My Mr. A... 2(AR ff) Part 14 pg 86 - Page 40

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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg di!!!!!!!!!!!!! No words.. lik literally i m stuck at words!!!! How can u write so innovatively n awesomastically??kk mujhe pata hai aisa koi word nahi hai😆 i m lik seriously addicted to ur writing...kaise likhte ho itna acha....i guess mujhe bolne ki jarurat nahi hai dat u hav to pm me😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ...gr8 update....i also like talli riddhima ....plz tell armaan s past thx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
just awesome becoz there r no words to describe it specially the last scene
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Posted: 14 years ago

muahhhhhhhhhhhh sweetu..

simply adorable part...

loved the talli rids....n way she was talking..

her antics...just loved them...

n SimSa...sooo sweet...

rids chachi..wanna kill her...

so rids n simsa moving wid armaan...

he is sooo sweet..

thnx for the pm..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hope her parents get well soon
Loved Armaans parents
joy ride begins for AR
so The part was awesome!
Love it!
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
to gud maza agaya
but acha part tha dear
plz update soon
update ur other ff too
thanx 4 the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sani_Rani


GOD!! i mean finally an update!! man m i dreaming??? 😕 *pinching myself* ouuch... damn...tat hurt...n OMG...this isnt a dream!! 😆..lol ok enough of this drama nw lets get to some serious commenting! 😉

"Oh great. Guys guess mera number kiske saath aaya hai flight mein?", riddhima asked sarcastically while armaan just rolled his eyes.

beta riddhima...kahaa tha na...jahaan jahaan tum hogi wahin wahin tumhara Mr. A hoga! 😉 aur agar tum dono saath nahi baithoge...toh story aage kaise badhegi beta?? aur fir saniji ko joote padenge...usse better ki woh tum dono ko saath bathaiye hain? 😛

"offcourse patidev ke saath aaya hai.", riddhima said grinning

ayye hayye! patidev? itni jaldi accept bhi kar liya? 😉...wat man ridz? 😡 u shdnt have accepted na...here i was dreaming about having armaan apne paas...n here u crushed all my hopes! 😭 n m sure sani's too! 😉 😆


"Sir would you like to drink something", the airhostess came with a drink trolley.

"why only sir? why not me?", riddhima complained while armaan bursted out laughing. The airhostess turned crimson red.

lol riddhima thnk god u didnt say "oyye kamini...sharam nahi aati??? u r flirting wid a guy infront of his wife? 😡" 😆so sum1s jealous hunh?...armaan dude...nw even riddhima cant resist u ya! 😉 😛


'Ek drink lene mein bhi itna sochti hai. God what a piece you made', armaan thought with a amused look.

abbey kamine...bhagwaan ne bahut soch samajh ke...tere jaise piece ke liye yeh one piece banaya hai! 😉 sambhal ke rakhna...chodna nahi! 😆 acha chal...chod bhi diya toh main hoon na! 😉 😛


"nahi nahi aur piyo", armaan said angrily

"okie dokie", riddhima said laughing. She was actually enjoying it. Her head which was hurting from the past 2 days was now feeling much lighter.

arre arre y r u worrying armaan beta?? piyegi na woh...bas 20 min ruk...fir dekh is item ka kamaal! 😉 😛

"armaan jab hum log firsht time mile thena waha par *she said pointing towards somewhere and armaan held her hand preventing her from poking someone* yeah and i fell. you said that i turned red cuz i was blushing. sacchi armaan. honest to god wala sacchi ki i wasn't blushing. i was emmmbaaresed", riddhima said pouting and armaan pulled her cheeks saying,

😆 😆 😆 😆 sani babe...seriously "honest to god wala sachi ki" :P this line cracked me up...n riddhima...honest to god waala sachi ki hume pata hai tu embarassed thi...bt sabar karo balak humari saani jaani ne chaha toh soon u will be blushing too! 😉 😛
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"SACCHI?", armaan said excitedly while holding riddhima's shoulders

"D'uh itna bhi nahi pata tha. such a goof you are", riddhima said while hitting her forehead

lol armaan...obvi na...no1 can escape ur charms u see! 😉 n ya man...u r sucha goof...ek ladki ke dil ki baat bhi nahi samajh paye?? 😲 tum itne buddhu kaise ho sakte ho ?? 😆


"hey aur batao na plz. mere baare mein", armaan was now fully interested in knowing everything

haan haan kamine...aakhir hai toh ladka hi na...ladki se khudki tareef sunne mein maza toh ayega hi! 😛

"gosh girls and their unpredictable mood swings", armaan said under his breath.

oyye...abhi tak mood swings dekha hi kahaan hai?? 😛 aur humare jagah pe aage dekho...hum kitne zulm sehen karte hain (including those lustful stares of u guys! 😆)....aur itna kuch hone ke baad...cant we have a lil bit of mood swings?? haan haan bolo bolo?? 😡

"hey thats not true. i really like you. you have a lot of good traits in ur personality.", armaan said seriously as riddhima beamed in happiness.

"really so list some pleashhhh", now armaan gulped. all this time he only thought of how annoying and irritating riddhima is, never pondered on her good traits.

toh kisne kaha tha bina soche samjhe bolne ko armaan beta??? 😛 next time jo bhi bole soch samajh ke bolna...coz we girls have the habit to ask the most unexpected question...😆 n dude...this question was toh totally expected too! 😛

'why is this girl discussin about marriage at this age. GOD!!!!'

abbey oyye khote de puttar...she is toh toking about marriage nw...ask us...at tat age...we toh plan our honeymoon too! Tongue😆 u guys r onli way too slow! 😛


riddhima looked at him strangely and said,

"i didn't get it. you suck at explaining armaan", riddhima said with a huff as she folded her arms against her chest. armaan just smiled

dun wry babes...all guys suck at explaining! 😛


"armaan don't you like me. i mean tumhe kuch kuch nahi hota when i touch u here", riddhima said while keeping hand on his chest making circles. armaan's heart skipped a beat when riddhima touched his bare portion of chest. he politely moved hand from there.

arre arre riddhima....lol dun try to seduce him ya! 😛 if he loses his sense...m sure u will regret it later! 😆 n babes...wait toh...like kya...soon he is gna love u! 😉


armaan was putting riddhima's and two girl's stuff in his car while talking to someone on his phone.
"yeah mum i kept everything................... yes mum simsa ka bhi stuff rakh diya...................... haan mum barbie and disney princess ki bedsheets bhi le aaya. everything done mum........................... okay give the phone to dad............. haan dad i've done uncle- aunties payment and they're moved to private ward from public..................... yup dad the ward has got an AC and a heater........................ haha yeah now am bringing riddhima and my two angels home. can't wait dad and............thank you. love you dad. bye", armaan kept his phone down and turned around only to see a moist eye riddhima looking at him with full of love. their intense moment was broken by sarina's question.
"aal we having a dishney plincess bedsheet? (are we having a disney princess bedsheet?)", sarina asked innocently, jumping up and down. armaan picked her up and hugged her tight.
"yesh baby, and ur not only having disney princess bedsheet, rather a whole disney bedroom", armaan said excitedly. he never had a sibling and suddenly the idea of having both of his princesses staying with him all day made him really happy.
"thank you armaan", riddhima said as her voice chocked.
"the pleasure is all mine sweetheart", armaan said hugging riddhima as well. suddenly simin also hugged them and they looked like a perfect family.

i loved this scene of this part 😊...like thoroughly...armaan is so damn cute yaa.....i loved the way hes helping ridz....*calling out the person whoz made for me* oyye kamine...kidhar hai tu? well jidhar bhi hai...u better learn sumthing from armaan...!! u got to be better thn him okay?...oderwise toh...dun dare to come near me! 😆 😛

continue soon jaani!!
loads of love!
take care!
aditi!

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my dear God itni early morning 5 o clock tumhare FF ke didar i think i m still sleepy itni subha subha MR .A ke didar aaj suraj kaha se nikle ga . itne short time mein 2 FF ke update i love u 4 this.well bhut ho gai apple polish come to the point .nice start tumhare update bhi ridhima ke VODKA glass ki tarha end tak full top high ho gaya .tum ne kya aaj cocktail update diya hai ek hi update mein itna kuch sub se pehle tu flight mein 2 ko saath beetha diya woh zaroori bhi tha warna humare cocktail ka sara flavour kharab ho jata ohh cute kitne pyar se patidev bula rahi thi hello MR.A ab ziyada bhaoo mat khaoo humein bhi pata hai aap ke dil mein bhi bhut arman jag rahay hai patidev sun sun kar ager nahi jagey tu humari sexy churayal hai naan jagane ke liye yeah kisi sey kuch bhi karwa sakti hai.u know what ridhima or us ke dreams read kar ke mujhe apna west asia tour yaad aa gaya hum logo ke man mein bhi tali hone ke arman jagte they jab air hostess hum se drink ka pochti hi meger mummy ko moti toop jaisi gol gol button types eyes dekh khud hi moo se no thanks nikal jata tha . waise humare arman tu adhore reh gey kiyoon ke humare pass arman nahi tha naan meger ridhima ji ke pure ho gey kiyoon ke un ke pass arman un ka MR.A jo tha un ke sare dreams pure karne ke liye .i love this cute little tali ridhima i love this liine ke hosh mein ridhima nahi sambhalti or tali ridhima .beta arman yeah just start hai aage aage dekhoo hota hai kya humari sani ji ne abhi tak aap ke apna jalwa dekhaya kaha hai itne mein dar gey tum ne ek kahawat suni hai (dog) kute ki dum always tadi hi rehti hai boys r just like dogs kabhi nahi sudhar sakte kitna shook hota hai larkiyoon ke moo se apni taarif sune ka yaha arman ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai tali ridhima ke secret jaane ki kitni jaldi hai i m sure is MISS.R ki tu arman bend hi baja dey ga this little tiny winy crush jaane ke baad MISS.R app ne MR.A ki apne little crush ke mein barein bata kar bhut bari galti kar di hai. and i love this kuch kuch hota hai line nahi mujhe bhut kuch hota hai bechara ridhima this is not a right place thora control karo yaar.ek drink ke barein mein itna sochti hai ab yaar koi mineral water tu tha nahi ke bus jat se gat gata jate drink hai soch samjh ke pini hoti hai .ab aya ek or falvoue MR.A ka heart break bhi ho choka hai or woh sound like bhut bura hmmmmmmmmmm don't worry jab ridhima hai tu kya gham hai .
ab aata hai thora ganda bitter flavour karwi karale jaisi chachi i wish mein us ko oven mein dal kar us ki tandori bana kar kutoo ki khila sakti hai but us ke kute bhu refuse kar dete. i hope ridhima arman and puri gang mil kar is chachi ki band bajayee . poor ridhima us ke parents coma mein i love love love this part and i love arman and the entire gang sub ko itna hasane wali ridhima rote huye aachi nahi lagti. i think aisa lagta hai real story ab start ho rahi hai now ridhima ke secrets arman ka heart break and now us ki family hmmmmmmm nice update.arman parents are so cool and supportive i hope woh log ridhima ko apni bahu accept kar le pehle un ka headless beta tu accept karein mom dad tu dur ki baat hai.headless groom koi itni sexy wife ko avoid karta hai kya .i really wants to see ke ridhima arman ke gher mein as a arman ki freind ban kar rehti hai kya as a wife .i hope arman ne apne parents ko apni shadi ke mein barein mein bata diya i really want to see them as a couple or woh bhi arman ke parents ke samne funny very funny yami cocktail maza aaya pat bhi bhar gaya .superb update tumhari ek or quality hai tum ek hi update mein sub kuch dey deti ho like jaise tum ne aaj ke update mein fun maza thora bhut rona dhona ,pain ,parents ki importance ,friendship bond , love, reality of life sub kuch ek hi update mein dekha diya this is ur best quality yeah sirf aaj ke update mein nahi tumhare every update mein yeah baat notice karti ho tum ek time mein bhut sare topic cover karti ho and i love it is liye tumhare FF se log bore nahi hoye hai caz tum time leti ho meger complete satisfy update deti ho sabar ka phal meetha hota hai . hey i m going my little monstor jaag gai hai.
good job keep writting 👍🏼
Edited by moonlight2630 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey di
awesome part
loved it
plz continue soon
waiting 4 the next part
thnx 4 the pm

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