Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

absolutely awesome update! im really looking forward to the next one....poor raj, not knowing the truth about his own wife...it was sweet of him to not flip out on her...please post the next part soon!

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Hi Yeti..how r u dear? so finally u got time to update...hehhehe...m happy that u got time...😊

update ws awesome as usual... 😛

poor Raj ws trying hard to control his emotions ... he wanted to get close to naina as much as possible...but he had to stopped himself before he made fool out of himself...hehehehe...😆

he ws blown by his wife's intelligency..😉...

liked the scene when naina came to know abt shalini's crush for naveen..heheh...she named him rambo...so sweet...😆

naina ws teasing raj abt his nick names given by students....😆😆..

naina's entry as a RAW officer ws awesome..she resembles to her father which confused to Nair also... !!!..BC ws as usual yelling for nothing... raj ws all shocked... but he got in his sense once he heard bad words for naveen from nair's mouth... he punched him hard... nair i mean ye fake nair isi laayak hai....😡

Raj just wanted to know whether Naina ever used him to get info abt triggers or not.... n ws satisfied by her answer...he didnt wanna know anything else...he ws relieved...😳😳😳... thank god he took this all so lightly.... otherwise naina ko to ek misunderstanding hai hi....raj ko bhi ek misunderstanding ho jaati...thanks Yeti for not doing that 😛

mindblowing update...waiting for the next ud....Abhi n nandini's entry... shalini is shocked...why? does she hv any past with him??????

n RN romance ... m waitingggg....😛😛

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

that was an awesome update
loved it completely
Naina's entry was jhakkas
waiting eagrly for next update
plz continue soon

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385641

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

superb update .

naina's persnolity and her smartness resembles her father. you made naina the hero of thjis update. it was amazing.

i pity raj's condition of bearing shocks every now and then.

yuppy!!!!! nair is finally behind bars

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Hi Shilpa...

How are you doing..? I know I haven't unreserved my comments on the previous part, but will do it soon...

Coming to this part...need I say that this was amazing...mind blowing...fantastic...superb.... awesome...(I need to sit with a dictionary the next time you update Dhoka...All my vocabulary just comes to a dead end when it comes to praising only one update of your fic...what to say of the entire story...)

Naina really understands Raj very well, so much so that he need not put his thoughts into words for her, so why doesn't she get it that he loves her when she could get that he wanted a cup of coffee... They did a good job on Nair... and vakeel sahiba helped her husband a lot...

Shalini had to know everything, but this practice of calling the faculty by names was started by Shalini herself was only logical...She is such a nautanki that nobody other than her could have done it... But calling Captain Naveen as Captain Rambo was heights...it left me in splits... But the best part was Naina and Raj remembering Naveen and coming close to each other in the process... Naina is carressing his cheek...wowwwwwwww.....

So Naina decided to take the necessary steps before it was too late...M glad you didn't stretch his arresting any further... Nair did the mistake of blurting out the truth and paid for it... How will that bloody pest know the depth of feelings between BC and Rajveer...??? So Naina's presence reminded everyone of naveen...good...she proved herself to be a worthy daughter...

Last but not the least...the scene in the room... I loved everything about it...Raj's pacing, Naina's concern, his gripping her by arms, the question, her answer and finally the hug........awweeee Shilpa...why did you stop it here...yaar Ye Dil Mange More... but what is the use of telling you...you and your fast updates...they come only after a month... huh...

Coming to the Precap: major Bhargava...hope he is not another traitor... Abhimanyu...and his wife nandini: What made the colour drain from Shal's face...??? And...Ahh...finally some cute romance between RN on Naina's birthday...

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

Love
Guglu

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hi...

loved d updt.....👏
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d way it started wid raj and naina though going crazy 4 each other controlling and discussing NAIR was tooooo goood and very nicely portrayed.

den comes d shalini,raj and naina part..again very awesome 1 and also loved d way rn njoyed der discussion on navin..😳👏.

den d highlight was d entry of naina and d way u described dat part was truly amazing......👏👏👏👏and

loved Nair's frustration and blabbering which resulted in him getting a puch of RAJ.....tooooo good..😈.😉😆
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Also the end wherein RN hugs was very emotional yet beautiful.....😳😳
👏
gr8 updt......👏👏👏👏

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

awsome

superb

wonderful update

great going

plz continue soon

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Hi Shilpa

How r u???

Update was really brilliant..👏👏👏

Naina as always is confused abt her feelings for Raj n he is trying his best to convey his feelings for her through his touch..but as usual Naina doesn't know dis n she still believes dat Raj is in love with Shalini..I hope her confusion is solved

Naina is an intelligent officer..Way she solved Nair's mystery was indeed brilliant👏👏

Every1 was so shocked to know dat Naina is a RAW agent specially Raj ..

He was very shocked but he didn't reacted in a negative way..That was a relief indeed.😊

I hope Naina soon realizes Raj's feeings for her..😃

Bye

Pls continue soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Update was Superb. 👏👏👏

Now that Raj knows that Naina is a criminal lawyer he is happy to discuss the clues that he has found on Navin's case. Naina is brilliant...the way in which she solves Nair's mistry was indeed impressive. Raj is proud of his wife.

Naina is confused about her feelings for Raj...she loves him and feels herself melt with his touch. Raj wants to express his love to her but is waiting for to know whether she loves him or not. Yaar yeh dono apne hi confusion mein ek dusre se door reh ne ki koshish kar rahe hai...but are failing constantly.😆

Naina has told Shalini about her true identity and now all three of them can discuss the progress of navin's case easily. And one can always rely on shalini to lighten the tensed situation...just what the doc prescribed for our serious couple.😉

It is good to see Huda being serious about his work. He has stood by naina completely.

Everyone is shocked to hear that Naina is a RAW officer😲😲. Brig, Chandok cannot believe that someone is impressonating to be Maj. Nair. And is the real traitor.😡

It was a relief to see that Raj did not miisunderstand Naina. And he knows that naina would never use him to get information on the triggers.😊

Waiting to see what happens next. To see Raj's full reaction, And also the reactions of everyone else at KMA...especially Shalini.

And waiting the most to see these two confess their love for each other. and naina's misunderstanding to be cleared

Please continue soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Hey yeti,
superb update dear. 👏 👏 👏
Vaise ek baat to hai ki hum sab chahe jitne bhi jaldi comment de dein, tujhe update karne me time lagega hi.
Coming to the update.
Just loved that part. 😃 😃 😃
Specially the second part was outstanding when Raj came to know about the truth that Naina is a RAW Officer.👏 👏 👏
👏First part was sweet n i loved it. (u know when Raj n Naina are together ) than all is g8. 😳 😳 😳
Raj is trying to coming close to Naina. He wants to know the truth weather Naina likes him in the same way as he does or not and i think up to an extent he found the answer of his question.😉 😉 😉
I liked the way in which Raj was trying to move closer and Naina can't resist too 😳 😳 😳. She knows very well that which type of effect Raj has on her.😉 😉 😉 She loves that experience too but she is confused about Shalu n Raj.😕 😕 😕
g8 mind Naina has yaar, how she linked all the joints b/w Nair n about his past record. Huda is his assistant in the mission, gud selection by Naina yaar.👏 👏 👏
👏Shalu has a crush over Captain Naveen, vow. Raj is called by the name of Mr. handsome, how sweet. 😳 😳 😳 Liked Naina's playfulness with rajveer and this is the time when both should clear all their confusions. 😛 😛 😛
The thing i liked the most in the update was Raj's trust over Naina n yeah he does that's y he asked only one question that has she ever used him?😲 😲 😲 And now i think this will make their relation more strong 😛 😛 😛. The way Raj gave a solid punch to Nair i liked that 👏 👏 👏. Vaise bhi us ne aise batana start kiya tha jaise kitna bada kaam kiya hai captain Naveen ko maar kar. 😡 😡 😡
Naina gives totally a shadow of his father.😊 😊 😊 I liked her attitude when she got that man. 👏 👏 👏 BC was once again shocked and i am sure now he will have no problem about Naina n Raj's relationship.😉 😉 😉
😉yaar pls continue asap.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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