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Posted: 19 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: jassie_17

aishu i m gonna miss u....i m gonna miss IF...i shall pm u guyz....



jassiii. its a crime to elope like that without telling anyone... 😡 wherez u going and for what....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: chatterbox

aishu thanks yaar pehle i got confused but i understood finally kya hai woh
and thoda sa fonts increas kar do plss
wish u were jjkn writer
keep it up

Wish granted!!-and awwwww thx 4 the compliment!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13

Hmmmm I have decided to continue my story-i was actually thinking i shud stop coz armu and jazz have kinda made up now and my story is still stuck in Goa!!😆..

Armaans room

Armaan was completely shocked at this new turn of events-GM was rubbish compared to Karishma-How was it possible that GM could have clinched this new merger deal and that too so easily?..Armaans mind was flooded with unanswered questions but once again he was overtaken by happiness-He could now fulfil his dream-his Jassi's dream..

'Jassi aaj main bohath khush hoon-aaj mujhe yeh ehsaas hua ke hamesha jeet sacche pyaar ki hi hothi hai-main sochtha tha ke humaara pyaar adoora reh jaayega lekin main galath tha jassi-humaara pyaar tho hamesha kaim rahega-Gulmohar ke roop mein..'

Armaan feels alive again, a new found enthusiasm for victory rushes through his very being-The spirit of the old Armaan Suri who seemed to be in total control at all times seems to have returned partly..He felt that he had lost the battle of his life by losing jassi but today he knew that even if he was unsuccessful at making Jassi his-he would die happy that he had managed to keep his love alive in heart forever!..

Meanwhile in a heart that was once filled with innocence and purity, a heart that was once carefree and always beating strongly- there now appears to be nothing..nothing but extreme sadness..loneliness..

Jassi sits alone-alone with nothing but memories of a beautiful past gone by-She remembers how earlier she would feel that her life was destined to go on as an ugly duckling-a very simple life..but today she realised that however simple life was then-she was happy and now despite having beauty and wealth she had nothing..

'Kitni galath thi main-mujhe har pal aisa laga ke armaan mujhe barbaad karna chaatha hai-hosake tho mujhe maaf kardena armaan-main tho tumaari maafi ke layak bhi nahin hoon lekin main phir bhi khush hoon ke tumne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya..main ab mumbai laut jaongi..lekin yeh safar mujhe hamesha yaad rahega..'

Jassi decides to once again to return to the city where she first entered the world pf dreams and love-the city which was her home..there she would once agin try and help armaan in any way possible-she had made a mistake and she was detremined to correct it..

Mumbai-Jassis home

Jassi walks through an empty building that once was full of life and laughter-her home..it lies there just like a hollow shell now-devoid of all happiness..

'Jassi....'

Jassi spins around and is overwhelmed at what she sees-her papaji,bebe and mama..they have all returned!..Nandu stands to the side abit and winks at Jassi-hes told them everything and they have once again returned to their home and their jassi!..

A few weeks later

Both Armaan and Jassi seem to have moved on-they seem to be getting their lives back on track-but their faces tell a different story to what really lies beneath..they both yearn for eachothers love-a love both feel can never be theirs..

Jassi and Nandu both sit in her bedroom and are having a heated discussion..

Nandu: 'Jassi tumhaara dimaag tho nahin khuraab hogaya!..yeh tum kya kahrahi ho??!-tum GM vapas jaana chaathi ho?!..'

Jassi:'Nandu!..meri baath ko samajhni ki koshish tho karo!..dekh nandu hum laak koshish kar rahe hain GM ki madath karne ki lekin GM phir bhi losses mein jaa raha hai..main Purushotam sir se bhi mili thi-tum jaanthe ho nandu woh bohath hi aache hain-mujhe dekh kar woh mujhse galle mile-main tho khairaan hogayi thi-unno ne mujhse yeh kaha ke shaadi ke din jo bhi hua us mein meri koi galathi nahin thi..'

Nandu interrupts..'Haan jassi lekin woh log tumhe GM vapas aane denge..kabhi nahin!!!..Armaan ko yeh lagtha hai ke tum usse barbaad karna chaathi ho..tho phir woh tumhe GM mein aane dega..'

Jassi: 'Kuch bhi ho nandu lekin GM mein ownership ki problem chal rahi hai..courts bhi summon kar rahe hain unnein!..Aur tum tho jaanthe ho ke main hi GM ki asli maalkin hoon..mera GM jaana ab tho paka hain nandu..'

Nandu: 'Jassi..kya tum apne dil ko sambhaal pao gi GM mein?..'

Jassi: 'Nahin nandu..armaan yeh sach na jaane tho better hoga..main nahin chaathi ke phir main armaan ki takleef ka kaaran banu..armaan yeh samajh tha rahe ke main usse nafrath karthi hoon issi mein uski balaai hai..'.. Tears roll down her cheeks as her heart breaks at the tough task she'll have to face ahead-Will she be able to forget Armaan?-Probably never-but she knows she has to try!..

Edited by aishah - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow pls continue.....i am loving this track..jassi back in her house no mm and sr.mm and family....back to gm now thats what i call great work
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank u tina!-lolz i always wanted JJKN to somehow take a 180 degree turn and end up back on BLF track!-so i thought if not in reality why not in my dreamworld 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I lowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwed it!!! Ur great yaar..simply GREAT!!! 👏👏👏...How great this would be if it ACTUALLY happened in the show!!😉😳 Awesome continuation sweetie!😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aabha

I lowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwed it!!! Ur great yaar..simply GREAT!!! 👏👏👏...How great this would be if it ACTUALLY happened in the show!!😉😳 Awesome continuation sweetie!😊

awwww😳-thanks for your very kind words!!-U R GREAT!!😉..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY!!!!!!!!!..Noone is reading my story!-itni buri hai kya? 😛 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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No ways aishah!! itni bhi buri nahin hai!!!😛 Its an awsome story line! plz continue!!!
Hera
Edited by Clana_621 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Clana_621

No ways aishah!! itni bhi buri nahin hai!!!😛 Its an awsome story line! plz continue!!!
Hera

Thx hera😆..but u knw i might as well just pm it to abs,tina,and u😛..my only audience😆..

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