My Mr. A... 2(AR ff) Part 14 pg 86 - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
lol dat wz funny hehehehehe cont soon n plz update me on d nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally u update
Awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Update.
Loved it loads.
Specially:-
'yeh kya tha? OMG armaan kissed me on my cheek, he was so close to me and still I didn't push him back. Forget pushing him back, man I was kinda liking it. Yeh muje kya ho raha hai. Agar aisi harkat koi aur larka karta to 2 punches kha chuka hota abhi tak. I was completely in armaan's control AND THAT KAMINA TOOK HIS PACKED LUNCH AS WELL. Yaar ridzy tera to pura plan chopat ho gaya. SH*T man!!!'"
This one.
Mast tha .
Continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahahahhaha...
amazing update..........
armaan ridhimaa....too good yar....
n specially last scene....
waiting for next part....
thnx for the pm..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
mast yaar. love the growing chemistry bw armaan & Ridz. Ridz is evil love her
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Posted: 15 years ago
God how can u be such a rambler..i mean soo like me ;)
Aah BTW The update was JUST wat i wanted..i mean Armaan falling for her And Essshhh the last segment..him taking off his lunch pack from her Aaaaaahhhh !!!
JUST the WAY i waanted ;)!! I am such a pagal Romantic :P !! So i just Loved that isolated jagahj wala part 🤣 !!
Its like just the FF i want...Hilariously Romantic *sigh* !!
Like full tooo Dhamakedaar Rambling....masti...humor with pinch of Romance in all ;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
sani cool update.
armaan baba is gone now and riddhima told him about the lunch box, you and your devils idea, it was a very sweet revenge which back fired but still she has his wallet i guess..
you said next week you are gonna update so it better be..
thanks for the Pm and continue soon..

loads of love..
Mel..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oooooo Wallet toh maine sochja hi nai
Hahaha but Lunch box agaya toh uska kya fayada...Hmm nai kuch toh Panga hai :O
Sanz u better update girl...

PS - my Biggy wud come like i'll start writing after a shower :P like after 10 mins


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Prinnia

Me FIRSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

edited*😉

hey SEXY CHUREL KAMINI JANNEMAAN OF HEAVEN PRINCESS🤗......

atlast u update.....and ATLAST me commenting😉
Ahem ahem😳......i am going to start.....wish me luck😉......

Firstly.........kya kamal ke galiya use karti hai tu👏👏....
1.KAMINA😛...
2.dhobi ka kutta😃
3.DOG😆.....................etc🤣
but they all r supurb👏...... AWESOME😉..Mind blowing😛.....Beyond description👍🏼.........

some lines caught my attention badly😳......

Bhukkar😆😆.........tujhe aur koi idea nahi mila......phir bhi ye wala kamal ka tha😉....
Armaan was shocking😲....usse aapni tiffin ki nahi.....ridz ne usse sir kyu nahi kaha iss baat se pro thi...damn hilarious yaar🤣.........
Armaan was SUPURB😉............must say...he had a great influence on ridz😳........phatak se le gayya lunch box😛.....That's like Mr.ARMAAN mallik😍😆😆........

Above all it's a supurb part😃......MARVELLOUS😛....
aagli part jaldi update karna...warna hum phirse aa jayenge morcha gang leke😆......
anyways...LOVED every bit of the part😳
thanku for the PM😃.......

LOVE U❤️
Only urs😳
heaven ka mufat khana khane wali kamini heaven princess😆😆😆

P.S-this is the first comment which lenght is so BIG...........lol....MUAH........<3<3😃



firstly best of meri jaan cuz u badly needs it. agar achi comment nahi hui to tu to gayi darling😆😆😆.
yaar ab to tujhe meri gaaliyon se used to hojana chahiye. tumhe to mein roz sunati hu jaan🤣 and thanks for giving such high post to ma gaaliyaans. i jus became emotional🤣
nahi yaar tujhe to pata haina ki khaane ke alawa mujhe aur kuch nahi sujhta😉😆😆😆 par thanks and am so glad the heaven princess liked it. mein to dhanya ho gayi😆😆😆
mere ff ke saare character namune hi hai and armaan includes in that category aswell😆😆😆. ab yaar bechare ko bura laga hoga ki riddhima ne usse SIR kyo nahi bulaya. armaan baalak ke emotions ko samajh yaar🤣 ab armaan ka charm hi aisa hai ki ridzy bhi nahi bach paayi. armaan ko na ab hamesha riddhima ke saath seduction seduction khelna chahiye, he can be a good compititor of that game😉😆😆😆 and haan haan time milte hi karungi update meri maa. hamesha dhamkis dene aa jaate hai naalayak morcha gang😆😆😆
and hamesha aise hi BIG comments karna. sexy churel prasanna ho gi.🤣 love u muahzzzz
love
sani
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Posted: 15 years ago
heya sani jaan...!!
*hugs*
itne dino baad teri ff ka chehra dekhne ko mila...!!
ahh...such a relief...!!
lol..
hwzy u..??
gud na..!!
main toh ekdam jakhaas hoon...!!
the part...
hmm..
it was awesum jaan....!!
*applause*
luved armaan n ridzi yaar...!!
their car fifhts...
aise hi chalte rahein..!!
lol...!!
updt soon...
all d bst for ur examzz left...!!
--radz--
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

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Hey Sani ji 🤗😆vini madam jeeeeeee😆 (gosh why do i have to give u so much izzat. it jus doesnt digest😆)


Yaar, me abhi bahut faaltoo thi toh socha tujh par reham kha kar comment edit kar doon........🤣... waise i cant believe it ki toh silent readers ki band bajane wali h ...kyn apne readers ko khona chahti h waise hi itne kam log tere pravachan sun paate hain....... 🤣... waise i m still shocked ki ye thread poora hone se pehle update kaise mil gaya......😲🤣... par den tere ex-hubby k liye toh tu jaan bhi de sakti h, nae?...😉😆 wat a co incidence. mere paas bhi abhi bohot faaltu time tha abhi to socha faltu vini ki comment ka reply kardu🤣 and shhhh secret private messeges tak hi rakh, warna vo log meri band baja denge😆😆😆 mujpe mere ex hubby ka aaj kal bohot influence hai, tabhi update jaldi mil gaya😉😆


On a Serious note(does this word exists for u....🤔😆)... the update was amazing ... aisa lagta h teri hi ram katha sun rahi hun......
"Aise rate par to tu serial killer ban jayegi, waise job buri nahi hai par mummy daantegi."....OMG! i was in splits after reading this particular line.... please pyaari(🤔) si ridz ko baksh de.......🤣 nahi yaar tujhe pata haina mere liye sirf SSGs exist karti hai. aise falti "serious" jaise words nahi exist karte, why do u even try vini😆😆😆. and thank u yaar. ab kya karna for some reason mein aur ridz kitne milte jhulte hai nai. pata nahi kyo?Ermm🤣 i think we all should talk to the ff writer😉😆 and nah abhi mera kisi ko bhi baksh ne ka mood nahi hai, roz roz aa jate bhik maange🤣


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Sometimes she is the most innocent thing on planet and sometimes she is such an atom bomb jo jab phat ta hai to bohot dard hota hai. Ufff how can I forget that kick!!! "....haha...bechara kabhi chah kar nae bhul sakta us kick ko............🤣 ab aisi special jagah choose karke maari ho kick ridzy ne ko kaun kambakht bhul sakta hai aisi kick ko🤣


Awww... armaan was so keenly observing ridz unconsciously .......😳...it was really soo adorable.. i know kamina kuch zyaada hi closely observe kar raha tha. he better be careful next time, warna agar ridz ne dekh liya then muje mat blame karna🤣

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gar mein king hoti na to mein usse apna slave banati phir mein usse adivaasi waale kapre pehnakar item number par dance karwati."...not bad idea... 🤣 i know meri bohot purani tamanna hai apne dushpan par aise atyachaar karne ki🤣

I luv d effect armaan has on ridz... par bechaari ka poora plan chopat kar diya... kitni muskil se toh uske shaitani dimaag me idea aaya tha.. woh bhi fail...tch tch...ridz ki toh image ll go in the drains now.......🤣 ab riddhima apne aap ko face kaise karegi. her image is truly spoiled. bechari ne lesson mein dyaan nahi diya and plan banaya🤣 armaan baalak used his brains on the last minutes😆😆😆


Man, m soo obsessed with ur FF ... Its such a relief ... luv ya sooo much for this update ... bt i really found it small... kya karoon my appetite isnt soo weak.........😉🤣... kamini tu to chup hi reh. pet nahi bhara. jaa kar fridge mein se kuch thoos le.😆😆😆. and wat do u mean by obsessed? and awww am so touched. love u vini my jaan.

ab jaldi se next part post karna else is baar toh comment kar diya baad me toh karoongi bhi nae....n ll definitely sapm ur FF too ...n u knw i hav so many partners for this wonderful work......*evil grin*🤣why do u need to write this para. and jaani hum ab kisi se nahi darte😉😆😆😆. and ur partners won't dare to touch ma ff again🤣

Love
Vini / Vinzi


P.S : I luvd ur SSGs in it... i was laughing hysterically after reading it all...luv ya soo much for it...muaahz! yaar ab to used to hoja meri SSGs se. roz to tumhe sunati hu🤣 but thanks bbz.

P.S.S : Phewww! I updated my comment ...thanx to my faaltoo tym...😆... pata nae aapka isse pet bharega ya nae ...bt i m also not full of the update ... so its sort of payback tym.......😉😆😆
meherbaani vini jee ki aapne apna kimti waqt nikala hamare ff ke liye (kamini nautanki)🤣 and dhamki dena kab band karegi tu😆😆😆

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