Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago
awww......really a very cute n lovely update!!........awesome!!!!.....just loved it!!!!!!......love ur ff so much!!!.......the exams.....the chipkali.....the lake part.......everything was soo good!!..........plzz update soon!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely udate
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry guys there was some problem in my network connection ....
This is again a fast pace chapter ....

Eternity


Vivaan and Nisha were standing together near the gate ... her father was going to pick her up ... everywhere around; people were bidding bye to each other and hugging one another .... but Vivaan and Nisha were too mellow to say anything ... they were just staring in each others' eyes ....

Her father arrived and hugged her ....
Papa - Nisha bete, kaisi ho?
Nisha - Theek hun, papa ....
Papa - Ghar chalein? Tumhaari maa ghar pe intezaar kar rahi hai ....
Nisha - Hmm ... papa, ye Vivaan hai ... mera sabse special dost ... isne yahaan mera bahut khayal rakha ...
Vivaan - Namaste uncle ...
Papa - Namaste beta ...
Nisha - Papa, aap chaliye ,main 2 minute mein aati hun ...
Papa - Hmm ... jaldi karna huh ... bye Vivaan ...
Vivaan - Bye uncle ...

Her father took her bags .... Nisha turned to Vivaan ...
Nisha - Apna khayal rakhna ...
Vivaan - Hmm ... bas ek mahine ki to baat hai ...
Nisha - Hmm ... phir hum hamesha saath rahenge ...
Vivaan - Kaise?
Nisha - Shaadi ka irada nahi hai kya?
Vivaan - Tumhaare parents, mere baare mein jaankar haan kahenge?
Nisha - Unhe main mana lungi ... tum apni bata karo ...
Vivaan - Main to kabse ye sapna dekh raha hun ....
Nisha smiled and hugged him tight .... he responded by wrapping his arms around her .... both shed tears on each other ... neither ready to say goodbye ... Vivaan pulling out of the hug ... wiped her tears .. she too wiped his ...
Vivaan - Tum bahut yaad aaogi ...
Nisha - Tum bhi .... i love you ...
Vivaan - Love you too ... ab jaao, uncle wait kar rahe hai ...
Nisha kissed his cheek and in response he kissed her forehead ....

Nisha started walking towards the car .. she turned once to see his last glimpse ... he waved her a bye .. she did the same .... Love wandered inside, stronger than you, stronger than I ... she sat in the car with a heavy heart ... not wanting to let him stay alone .... And now, that its begun, we cannot turn back ... he made his heart understand that it's just matter of one month ... then she'll be back We can only turn in to one ...

Nisha just wished he would call her whenever he feels lonely or burning inside .... he just wished that this one month she'll be safe as she was a magnet to problems .... I won't ever be too, far away to feel you, and I won't hesitate at all, whenever you call ... as he walked towards the building he remembered their moments of love .... as she drove out she remembered his strong arms which never let her fall .... And I'll always remember, that part of you, so tender, I'll be the one to catch your fall, whenever you call ....

She was proud of him, of their love because they didn't hide anything from each other .... he let her spirits free and let her know about his flaming past ... a smile came on her face as she remembered his 'attempts' to make her hate him .... And I'm, truly inspired, finding my soul, there in your eyes, and you have opened my heart, and lifted me inside, by showing me yourself undisguised .....

Both remembered their first kiss, the first hug, the first word, the first touch, the first dance ... and the first tear for each other .... Both knew that they will miss each other but wished that the other is not miserable alone ... And I won't ever be too, far away to feel you, and I won't hesitate at all, whenever you call, and I'll always remember that part of you so tender, I'll be the one to catch your fall, whenever you call

He knew that she was, is and forever be in his heart no matter how far away she goes .... his love is everlasting and he will love till his last breath and even after that .... he remembered how she broke down in front of him and how he caressed her ... wiped away her tears ... he just wished she never cries in this period of loneliness ... in the car she wiped her tear .... And I will breathe for you each day, comfort you through all the pain, gently kiss your fears away, You can turn to me and cry, always understand that I give you all I have inside ....

Both knew that they were meant for each other and no matter what happens they will always be there for each other .... I won't ever be too far to feel you, and I won't hesitate at all whenever you call, I'll always remember that part of you so tender and be the one to catch your fall whenever you call

As Nisha reached her place ... her mom welcomed her with tears .... she told her mom about her friends editing the action that happened .... days passed and she and Vivaan would talk on phone at nights when they missed each other like hell .... and missed each others' embrace .... her father sensed something fishy and decided to confront her about it ...

One evening as Nisha returned home after visiting, Dia, Uday and Benjis' parents .... her father and mother were sitting in the hall .. she sensed the tension in the room, pulled a chair and without them asking, sat with them ...
Nisha - Aap dono, kuch poochna chaahte hai ....
Papa - Haan beta ... kya aisa kuch hai, jo tum humein batana chaahti ho ...
Ma - Tumhaari zindagi mein kuch ho raha hai ...
Nisha knew what were they up to ...
Nisha (sighed) - Main ye baat, kuch dino tak taalna chaahti thi ... par shayad batana hi sahi hoga ...
Papa - Kya beta?
Nisha - Papa, main Vivaan se pyaar karti hun ... aur wo bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai ... hum ek doosre ke bina nahi jee sakte ....

Her parents smiled a satisfaction and hugged her .... she was astonished with their act ....
Papa - Wo to main samajh hi gaya tha, jab tumne use introduce kiya tha ... acha ladka hai ... uski aankhon mein sachaai hai ... main jaanta tha ki meri beti samajhdaar hai aur sahi decision legi ...
Nisha - Papa ek minute .. mujhe uske baare mein aapko kuch batana hai ...
Ma - Kya beta?

Nisha told everything about his past; how tried to stay away and how he loved her; how he saved her every time she was in trouble ... and then showed his letter .... her parents were terrified and angry ...

Papa - Wo ek criminal hai, aur main uske saath tumhe nahi jaane dunga ....
Nisha - Abhi to aap keh rahe the ki wo acha ladka hai ...
Ma - Par beta wo ek khooni hai ...
Nisha (interrupting) - Wo ek bacha tha, usse kya karvaya ja raha tha, use nahi pata tha .... aur us par kya beeti thi ye humein nahi maloom .... wo sacha hai bas main yahi jaanti hun aur uska pyaar mere liye sacha hai us mein koi khot nahi hai ....
Papa - Khot nahi hai? Itna sab kuch hone ke baawjood tum ye keh rahi ho ...
Nisha - Papa, socjiye agar wo bura hota, to kya apni sachaai mujeh batata .... sochiye ...

Her parents realised that Nisha was right and were with her choice ..... Nisha was overjoyed and told them that they may talk to him on webcam tonight .... her parents agreed .... she called him and told about everything .... he couldn't control his smile and agreed to be on webcam ...

Four of them, well actually her parents and Vivaan talked on webcam for 2 hrs as she sat on the sofa getting bored ..... after their conversation, they gave her a thumbs up for her perfect choice ....

A month passed and she was coming back to him ... her parents were coming to drop her again but this time they were mainly there to meet him ....

Since 5 in the morning he was standing on the gate, waiting for her as she was going to come at 9:00 AM ... Grace, Sara and Clare laughed as they saw him getting nervous ... he was wearing a white shirt and a blue jeans looking perfect to meet his future in-laws .....
Their car slowly entered the gate ... she came out in a blue long skirt and a white kurti over it .... and a blue stole looking prefect fusion ....

He stood up from the stairs and had a huge smile on his face ... she opened the gate and ran into his arms ... Grace, Sara, Clare and Nisha's parents were smiling as they saw the lovers reconcile ... He softly kissed her neck and tightened his arms around her ..... she kissed his shoulder and nuzzled in his neck .....

Both were finally together .... and no wall was there to separate them .... soon after the year got over with the love just increasing and after that ... both got married and in every sense .... lived happily ever after .....

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P.S. - Those who didn't understand the significance of the names don't worry, wait for the next updates ... see ya!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
dii, is this second last?
Oh no, i didnt wanted this to end.....

It was an amazing update as usual
They got married.... 😊

Continue soon
I am curious about their names



Finaly m first....
Edited by sam-18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum ...awesum awesum..update ..........ab sab obstacles paar kar hi liye............
very sweet update ...happy that nups's parents were very understanding n supported her......
loved the ff

pooja😊
muaahhhhh
Edited by koolwaters_poo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful update Sonam... I loved how Nisha's parents accepted Vivaan as their son-in-law.
Hope you are taking good care of yourself. My best wishes.
@Akki : score 4-4...Good Morning to Me... and I like my world's best tea....😆
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part...finally they got married....
really loved this update....
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

sonam such amazing part n wonderful as usual

thnx hun 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowie update sonam di...

Loved the way nupur handled it with practicality n understanding....

Loved the hug too....

Aww this is ending? I m gonna terribly miss this one...
Take care,
Love,
Akansha

@Jess di.. Di, yup its four all..the day isn't going any great for me....*pouts*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear
i loved this update.
it was very nice
awesome job

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