she feels sad witnessing what is before her-armaan is no longer the aloof proud man he once was-instead he looks weak and his eyes tell the story of his struggle to keep GM afloat..

Puru Suri continues laying out the details of his plans whilst the others struggle to comprehend what is being put before them..Jassi will be GM's Co-chairman and will share this seat with Armaan..Both Armaan and Jassi look towards PS in shock-They will once again have to work side by side!..Finally both their eyes meet and lock-Jassi is overwhelmed with feelings of love but at the same time guilt-she looks away reluctantly..

'Jassi kya tum mujhse itni nafrath karthi ho ke mera chehra dekhna bhi ab tumhe gawaara nahin?..'-Armaan is saddened by this and also turns his face away-he wonders how Jassi wants to destroy him now-why cant she realise that he has been destroyed long time ago-now all that remains is a weak man-a shadow of his former self..

The meeting is brought to an end and all the members make their exit..

PS:'Jassi tum kal se shuru karsakthi ho-im depending on you beti..'

Jassi: 'Jee..main aapse waada karthi hoon ki main aapko niraash nahin karungi..'

PS: 'Good..and one more thing mujhe Uncle kaho sir nahin..' and he pats her head bidding farewell..

Jassi walks out of the door and feels someone is looking at her-when she turns noone is there-she laughs at her paranoia and makes her way towards the exit..meanwhile Armaan and Raj come out from behind the wall..

Raj:' Yeh Jassi chaathi kya hain?..meri samajh mein tho kuch bhi nahin aaraha..Armaan kahin woh hummein sarak par tho nahin laana chaathi-God..kaash humne usse kabhi dhoka nahin diya hotha-aaj yeh din tho na dekhna partha!!..Armaan!! tu sun bhi raha hain ke nahin?..'

Armaan:'Haan raj main sun raha hoon..ab jo bhi hoga uske zimaadaar hum khud honge-yehi humaari sazaa hain..'..with that armaan also makes his exit-to try and ready himself for tomorrow when he will be face to face with jassi once more..

Raj sighs and reluctantly follows..even he wonders what will happen tomorrow!!..

Ab kya hoga aage?!..

What do u think of my continuation?😛

Edited by aishah - 19 years ago
tina59 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
fantastic......great work.....pls continue ......wow enjoying it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
ooooooooh...blf... 😛 continue..continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
ooooooooh...blf... 😛 continue..continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Thanks tinz!-lolz im bored so i might as well continue for a little bit-im gonna introduce a new character..

Jassi makes her way towards the massive gates of GM-she'll have to use a taxi again-as she sold her car in a bid to finance some of the repayments due to the bank-she had overspent just trying to help GM-and now once again she was emptyhanded..but yet she felt light and relieved..

As she makes her way towards the taxi stand a car rushes by driving through a puddle of mud and water-in the process jassi is soaked from head to toe ..she looks down at herself in complete shock and cant believe what has just happened..meanwhile the driver of the car has also stopped and is making his way towards her..

He is a tall handsome guy,who is well groomed-his unique style of dressing says alot about his exquisite taste and he walks so confidently that you would think he was taking massive strides!..

'I am sooooooooo sorry!!..I cant believe ke main itna careless hoon-dude please forgive me if you can..'

Jassi is highly confused and turns so she is facing this new face-'Excuse me!!..aap ki vaja se meri nayee sari kharaab hogayi..and by the way aapne mujhe dude kaha??!..'😕

'Actually..main mumbai aaj hi poncha hoon-im on my way to meet an old friend of mine..look im already late..agar aap chahein main aapko lift de saktha hoon..i really dont mind dude oops mera mathlab hain miss..'..he laughs trying to break the awkwardness..

Jassi is not impressed at all-'NO THANK YOU!!!..main khud challe jaongi..' with that she turns and stomps off..leaving this bechaara highly confused..

Nandus house:

Jassi decides that she wants to check in on nandu-she has not has the chance to talk to him all day..as she walks in shes startled to witness whats before her..

'TUM???!!!..'

The young guy from earlier also stands shocked before her..'Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?!!..

Nandu: 'Arre tum log mil chukke ho-GREAT!!..jassi yeh aadi hai-mera mathlab Aaditya Sharma-mera cousin!!..'

Jassi just stands there zapped and angry at the same time..

Aadi:'Oh my God!!-what a small world no?-nandu yeh jassi hain?!-God tum tho kehte the ke jassi bohath sweet aur nice hain-lekin yeh tho aafath hai!!-a chalthi phirthi fireball!..' he again laughs but this time nandu is also laughing!..

Jassi:'EXCUSE ME!!..main yahin kari hoon..anyway nandu tumne kabhi is aaditya ka zikhar nahin kiya pehle!!..'

Nnadu explains to jassi that hes enlisted aadis help for GM-he is also no less of a genius himself and has volunteered to help out-he has heard all about jassi and armaan and is willing to help out in any way possible..

Aadi:'Kya karoon..im a hopeless romantic!!..i cant see two lovebirds aprt for too long..'

Jassi is angered by this remark and explains in rather blunt terms that its none of his business and at this moment her and armaan wont become one..

Aadi is taken aback and once again apologises..he only wants to help..jassi finally gives in and the trio spend the rest of the evening joking around with eachother..

Jassi:'Aadi im so sorry..maine tumhe itna kuch kaha..'

Aadi:'Its ok dude no problemo!!..Friends?..'

Jassi:'Hmmmm..'

Aadi/nandu:'JASSI!!!..

Jassi:Ok ok friends!!..' and they all burst into laughter..the entire night passes like this and finally the morning has arrived-the time jassi has to face her new challenge-GM and Armaan..

Lolz what do u think of this new guy?😛

Edited by aishah - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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as long as he is not another mm or purab ,hes fine,hope he genuinely helps a and j unite and i am sure we will get to see jealous arman suri when adi cmes to gm to meet jassi right?
great ...do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Yup-me lowes jealous dimples!!! 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aishah.. meri bad kismati hainn ki I only read this now.. it is fabulous.. I am really enjoying it and can't wait to read what happens next! Please continue.. it is wonderful..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! That was so cool Aish!! I love how u added another character into the fan-fic!! It was so perfectly done! Great job! I hope he's not gonna be a KMH...but maybe he's just some1 who's supposed to make sheru jealous? LOL! Well...I loved it! I'm just sorry that I didn't get to comment on it sooner! I couldn't find it earlier on! 😳

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