My Mr. A... 2(AR ff) Part 14 pg 86 - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome.........prt..!!

thnx for d pm..!!

update very soon..😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey My Sani Raniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Part yaar .
The start was Fabbbbbbbbbbbbbb.
I was laughing like hell reading it.
I m soooooooooooooo proud of Ridz man she did a great work .
And myyyyyyyyyyyyy AR actually did not fight I m reallyyyyyyyyyyy Happy abt that .
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
Loved it
😃

Love
Ginny




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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon



love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok i m back jaisa ke meine kaha tha
haan tu ridhima("BUDDHE MAAFI BAAD MEIN MAANG LENA PEHLE ISS KAMINE ARMAAN KO MUJ PAR SE UTHAO ISSE PEHLE BHAGWAAN MUJE UTHALE. gosh he's heavy",) apne pati ke barein mein aisi baatein chi chi ghoor kalyug hai.
ab shadi ka laddo khud ne soche bina khaya or gussa bechare pundit ji per (she is gonna make that pundit eat poinsoned laddos made by special chef riddhima ) .
upper wale ne bhut soch samjh kar in ki jodi banaye hai woh kehte hai naan ke (SHEER KO SAWA SHEER HI MILTA HAI) tu ab yaha per hi dekh lo zinda misaal apni wife ki shaan mein bolne se tu arman bhi peche nahi hate (he realised that he got married to riddhima, that bollywood freak, attitude queen, swearing machine, musibat ki dukaan riddhima. 'NOOOOOO GOD YOU SO CAN'T DO THIS TO ME')dekha yeah hote hai pati patni 😡 kitna pyar 😈 karte hai ek dosre ko 😡 .
zara sochoo ager in dono ko honetmoon pe bejhe tu yeah dono tu honeymoon ki puri defination hi change kar de gey kaisa hoga in ka honeymoon intresting naan.
arman("WHAT? riddhima, you were the one giving me open threats to eat me up if i don't bring food to you and now lying blatanly through your teeth. great! god just couldn't give me a better wife.)arman ji ab is se or kitni better chaiye hai itne se ji nhai bhara kya.
or yeah in madam ko dekhoo akal ghaas charne gai hai ab itna hundsom saamne hai phir bhi ("am not ur wife kk. abhi to muje 20- 30 boyfreinds rakhne hai, phir mein shaadi karungi and puhleez tumse to bilkul bhi nahi. Even if you are the last human on this planet, i would rather marry jadu than you")
ridhima tum tu jadu se shadi kar logi bechare jadu ki bhi tu suno ke woh tum se shadi karna chahta bhi hai ya nahi . or uuper se 20,30 boy freinds (ohh GOD in boy friends pe reham karna).
ARMAAN
'why why why me? god kya mein pichle janam mein terrorist tha jo muje aap aisi saza de rahe ho? i mean PURE duniya mein aapko riddhima hi milli thi mere gale baandhne ke liye. kya duniya mein ladkiyo ki kami thi jo meri shaadi isse kara di. SHIT MAN, ab dream girl ko mein muh kaise dikhaunga. i don't understand god, what you have written in my destiny?yeh sab uss bhkaar pack lunch chor riddhima ke wajah se hua hai. huh'
yaar yaeh lines best hai i wonder yaar tum logo ke mind mein yeah lines aati kaise hai .
u know what mujhe bhi village life mein yahi baatein nahi acchi lagti woh log sub galat dekhte hai bardashat karte hai lakkin us galat ke khilaaf fight nahi karte hai.
or us se bhi ziyada yeah jo unch neech zaat ka farak karte hai rich or poor ka fark samjh nahi aata hai upper wale ne aise log banaye hi kiyoon .
tumhaere FF ka yeah turn mujhe bhut aacha laga is FF mein sirf fun masti hi nahi samjhoo tu bhut kuch hai . like ek real life ki reality hai jis ko koi bhi seriously leta hi nahi hai.
is matter mein thanks to GOD ke hum log jis community se belong karte hai us mein yeah unch neech shadi ke time dahej lena yeah sub hai hi nahi hum logo mein ager koi poor hai or woh apni beti ki shadi 1 pair cloth mein karwata hai tu bhi koi us ko kuch nahi kehta infact humare mein ab tu yeah ho gaya hai ke ager larki koi orphan hai and they both love each other tu larke wale hi khud larka or larki dono ki shadi karwate hai.tum ko meri baatein bhut ajeeb lag rahi hogi meger yeah humare yaha hota hai . but mujhe jo humari community ki sub acchi baat lagti hai woh yeah ke hum log kabhi bhi dahej nahi lete samne wale ki hassiyat jo ho woh waisa de leave it yaar mein kaha chali gai.
waise ek baat hai tum funny ,serious,emotional, jis topic ko tum select karti ho apne FF mein tum us ko bhut acchi tarha se express represent, define jo bhi kahoo like jo message tum convey karna chahti ho woh bhut easy way mein samjh aa jaata hai.
ager tum funny type aati ho tu you rocks full time (My Mr. A)is ke start ke jo parts hai jab mein woh read karti mere husband ko lagta tha ke mein pagal ho gai ho jo muhe FF read kar ke hasi aa rahi hai.
ab jaise ke tum ne aaj ke part mein suddenly ek change diya hai us mein sub hai pain,emotions,responsibilty,massege, ke tum logo ko kya samjha rahi ho. yeah tumhari best quality hai jo mujhe acchi lagti or kisi ka apna ek diff style hota hai tumhara yeah hai ke tum jo topic select karti tum puri us ke under rehti ho mein ne tumhare sun FF read kiye hai yahi reason hai ke mein tumhare har FF ki demand karti kiyoon ke sub ki apni hi ek alag baat hai.
hey mein baad mein milti ho abhi i m going . thora kaam hai.
see u again.

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow loved ridz's attitude!!!!

awesum parT!!

BRAVA!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sani!!!!!!
Khotti itna accha fic likhne ke liye tujhe kisne kaha tha?
Yaar mere raaton ki neendh chura li tune!
Actually koi puri raat beth ke fic padhega to soyega kaise!
😆
I read the fic last night and u stole my breath right away!
I wasnt surprised with tge swearing machine idea!
Aisa sirf Churelon hi soch sakte hai!
But throughout the whole fic I love when Riddhima wears her SHORTS and Padma is like "HAYYE RABBA MENU CHAK LE!!!!!"
OMG that was so funny I was surpressimg my laughter wid a pillow!!!!
Raat ko kisiko pata chalta toh mere orchestra baj jaata!
Oh my God they got MARRIED!!!!! [:))]
That was hilarious!!!!!!!!!
Aur toh aur she is screaming at pundit BUDDHA SAALA!!!!
Haha dat was sooo funny!
But da fire part was agonizing!
Neechi jaati ke loh WTF does da have to do wid human beings sheesh!
Agar main hoti na poore ke poore uunchi jaati ke log ko uss hi jalte hue ghar mein dhaka maar deti!
Aweee Ridzy is CHO CHWEET she decided to adopt the girls!
Aur vaise the names are unique!
But u noe I like them!
Ab no more bak bak n u update next fic FAST!
Ab main addicted ho gayi hoon tumhaare writting ki!!!!!
Love ya Loads!

Jinsz!

Aur haan rab kare tere paas hamesha FALTU ka time ho! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
🥳hey sani sister😉😛....(i like it) was reading ur ff..... i will comment from first part..
(may be the situation is in the other parts...but as far as i remember)
1st....
ridzis dialouges were sooooooo....fast ganeration types and hilarious....and her garden fears ....😆😆😆 culdnt stop laughing...
2nd
i dint understand that tear part......
remembering mr a againnnnnn😳😉
3rd
ridz kisliye embaressed thi????
isiliye kyunki vo giri yaaa..issliye ki vo ek handsome ladke ke saamne giri😉😆😕
phir promise??????/😆
4th atheathe hi receptionist se panga😆😆
pink cheeks...😆😆
oh my god....armaan her boss😉
5th
omg...wat agirl...boss se baath kar rahi thi yaa
naukhar se...
pipe?omg....wat a girl nahi...is she agirl😃
arsh....wow...nice name...par armaan se zyaada acha nahi😛...
6th...
sleep walk?....hahahah
boss ko boss ki phone se phone karke
"howz life?"
yaar...yeh ladki hain yaa....ki guts ki phataka
7th
i wanna chiggy wiggy...🤪
KISS😳😳
hugs 4 free....(i want one😳😍)😆
boss ke saamne boss ki chaataa..
8th
wacked by chalk...
who lets the dog out...😆😆😃
ar planning against each other...(not so intresting...they wuld hav planned for each other😳😳....then...MASTH)
9TH
thats wat....
mai yeh soch rahi thi ki.."most awaited part" kyu....
mujhe laga...feelings START honge..
par tune toh...SHAADI kar daali...🥳
vo bhi...laddu ke liye..🤪🤣
10th..
awwwwwww....so sweet of ridzi...
very gud🤗
"BUDHE MAAFI......."
that line was sooooooo hilarious
par....mushkilon ki start?.....y😕😲
and totally totally....sani sister....that was fab job....🤗🤗
(main toh aur bhi emoticons daalna chaathi thi iss post pe...par usse baar baar kholna padtha hain😭....iss liye....aur mom mujhe abh daante gayi hai..ki so ja..😭...iss liye..nahi daal rahi hu)
pm me on the nxt...(maine..itna bada comment jo kiyaa..😳😃..)
continue sooonnnn...
bye,
take care🤗
love
vyshu❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
cant believe armaan fainted on her
loved the shocked gang
AA flirting wow
loved the way ridz stood up for the kids
wonder whats going to happen now
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
made me so happy with ur update



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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Mind-blowing its Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!
countinue soon
and thx alot for the Pm!!!


-Amna

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