Kuch Pal Aur - MayUr SS Last Part Updated - Page 2

Years went by .... and from a baby Avni grew into a young girl in her early twenties - 24 .... Pooja was now 48 .... from a young girl who married her love .... who lost her love but stood up and faced all the circumstances to a matured woman who loves her daughter more than anything else .......

14th Feb 1992 ....
Avni - Ma ...
Pooja - Kya baat hai Avni?
Avni - Ma, mujhe aapko kisi se milvana hai ....
Pooja - Kis se?
Avni calls Aman inside ....
Aman - Namaste auntie .....
Pooja - Namaste ..... Avni ye ... kaun hai?
Avni - Ma, ye Aman hai .....
Aman - Auntie, hum ek dusre se pyaar karte hai .... aur hum shaadi karna chaahte hai ......
Pooja (starts laughing) - Main tumhe dekhte hi samajh gayi thi ki kya scene hone wala hai ...... mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai ......
Avni - O ma .... i love you ....

That same year both got married ...... and with this Pooja's all duties were over ...... she was successful in what she wanted ......

Pooja - Beta .... Aditya kyun nahi aaya?
Avni - Ma uski exams aane waale hai ... isliye .....

4 years after the marriage ..... Avni was pregnant ..... Pooja didn't leave her alone for even a single moment .... she did not want her daughter to suffer through all that she suffered from ...... finally Avni gave birth to son, Aditya ...... Aman was very happy and so was Avni ...... and Pooja felt as if Aarav was back ....... their lives were filled with the rainbow colours ........

Nani dearest loved her grandson very much ......... and so did he .......

But Pooja was lonely ....... Avni was gone .... her only ray of love ........ but Pooja was strong .... she could bear all the pain of the world if with it she could see Avni smiling ..... her life was Avni ......

(2002) But no one can drink the sea water ..... no one can live lonely all his/her life ........ Pooja's loneliness showed its result on her health too .... it was detroiting ......her bp went so low that she was needed to be admitted in the hospital ...... Avni was very worried ........ but Aman, like a son, took all her care until she was fine ...... he even asked Pooja to come with them to Delhi .... but she refused to go .......
Aman - Maa. please humaare saath Delhi chaliye .....
Pooja - Nahi beta ..... yahi meri duniya hai ...... main yahaan se kahin nahii jaaungi .... yahaan tumhaare papa ki yaadein hai .... main unhe chodke nahi ja sakti .........
Avni - Maa, agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to hum kya karenge?
Pooja - Mujhe kuch nahi hoga mere bachche ....itna pareshaan na ho .......
Aman - Theeke maa .... jaisa aap chaahein .........

Aman - Maa, aapka 66th birthday kaise manaana hai .....
Pooja - Beta, ekdum seedhe saadhe dhang se ...... zyada shor shraaba .... chehel pehel nahi chaahiye mujhe ..... bas mere bachchein mere saath hai .... aur kuch nahi chaahiye ....
Both hugged Pooja .....




It was Pooja's 66th birthday ...... her grandson was there too ..... it was a beautiful day till ........ ah na ... not right now .... let's rewind the time and see how the day started ........

Pooja was asleep ..... Avni,Aman & Aditya came into the room ....
Avni (whispered in her ears) - Happy birthday maa .....
Pooja opened her eyes ..... and faintly smiled ....
Everyone including her care-taker maid screamed ....
Everyone - HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAA!!!!!
Pooja started laughing ..... a 60+ woman can look this beautiful .... who would have thought that .......
Pooja - Aditya .....
Aditya - Nani ... aapka birthday aur main na aaun aisa ho sakta hai kya? Main to pehle aa jaata ... agar ghatiya exams na hote .... sachhi!!
Pooja smiled ....

She got up .... everyone went out of the room ...... she slowly went towards the wall where hanged the most beautiful memories of her life ..... of hers and Aaravs' life .....
And once again she drowned herself in her memories .....


Pooja was asleep ..... at 12:00 AM sharp .... Aarav came in her room from the window ....... slowly came near her ears ....
Aarav - Haapy Bday Jaaneman .....
and kissed her cheeks .... Pooja slowly got up ....
Pooja - Aarav! tum yahaan ....
Aarav kept his finger on her lips .....tied a ribbon on her eyes .....
Pooja - Aarav kya kar rahe ho .... kahaan le ja rahe ho mujhe?

He brought her in a drama theatre ...... which was closed from years .......
He slowly opened the ribbon ....... it looked like a grand scene from a hollywood film .....
Pooja - Aarav ye sab ......
when she turned he was missing ....
Pooja - Aarav ..... Aarav kahaan ho?
A light flashed on her ......

Ae Kaash Ke Hum Ho..sh Mein Ab Aane Na Paaye ...... Ae Kaash Ke Hum Ho..sh Mein Ab Aane Na Paaye .... and came near her ... and touched her hair with his face ..... Bas Nagmein Tere Pyaar Ke ..... she ran away .... he smiled .... Gaate Hi Jaaye ...... she came in the balcony made on stage .... he stood at the bottom of it ..... Ae Kaash Ke Hum Hosh Mein Ab Aane Na Paaye ..... Ae Kaash Ke Hum Hosh Mein Ab she gave him a flying kiss ... he acted as fainting with joy .... Aane Na Paaye .... he lifted her from the balcony and brought her on the stage ..... asked for her hand ..... as she gave ... twirled her and brought her close .... they were dancing when .... he bent to kiss her but she pushed him and started running .... he ran behind her .... she hid behind the stage cover ..... he tried to find her, then thought of an idea .... Ho Bas Agar Tum Humaare Sanam she was listening to him and started walking along the cover and was moving her hand on it while walking .... he heard her moving ..... he too came near the cover ..... Hum To Sitaaron Pe Rakhde Kadam .... she was so lost in his words that didn't realise the opening of the cover .... he held her palm and pulled her towards him ... she felt shy but kept her hands on his shoulders .... Ho Bas Agar Tum Humaae Sanam ... Hum To Sitaaron Pe Rakhde Kadam ..... brought her on the satge .... where he had kept her favourite cake from her favourite bakery .... lighted the candle ..... her face glowed with the light .... Saara jahaan bhool jaaye .... they cut the cake .... he gave it to her and then picked her up in his arms ... Bas Nagmein Tere Pyaar Ke Gaate Hi Jaaye .... they danced together .... and he sang to her .... Ae Kaash Ke Hum Hosh Mein Ab Aane Na Paaye ...... slowly pulled her near ..... Bas Nagmein Tere Pyaar Ke Gaate Hi Jaaye .... and they shared there first kiss .....

Aditya came near her as she was standing there ....
Aditya - Nani, kya hua? Kahaan kho gaye?
Pooja - Kuch nahi .... chalo ......

The party was on ..... Pooja was wearing a plum color sari ...... she looked damn gorgeous .... as she came outside ..... Aditya picked up a red rose ... kept it between his teeth slipped to her on his knees ...... (like SRK did in Main Hoon Na) ... everyone was staring at him .... Pooja widened her eyes ..... he held high the rose to her ....
Aditya - Main shayar to nahi .... magar ae haseen .... jab se dekha maine tujhko mujhko shaayari aa gayi .....
everyone started laughing .... Pooja laughed whole heartedly .... and accepted the rose .....
Pooja - Nani pe hi line maar raha hai ....
Aditya - Kasam se ... Nani aapko dekhkar to Aishwarya Rai bhi jal jaayegi .... itni sundar jo lag rahe ho ....
Pooja softly slapped him ...
Pooja - Badmaash ......

The party was on ....... Aditya,Avni,Aman,Maid,Doctor all of them were there to celebrate it .... but Pooja's eyes were searching someone else ...... when ...... as she was sitting on the chair .... while everyone was dancing .... he came near her ears ..... and said "Happy Birthday Jaaneman ...." and kissed her cheeks ..... she turned ....
Pooja (whispered to herself; smiling) - Aarav ......
As she looked towards her family ..... she saw him dancing between all of them ...... she saw him all dazzled and coy .... a smile came on her face .....
Avni - Chalo maa cake kaatte hai .... aapka favourite cake, aapki favourite bakery se ........
Pooja looked at her .....
Pooja - Hmm ....
Aditya - Nani, ek phoonk mein saari bhooj jaani chaahiye ......
Pooja bent to blow candles when she saw Aarav in front of her ..... in the same way as he stood then ...... he showed her how to blow all the candles and winked at her ... she smiled and blowed the candles .... all of them at once .....
everyone applauded ..... all of them were very happy .....
Aman - Doc, aaj maa ko kuch mat kehna ..... unke pasand ka khana bana hai aaj .....
Doc - Arrey, aaj to main bhi jamke khaaunga .....
Avni - Chalo sab .... dinner ready hai ......

All of them sat for dinner ..... it was all Pooja's favourite food ..... Pooja's eyes were glittering ..... she was very happy ....... the day got over ...... Pooja changed and was sitting in her chair when .... Aditya came into the room with something huge in his hand ....
Aditya - Nani ..... ye aapke liye ....
Pooja - Isme hai kya?!!
Aditya - Aap khud hi dekh lo .....
She opens it and in there is a painting of Pooja and Aarav ...... made by Aditya ... he was working on it from many days and that was the reason why he wasn't there before .....
Pooja had tears ...... she was very happy .... she hugged Aditya .....
Pooja - Ye mera sabse acha tohfa hai ...
and kissed his forehead ......

After the tiring day .... she lied on her bed and closed her eyes .......

Aarav turned towards her ..... it was all white .... he was standing on white clouds .... (wearing ... well ... a loose baggy pant of mustard colour and on it a loose white shirt ... too loose and buttons broken ... like he wore on her birthday night .... the night they shared there first kiss ..... she turned 18 that night ..... while he was 19) ..... he slowly opened his arms ..... she ran towards him .... and hugged him ... his embrace was all she wanted (her hair all flying .... she was wearing a white colour frock ... loose from the waist and length above knees .... she wore the same thing on her 18th birthday that night .....)
Aarav -I love you .....
Pooja - I love you too ....
He touched his nose to hers .... and they closed their eyes ... He slowly picked her in his arms .... (just like a fairytale) and started walking on a road of stones and rocks .... she stared at him and he smiled at her .... (it was all green ..... green grass and huge trees ..... and beside it a lake ..... a little wooden house outside which a small garden of flowers) .... he slowly put her down ....
Pooja - Ye hum kahaan hai?
Slowly he held her in his arms and kept his face on her shoulder ... she looked at him smiling ....
Aarav (sweetly) - Ye humara ghar hai .... humaare sapno ka ghar ......
And kissed her cheeks ....she pushed him and started running .... he ran behind her .... both were around a tree ... he tried to catch her from one side while she tried to slip from another side .... (the moonlight was shining on them; everything was glowing) she was running when he held her from her waist and pulled her; but both fell in the lake .... they started throwing water at each other .... he held her wrist and pulled her near .... "Adhoori Saans Thi, Dhadkan Adhoori Thi, Adhoore Hum, Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hai Falak Pe ....... Aur Ab Poore Hai Hum ....." .... they kissed each other .........

Avni - AMAN!!!
Aman - Kya hua Avni?
Avni - Dekho na .... maa uth nahi rahi .....
Aman touched her .... she was cold ..... Aman was nervous ....
Avni - Aditya .... Doctor ko phone lagaao jaldi ......
Aditya - Haan ... haan ...
Aman - Koi zarurat nahi hai .....
Avni (interrupting him) - Matlab?
Aman holds Avni and makes her sit on the chair .... keeps his hand on her cheek ....
Aman - Avni, Maa ... ab ... is duniya ... mein .... nahi rahi ....
Avni knew it in her heart but was not accepting it .... but now she understood .... she hugged Aman and was in tears ....
Avni - Maa ....
Aditya came near Pooja and started crying ..... as maid entered the room ... her eyes were too filled with tears ....

The moment she closed her eyes .... her heart failed ......

Finally she was free ... from the loneliness and from the cage of love of her family .... and flied where she had to .... where her love was waiting for her ... with his arms open for her ... to give her the hug she needed ..... the love she missed .... and yet it was with her ..... in his embrace .... her soul relaxed ...... they were finally together ..... free from the chains of time .... chains of life & death ..... finally, a soul who waited for his soulmate to come .... and a soul who waited to be in her soulmate's arms .... were united ........

thank you ..... everyone who liked the story .... 😊

awesome ending dear!

sonam what a heart touching story

read the whole story in one go and dis is one of the most unique story i hav read....although it was very sad made me cry alot....but still i lovd this story and i must tell u dat u r an amazing writer ...do write more

It was jus fab

hey just read the entire story yaar!!!..........it was so touching!!!......such a unique story!!!!........just loved it!!!!.........really very well written......what emotions yaar!!!....really loved it yaar!!!...........do write more such stories!!!!!!

its just too good
i just have no words but silent tears to shed
its just so touchy
ki i just cant stop myself from crying
i just love the way u potray the feeling
its just feels like heaven
loved it a lot
and loved u too