Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10)

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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#351

heyyy dear,
awesome one
thanks for PM.
continue soon

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

Nice update but too fast

They got married also hmmmmmmm chalega

I toh felt Nisha's parents wont let her cum back after knwing Vivaan;s truth but they did

Awesum

Loved their trust on their daugther

A month actually felt lik Eternity to them

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

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great part dear..finally they are married....awesome update dear.......

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maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

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awesom,fabolous update

mayur got married

plz do continue soon

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Sonam Mathur

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Soliloquy - Spirit Of Life

All the colors had faded from my life .... my life was full of tears and loneliness .... everything was dull and there was nothing to make me feel good .... life was one big tragedy .... a girl like me, whose life revolved around her friends, who was always protected by her friends was suddenly left lonely in the big bad world .... no one to share feelings with ... no one to care for me ... no one to enjoy with .... no one to hold my hand when the world scared me ....

What could be more devastating than seeing your friends forever dieing in front of you and you just lying away .... so helpless .... I saw them burning in front of me and I couldn't do anything to save them .... One night changed everything .... there was nothing but memories of the past .... which always ached my heart .... I always questioned - Why i was left alive? The people who go away, don't feel anything but the one who is left behind ... who has to live, their's no choice ... who has to sustain and yet move on ....... it's painful to see parents of your best friends crying and it's more painful when you walk on the streets alone where just a few days ago you had three most adorable to walk with ..... I was shattered inside, nothing left ... when my parents decided to send me away from the memories, so that I can recover from the pain ......

Oracle ... who would have thought that a place so gloomy will give me the joy of life, again .... but it did .... not fully though ... I got Grace and Sam who were always there beside me ... they made me smile, they always comforted me yet I felt empty inside ... as if my heart was waiting for someone ... someone .....

And then, what I thought of a skittish dream, turned out to be the most beautiful veracity ever .... now that's what you call life ... you crib about it and it gives you the most pulchritudinous gift ever ..... and I got my gift in him ..... he who entered through darkness and filled my life with light, with colors and with what my heart was craving for ...... love .....

His one sight was enough for me to breathe .... I started living again .... I felt like Aurora who was sleeping all the while until Phillip came and his love woke her up .... yes I was in love, madly truly, deeply in love with him who hated me like hell .... but I couldn't help it ....

I don't know when, I don't know how ... but he became the reason for me to live ... it was destiny who brought us closer .... but my mind couldn't stop thinking about him ... his harsh words didn't help me to stay away from him ... they just pulled me nearer .... because in some way he had become my guardian angel because he never let anyone or anything hurt me ... as if only he had right to it and no one else ....

His rage, his words and his actions confused me but one thing was sure that I loved him and then life again took a turn and I got the biggest surprise ever ... as if Dia, Uday and Benji on gunpoint had forced God to fill my life with happiness and love like they always did when they were with me ....

He kissed away my tears, my pain and filled my life with joy and love ... HIS love ... he confessed me his love in the most truthful manner and I saw the light in his eyes .... and I knew we were meant to be together ...... he promised me to be with me till the end of time and even beyond it and I knew he was the shore to my wandering life ....

When I gave up, he became truthful to his name ..... he, Vivaan - The Spirit Of Life .......

Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago

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Sonam Mathur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

Soliloquy - When The Sun Sets And The Nightfall Begins

Usually people take light as good and dark as evil ... but for me ... the sun mean t the Cyclops - the one eye giant .... the sunshine mean t flames and the light mean t burning .... I never say that my past was dark because it was not cold ... it was fire ... I burnt inside but couldn't help it ... blood all around me ... I became an animal, I was scared of myself .... of the people around me ... how could people just kill each other for few pennies .....

But I did it ... I did everything that was inhumane .... I humiliated God with such cruel deeds ... how could I be at peace when I was snatching away smiles and peace of innocent people ... But I feared the people I was with ... the demons themselves ... they snatched away my innocence and made me as evil as them ... how can I forget the tears and the sobs that haunted me as soon as I would return after murdering someone ... why me? Who gave me the right to end someone's life ... it's God who is supposed to do it ... not me? Why me? I was a monster ... I could feel people cursing me ... I knew that my life was ruined and I was ruining many other lives ....

But then someone had trust on me and decided to reform me .... I can't stop myself from thanking that person who tried to change my life ... But the fear never went away .... the fire never extinguished ... what if I again become that monster, what if I fail in killing that devil inside me .... what if I never change .... I didn't know what to do ... life was such a big mess ... a ball of fire .... nothing to rescue me .... no one to hold me ..... no one who could understand the real me ... how could I tell that I am not bad ... it was the circumstances and the people, not me ... but who would trust a guy from a reform school .....

Then came in Oracle ... by the time I joined it, I was completely changed ... man with a few words ... rage as hell but inside I cared for everyone around and hated people who tried to hurt others .... I could see the people here were so happy, enjoying their beautiful live unlike Sara, Clare and me ... but these girls were strong ... and top of it, they hadn't done things as evil as mine ... Sara was a daughter of a criminal whereas Clare was a thief ... she had done all sorts of robberies but had ever hurt anyone ... it was just me whose hands were drenched with blood ... I met Sam, the fun loving guy ... he inspired me to be happy yet I felt incomplete ..... like a piece of heart was missing ...

And then, in my blazing life came the twilight .... finally in the burning days entered the cool nightfall ... yes, she was here .... she who came as a cool zephyr ... yes, the God forgave me, forgave my sins but why she .... she is purest soul alive ... why make her fall in love with a devil ... I knew I was in love with her ... finally found peace in someone ... but I couldn't be selfish ... I have no right to ruin her life ... she could get much better man than me ... yet she loved me ... how could she?

I tried to be as aggressive and as cold as possible to her ... but she, she still loved me ... how can someone love me? I couldn't see her tears and neither could see anyone trying to hurt her ... I was bad but there were people more gross than me and I didn't want her to be in pain ... I wanted to see her happy even if that meant stabbing myself ...

But this girl was insane ... she still, after all the bad behavior of mine ... loved me crazily ... and I understood that in me lay her happiness and that destiny had already planned to bring the devil and angel close ... we were mean t to be together ....

With her came the peace, the cool evening when the sun has finally lost and the fire was extinguished ... she, the evening in the blazing morning - like life of mine ..... she, Nisha ........

The End

Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

Reserved for my comments..

LOL...Jess di...Muahahahahahahahaha!!!

*edited*

Sonam di..

Vivaan...the spirit of life...The ray of sun in her dark life...Nisha!!!

That was one beautiful chapter...

As truly pointed out by you..

"now that's what you call life ... you crib about it and it gives you the most pulchritudinous gift ever ..... and I got my gift in him ...."

Wonderful lines di..

Lovely update..to say the least..

I cant bear though that this FF is getting over!!!!!!

Akansha..

@ jess di..Di..do i get two points for this..so it makes it 6-5..What say?

*edited again*

That was another of a beautiful chapter.

Nisha and vivaan..two names that fit so perfectly...Loved to read everything from his point of view.

I really cant believe this is over..i mean no more pming you if you are gonna update..No more refreshing your reserved posts..no more impatience for this wondeful story..i don't know what to say sonam di..

i can just thank you for this beautiful story..

Please write more soon..=)

I'll be waiting patiently!

My smile, my laughter and lots of love,
Akansha

p.s. Jess di..We are going 6-5 now!

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

ah! again you first!

ok no problem bud......

Dii, this was a beautiful piece of writing....
It was amazing...
Journey of Vivaan and Nisha, two opposite souls bonded by the thread of pure and true love.
it was a perfect journey....
The way you portrayed it was fabulous....
I totally loved it to the core

I will miss this, the curiosity to see the index through mobile and then logging in through through pc.....

it was mindblowing...

Take care.....

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago