Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10)

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

awww
di
i just read part 26
n it was wonderful n awesome
really very sweet
i loved the whole thing very much

pooja

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

wow di
part 27 was just so beautiful
loved reading tht whole thing

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeee
Sonam di
such beautiful meanings
just wow
i really really loved he last part as well
ethereal
loved all the parts so much
n waiting for ur new ff
update soon

pooja

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#374

It was really a beautiful end

Both the parts were fab

Knwing them frm each others point of was jus so much good

Nisha reall left the hope of having sumthg better in life but Vivaan came

I jus loved this line😆😆

"as if Dia, Uday and Benji on gunpoint had forced God to fill my life with happiness and love like they always did when they were with me .... "

Vivaan's point of view for Nisha was really fab

She was really the evening in the blazing morning - like life of him

Loved it Di

Will Miss this FF a lotttttt

Hop we gets its sequeal di😉

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mayur_bigfan

@mayur_bigfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#375

w0w!!! wonderful ff!! i noe i never commented.. but i checked ur ff regularly for upd8 nd always hit the like button.. i really loved the whole ff.. plz pm me in future if u write any more ff's.. iwud love to read more ff's written by u!! 😊

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#376

hey sonam di,

wow this is fabulous ..loved it to d core....the names so apt and wonderful....im really rendered speechless....the way u've penned ur thot's and all is jz simply awesome...

especially the last 2 parts were awesome more beautiful thn d confession....it really gave an
insight abt their true feelings n emotions i mean god thy tried so very hard to repress their emotions bt
at the end evn destiny wantd thm to meet n b together till eternity....truly soul mates...
even the names u choose were perfect to describe their importance not in their life but the significant others life !!...i'm really floored by ths story of your !!

i really enjoyed reading this piece of work by u!!
hope to enjoy further stories by u ! 😊

-love fatima 😊

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#377

Wow
waht an ending dear
totally rocking
i enjoyed the whole journy of Vivaan and nisha
they r simply awesome.
u wrote the whole thing beautifully.
brilliant job sweety.
Fantastic.
mind-blowing
loved it so much
me gonna to miss this ff for sure.

plz write a new ff on mayur.
take care urself , baby and jiju.