Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Update was very good,

There is absolutely no reason to complain. RN scenes are always a delight...and more the better.😊

Naina is feeling very shy😳 and is not even able to kiss Raj back. Raj understands her hesitation and does not push her. But enjoys teasing his wife completely.😉

The scene with Raj and Huda was a surprise. First to have Huda confess his love so boldly and then for Raj to give his permission to Huda but with strict caution. Huda being the true gentleman wants Raj's permission to have a relationship with his sister. And it was probably this honesty and maturity that convinced Raj to give Huda the benefit of doubt.

Raj easily notices that something is bothering Shalini. And so when he tries to find out, shalini pours her heart out. After all even she cannot hide her emotions and pain from Raj.😲

Naina understands that Shalini needs her friend and so tries to excuse herself when Raj and shalini were talking. But when Shalini stops her, she understands that Shalini considers her as a friend as well.

Naina is shocked😲 to hear that Abhimanyu refused to continue his relationship with Shalini because she supported Raj and Navin. But this is not new on abhimanyu's part. Galatiyan karna toh uski aadat hai.😡

Both Raj and naina feel guilty for the damange caused in Shalini and Abi's relationship. And seeing so much care and concern from her freinds Shalini forgets her sadness and is once again back to her normal nature. And she is corred RN jodi is indeed a 'ram ne milayi jodi'.😆

please continue soon

Quote

ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

comments after my exams....but continue real soon....and yes, I had guessed abt Abhi and Shal....So a candy for me....

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Hiii shilpa,

Awesome Blowsome part dear 👏👏👏👏👏

Raj nainas part is so romantic....Naina ka sharmana,their kiss..everything is so lovely

Huda n rajs convo is nice....huda telling raj i want to woo your sis ....liked it how he asked Rajs permission to talk to sameera about his feelings

Shalini asking naina ki tumhare pati dev ne tumhe kya gift diya ?😆😆😆😆...bechari naina kitna blush kar rahi thi

this stupid Abhi se aur kya expect kar sakthe hain....hate him

totally beautiful part ..plz continue soon

Quote

Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

that was just superb
but RN ka romance sirf itna sa hi
i want more
but loved it anyways Abhi is such a jerk
plz continue soon

Quote

Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Hi Shilpa

Brilliant part👏👏

Quote

Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

He he he he 😆 😆 😆
i am so happy because finally i was waiting impatiently for such kind of update dear 😍 😍 😍.I mean Raj n Naina their love n closeness. 😳 😳 😳
Superb dear 👏 👏 👏
Raj said nothing but said everything. Naina understood that she only misunderstood her husband who loves her a lot. Their passionate encounter was really nice and i specially loved that lines when Raj said to Naina "kiss me back Naina". And the way she was blushing and Raj was behaving not to be over passionate was really sweet.
He cares of her a lot and he feels same ki agar abhi vo Naina k saath bahut jyada deep hoga to may be Naina will not feel comfortable at all. I like his way of thinking and that's y v love our Raj because he is really different n that's make him really special.
Naina was too shy that's she doesn't want to look in his deep gray eyes. Raj knew that now there is no need of words or to say i love u, both of them can feel each other and their love.
Shalini showed that she is still that bubbly n lovable Shal but she knew that very well Raj will notice that soon n she would not be able to held her tears now.
Yudi is really nice, he didn't show that he knew that Shalini became weak sometime ago. Raj noticed a blankness in Shal's eyes and her changed behavior.
Oh god that Huda, i was laughing hard when he went to take permission of Raj for his sister and the way Raj gave him a sweet warning that he would never hurt his sister otherwise he must be ready to have his punch was really funny.We could never expect this side of Huda as being so sincere for Sameera.
Finally Shalu told each n everything to Raj that Abhi is back n with his wife this time. It's a big reason for a girl to broke down when she see her love with his wife. I really knew that Abhi can do such thing because apart of being Raj's friend i never trusted him.
I really hate that Abhi. Now Naina is really not jealous with Shal because she know the truth. Shal too told her each n everything without any problem n gave her a new relation that she is Shalini's friend.
I like Shal's statement that she is like Rajveer, trying to say sorry for that matter which doesn't belongs to her. Now Shalini is firm that she will face Abhi without any weakness and as bold as she is. Sorry i forget to mention that teasing session of Shalini when she asked Naina about her birthday gift by Raj.
update fast dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

Quote

ayesha

@AdorableAyesha

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

The rest of the gang are not so happy with Neelu's plan and feel nervous when they see Aalekh controlling his anger!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yudi saying that his only childhood friend jisse woh itne dino baad mil raha hai lekin lagta hai aaj uska aakhri din hoga was funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Neelu had to do something as she could not let Aalekh ignore her all the time!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Neelu is playing with fire magar kya kare jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle toh ungli tedhi karni hi padhti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

To stop anything from happening Huda starts dancing and makes others join in as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and suited each pair perfectly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The words suited each one perfectly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Aalekh is feeling nothing but rage and fury seeing Karan touch Neelu!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

The alcohol is eating away his false defences and he was losing the battle with himself!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neelu's heart constricted at the naked pain in Aalekh's eyes but she had to do this for herself and Aalekh!!!!!

Huda is totally fida over Sameera and cannot control his heart from taking over!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Aalekh finally could not hold himself any longer and carried Neelu out of the party hall as Neelu gave a thumbs-up sign to Karan!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina told Raj that Nair is an imposter and how she had got him to call into the trap!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is impressed and then Naina tells him that she is a qualified criminal lawyer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is surprised but not at all angry to know that Naina is a criminal lawyer!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He in fact feels proud of her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina keeps losing herself in Rajveer's gray eyes and can see love for her in them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

But she thinks she is hallucinating and still thinks that Raj loves Shalini!!!!!

Raj has fallen deeply in love with Naina and keeps losing his control in front of his wife!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He forgets where he is and all he knew was that his love was in his arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Naina also reacts to his closeness and is lost in her whirlpool of emotions!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj jokes around asking ke Naina ne usse kuch aur toh chhupaya nahi hai naa!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

But this makes Naina more nervous as she has hidden the biggest truth of her life from her Raj her hubby and now the love of her life!!!!!!!

She is worried about how he would react when he finds out that she is a RAW agent!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh is at war with himself and been pacing at the edge of the cliff while Neelu waited patiently!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh manhandled Neelu a bit but Neelu responded carelessly!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

She knew she was pushing him towards the edge but she also knew she had no other way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aalekh admitted ke usse fark padhta hai jab Neelu kisi aur ke saath hoti hai toh!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I loved the way Aalekh kissed Neelu as if proclaiming the fact that she belonged to him and only him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally Neelu's plan worked and Aalekh confessed that he loves her very much and she is only his!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

love ayesha

Quote

Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Hi Shilpa

Wonderful update..

So finally Raj expressed his feelings with his actions rather than words to Naina n she was so much shocked at this..She was loving this experience but being so innocent she didn't knew wat to do..😊

Their kiss was beautiful..😃

Raj is so lost in her but then he remebered that ultimatum from Shalini😉😳😆😆

Raj noticed that Shalini is not behaving in her usual manner..as her best friend he knw that something is troubling her n when Shalini told him abt Abhi he was furious.

Naina was so shocked to know all this..She was so sorry for Shalini..Shalini was right that they both deserve each other😛

Pls continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

Quote

himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

sigh....
I know I know.... I have been practically invisible here..... 🤢 😭
😭
I will surely try to update soon! And also try to reply to all the comments.... believe me... I read them all many number of times and LOVE them.... 😛