Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi Shilpa...

How are you doing..? I know I haven't unreserved my comments on the previous part, but will do it soon...
Hi guglu... thanks for your comments.... and the previous part is still waiting I think.... *cough cough* 😆

Coming to this part...need I say that this was amazing...mind blowing...fantastic...superb.... awesome...(I need to sit with a dictionary the next time you update Dhoka...All my vocabulary just comes to a dead end when it comes to praising only one update of your fic...what to say of the entire story...)
aww... thanks a lot yaar.... I am glad you liked the update..... next time ask me for a dictionary... 😆

Naina really understands Raj very well, so much so that he need not put his thoughts into words for her, so why doesn't she get it that he loves her when she could get that he wanted a cup of coffee... They did a good job on Nair... and vakeel sahiba helped her husband a lot...
feelings are more complex than a cup of coffee yaar.... 😆 jokes apart, neither Raj nor Naina is an expressive or demonsrtative person... they are someone to express their feelings openly... in such a situation, it is pretty easy to get either confused or uncertain of what the other feels.... Raj was initially uncertain but now could recognize that Naina reciprocates his feelings.... Naina is still confused... 😆 bachi hai... give her some time... she will understand.. 😆

Shalini had to know everything, but this practice of calling the faculty by names was started by Shalini herself was only logical...She is such a nautanki that nobody other than her could have done it... But calling Captain Naveen as Captain Rambo was heights...it left me in splits... But the best part was Naina and Raj remembering Naveen and coming close to each other in the process... Naina is carressing his cheek...wowwwwwwww.....
who else but Shalini could have done such a great deed? 😆 and she had such a crush on Navin... 😆 but nope.. she wont hesitate to accept that to Navin's daughter... 😆

So Naina decided to take the necessary steps before it was too late...M glad you didn't stretch his arresting any further... Nair did the mistake of blurting out the truth and paid for it... How will that bloody pest know the depth of feelings between BC and Rajveer...??? So Naina's presence reminded everyone of naveen...good...she proved herself to be a worthy daughter...
arey yaar... aur kitna stretch karoon? its already 24 parts... the story has to complete at some point of time na.. 😆

Last but not the least...the scene in the room... I loved everything about it...Raj's pacing, Naina's concern, his gripping her by arms, the question, her answer and finally the hug........awweeee Shilpa...why did you stop it here...yaar Ye Dil Mange More... but what is the use of telling you...you and your fast updates...they come only after a month... huh...
hehehehhe... who me? *innocent muh* 😆
what to do yaar? work is keeping me so busy nowadays... previously I was happily unemployed and I could update Dhoka every few days... but paapi pet ka sawaal hai... 😆 so now I have less and less time for updating Dhoka.... but I will try my best to not stretch over a month.... *runs away* 😆

Coming to the Precap: major Bhargava...hope he is not another traitor... Abhimanyu...and his wife nandini: What made the colour drain from Shal's face...??? And...Ahh...finally some cute romance between RN on Naina's birthday...
how can Bhargava not be a traitor.... 😆 anyway, after Nair, the "dhoka" part of the story ahs to move forward... so Bhargava is entering KMA to get caught by Raj and Naina soon... 😆
Abhi-Shalini back story will be revealed pretty soon... nothing major... everyone can guess... 😆

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

Love
Guglu

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
hi...

loved d updt.....👏
👏
hey thanks for the comments... glad you liked the update.. 😃

d way it started wid raj and naina though going crazy 4 each other controlling and discussing NAIR was tooooo goood and very nicely portrayed.
thank you.. 😃

den comes d shalini,raj and naina part..again very awesome 1 and also loved d way rn njoyed der discussion on navin..😳👏.
they are slowly healing each other's wounds and pain..

den d highlight was d entry of naina and d way u described dat part was truly amazing......👏and
thanks again 😃

loved Nair's frustration and blabbering which resulted in him getting a puch of RAJ.....tooooo good..😈.😉😆
he did the wrong thing in front of Raj.... he should have thought about the consequence of bad-mouthing Navin in front of Raj... 😆
😆
Also the end wherein RN hugs was very emotional yet beautiful.....😳😳
more coming up... 😉
👏
gr8 updt......👏

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sania_58
awsome
superb

wonderful update

great going

plz continue soon

thank you... glad you liked the update... 😃

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

update was wonderful.i loved the raj's surprise to naina and the you had written their feelings .it wasbrilliant.

yeh bhargav ki entry ? villan ban kar in dono ki story to kharab karne nahi aaya?

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Part 23:

At first....lets cum to Raj n naina as usual....I loved the way the scene progressed....so Naina is an almost criminal lawyer....thats gud....but even better was Raj's reaction....the way he came closer....their growing feelings and racing heartbeats.....it was all too beauiful....but guess Naina is still hiding sumthing....must admit this is a dam mysterious fic....but I love to see mysteries being unfolded.

And now Aalekh-Neelu....Neelu did hav a perfect plan for making Aalekh confess it all.....and am glad it turned out to be exactly perfect as poor Karan didnt hav to get killed....instead Aalekh just took her off...hehe....and the way the confession happened.....it was very sweetttttt!!!

And here....Huda is also realizing or rather hav realized his love....gud for him.

In short this has been another beautiful part....wid a lovely song in it....I wonder how u always manage to find such lovely songs that I love....hehe.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Ohkay.....so here is the reply for part 24:

Loved that session of Raj n naina.....Raj calling her a criminal mind before being smacked by her.....that was a sweet scene....and then his keeping the hand along her shoulder and her raced up heartbeats to that.....again a sweet scene. I loved it when he softly kissed her temple....and that silent love that flowed thruout the whole scene.....I so loved that softness all the while!!

Then came along Shalini....and the three had quite a nice tym....remembering Captain..Rambo....hehe. And yeah....it was gud to realize that they cud remember him with a smile as well.

And now....Naina being a RAW agent......she got Nair arrested....that was a nice one....however I was too keenly concentrating on Rajveer's expressions I guess.....I mean....the expressions u had described....hehe. And luckily.....it all went well.....and he took her in his arms....phew!! I had my fingers crossed and my breath caught up....until I had read the last portion...hehe. May be thats the magic u create while writing....that I cant roll down the page....skipping a bit....even if I want to....

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Part 25:

Wow!!! Samajh me nahi aa raha hai shuru se shuru karu ya anth se....I guess starting wud a gud option.....So I hav to say....I loved that scene btwn Raj and Naina....their want for each other.....along wid Naina's inhibitions and not really understanding her own feelings.....and then the withdrawal.....it was all done very beautifully!!

And then Naina told Raj abt her life....that was a nice one.....and it was gud to see them sharing every aspect of their lives wid each other....without any feeling of hesitation at all.

And now entry of Mogambo.....oh....so ryt Shalini was....Muchhar ke jate hi ye aa gaya.....uff!!!

But here on Naina's birthday....as raj plans a surprise....Shalini gets a shock of Abhimanyu's return along wid his wife Nandini....ohh....she was so lonely at that point....but it was sooooo nice to see Yudi being there....with her!! And as long as u continued wid the two couples.....along wid the song.....it was a nice sequence.

But I hav to admit it went on to being nicer....as Raj so passionately wished Naina...."Happy Birthday".....wat a birthday it has been for her!!!

I specially loved her realization lines.....it was so long awaited!!!

Now wat more to say dear.....pls continue soon wid the next part....and yeah....am sorry for the delay in commenting.....but I hav been too busy wid so many things....I really didnt knw wat to do and when to do....so pls pardon me in that respect....and pls try to continue soon!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

sorry yaar double post

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#119

Hey yeti, excellent update dear. 👏 👏 👏
Thank god ur back with a bang, i mean an update which is full of RN romance from start till end.
Rn believes his wife now and Naina gave a trust too that she never used Raj for her mission and the best thing was that she told each and every thing about her past life. This was now needed agar ab Naina kuch bhi Raj se chipati to theek nahi hota. Now they have a very close and nice bonding. I feel really sweet whenever Raj gives support to Naina and they comes close. That's so sweet and when they forget to control their feelings that's so cute too.
So to new ppl in KMA r back, one is that irritating creature Captain Bhargav and second one is so confused and useless ARC. I didn't like him in LRL too. He never know what to do. Bhargav is trying his best to find out something about Nair and i think may be he can find it soon, but i don't want nair to be killed by Bahrgav. Because i want this time proof against all. BC suspected Bhargav immediately that how come someone come so quickly after that big incident? When Nair can't be trusted so how can someone trust Bhargav.
BC clarified that he doesn't like Bhargav, vaise BC pakad lete Bhargav ko par baal baal bacha vo.Here Abhi ko dekh k Shal was broken specially when she heard that Abhi is with his wife now. I am sure that in past life they had a relation but ABhi ditched Shal. In reality i don't think he deserve Shal because as compared to him she is more gud. She want to b alone for sometime or she wanted to cry in front of Rajveer but she knew that he was busy that time with his wife.
Good decision taken by BC that he doesn't want to tell the main reason behind Major Nair's disappearance. This can be dangerous. Naina had a Secret desire that Raj would wish her on her birthday but her desires gone all in vain but he didn't do that. All her friends didn't even wish her. I think all of them wanted to give her surprise. All thanks to Shal who managed all this for Raj and thank god this time Raj is ready to confess his feelings in front of his wife because jahan tak Naina ki baat hai i don't think she gonna do this first.
Naina was pleasantly surprised when she found all this her favorite decos for her. Her mood was off and i think is k liye hi Shal, Sameera and pooja bought her on shopping. She never expected that much beautiful surprise to her by his husband. Now she also is lost in his charm and i think she forget every thing about the world, now she is feeling that his husband is looking so dashing in that dress.
Unconsciously she went closure to her as if she is surrender to a magic. Raj did all things whatever Naina likes. The song selection was awesome i specially like your description with each line. The feelings and understanding all i love is this. Yudi gave a warm and soothing feeling to Shal's heart. Now her opinion will get changed for Yudi. As she thought that Yudi is immature but he is not. He is sensible and understanding guy.
So finally Raj wished Naina happy birthday, i am waiting for Raj's acceptance of his feelings for Naina. Ab i don't want 2 wait anymore yaar.
update fast.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Hey everyone,
Guess who is back... 😆

Since I didnt give a precap last time, I am planning to update this weekend as a bonus.... 😆 Its the long weekend here in US and I am taking a much-awaited rest and sitting back to catch up on a lot of stuff including Dhoka.... 😳 I have already started writing Part 26... 😲 😆

So here is the last and final call to everybody who has simply reserved their places for the previous update.... believe me, I read each and every comment many times and reserved's are not what I am looking for... 😉 😆

I know I havent been replying to comments at the same pace as the updates but I intend to address that issue too this weekend, even if IF complains that I spam!!!... so I am not ignoring your comments and all you silent gals better start becoming vocal... 😛

Yeti

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