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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sravani899
nice and lovely update dear
continue dear

👏👏👏👏

sravs

hi dear......

thanks dear....

main try jaroor karungi..kya hai na.....

mujhe khud pata nehi hota next part me kya hoga...to precap kyase doon....

but surely i try...to put it........

agar nehi di saki to purani serial samjh lena jisme na koi recap aur precap hota tha.😊...

lov,❤️

Tama

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: tinsel
Great Work!😊

thanks dear..😊...

plzzz kepp visiting dear....

lov,❤️

Tama

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: InnerPeace
Nicely written hun...good work.

thanks 4 ur apricealtion.😊...

plzzz .....visit my site....n comment.....

lov,❤️

Tama

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Episode no.8

Jab Hussain us banlow me jakta hai......tab usske Chachu ghar ate waqt use dekh

lata hai......aur use khicke huye ghar leke ata hai.....😕.....

"Chachu, appne aysa kyu kiya......kam se kam mujhe dekhne to diya hota kon hai

woha...😕..app batayenge bhi nehi aur mujhe apna tarike se janne nehi

denge......kya
hai yea Chachu.......? boliyena....😕"

"Tu uss masoom ko marna cahata hai kya.....? Kyu uss ke pinche pada hai tu..?

Ussne tera kya bigada hai....? Kyu use ke ...😭..use rahane de jayse woh rahta

hai..?"

"Chachu........?Main usske jaan........? App kya kahrahe hai mujhe kuch samjhne

nehi
araha hai....😕.thik se boliye na ....plzzz Chachu...🤢......plzzzzzz"

".................."Chacha ji bilkul chup ho kar kada rahta hai kuch bhi nehi bolte

hai.....😕...

"Chachu......koi prob hai uhan.....? Plzz Mujhe bataiye na sayad main kuch madat

kar pau uski plzzz....😕.."

Hussain ke baat khatam nehi hota ki Chacha ji cilla uthte hai......

"Koi uska maddat nehi kar sakta......agar karega uss becharike jaan hi

jayega.....😭......."

"Chachu........😭..."

"Tujhe jane ki bohot shok hai na ..........to sun....😕...

Uss bachi ke naam 'Harpreet Puran' hai..woh apni pati 'Kinshuk Puran'aka iss

sahar ke one of big business tycoon hai...shale kamiyne...."

"Chachu....😕.."

"Phele sun......Harpreet 2 sal pahle yehan apni pati ke sath ayi thi....😕.suna hai ki

use sadhi to ki hai par use bechari ko kahise karida hai...usene....woh sala use

inssan hi nehi samjhta hi.........

Har raat neye naye dost urf apne business partner aur colicko sath lata ai udh

to
sarab me duba hota hai.......aur appni patni ko une logo ko sop deta hai......

Yea phir kudh kisi aur ladki ke sath ranraliya manta hai uss bechari ko bandke

uha baithake rakhta hai......appni kaminapan dhikhane ke liye.......

Khana bhi nehi deta hai use..khud to khabhi khata nehi gharpe .....usko bhi nehi

deta hai..agar khabhi kuch koi bolne gaya to uss behari ko hi mar khana pada

hai......KP bollta hai....use sath cakkar hai.....iss liye to who aya hai yehan ....aur

bohot pitta hai...."

Hussain ke akhon me asu bhar ata hai phir bhi bollta hai..."Chachu..police???"

"Police.....useke karida huya Gunda hai....agar koi complain karne jaye to use jail

me dhal deta hai....iss liye abh ki kuch bolta bhi nehi hai...😕."

" Are Beta,KP ke baap politician hai.....Tu hi bol kon marna chahega.....main to

yea
bhagban se prarthana karta hoon ..us bechari ko apne paas bulale....use aur

taklif na de...."

Hussain bolta hai.... "Woh.....Harpreet nehi Juhi hai...Chachu..Juhi..😊"

"Kon Juhi....?Chod yeabhaten meri baat dhyase sun kal main US jaraha hoon

....Koi gadbad mat karna aur uhan bilkul bhi nehi jana samjha...😕.. "

Par Hussain ka dhyan hi nehi rahta Chachaji samjh jata hai aur uske paas jake

phirse wohi baat bolte hai....🤢... "Mere ek baat sun,who ladki Juhi hai yea

Harpreet
jinede use jayse ho par tu use moth ki karan mat banna.....😕"

Kya Hussain Juhi ko pahecaan ne ki baad bhi bacaye ga nehi..??????

Akhir sach me hi kya Harpreet nehi Juhi hai..???????

Agar Juhi hai to yea sab uske sath kyu huya........kyase.......????????????

Agle episode tak intezar............hum phir milenge.........

To be continue soon...........

Edited by sukklover - 15 years ago

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bahane

@bahane

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

i feel bad because i cant understand your ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!as you know i dont know hendi😕
but i wish all the best for you😛

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Zaryabkhan

@DelightedHeart

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

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