do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#701

part 28 ws awesum...

*sigh* finally mayur wr fine now..

kaise mujhe & Tu jaane na .. both r my fav songs...

aww.. i just luvd..it.

par yeh kyapar.. 3 sharth...

rush 2 read it ..

luv ya..

-supriya

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#702

aww.. d promo .. sounds interestin...

cant wait 4 d next part...

-supriya

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#703

* phew* ... atlast read all ur updates..

just read part 29... it ws shooooooooo sweet..

luvd it very much...

wow.. mayu's bday...nups plannin ... i cant wait 4 it...

pls add me 2 ur pm list & update soon..

& yaa.. i more thng.. ur writin style has improved a lot...

i lyk 2 suggest 1 song tum mile title song frm muvie tum mile...

luvd d ff 2 d core...

i guess d only sahara 4 me ...after.. d murder of MJHT..

luv u lots...

-supriya

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#704

oh thnx a lot supriya for liking my ff to the core

thnx for all the complements realy it made my day

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
when r u updating?

updating sooon

may b tonite

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#706

Part 27 28 n 29

27 it wa sreally senti

Liked the way Nups supported MM n MM liked Nups

Nups really loved him a lotttt tabhi evn she suffered frm sam pain as Mayu was going

Atlast Armaan wa sready to make them one

Lets c wat is the suprise by elders for Mayur

Part 28

Thank god both came to their senses

Liked ur back ground songs jan

Update was short

Part 29

Liked the way Nups was palning for Mayu's bday party

Mayu was really beahaving lik child

Hop Nups plan work

This update was also too short

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#707

sorry pebo yr

m soo busy

will b back in three days

with updates

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#708

part 30
mayank was laying down on his ward and was thinking
m: aj nupur kuch zyada hi ajeeb behave karhe hai pta nhe use kiya hogya hai buhat berookhi si baatein karhe hai.
meanwhiile gunjan came in
G: bhai kaisi tabyat hai tumhari
M: zinda hu dikh nhe raha kiya
m: aise ward me bethe kon zinda rehsakta hai.kitna suffocation horha hai chalo na thandi hawa me chalte hai
mayank give her not so interested look
G: arey bhai chalo na terrace pe .thori fresh air humare liye zaruri hoti hai
M: hmmmmmmmmm
G: to chale
mayank just nodded
at around 11:45
gunjan take him to terrace and it was all dark there
M: gunjan yaha itna andher kyu hai
G: pta nhe me dekh k ati hu
M: okie jaldi ana
G: bus yu gaye aur aye
10m minute went by but gunjan didnt came so mayank entered terrace in wheeel chair
( remember he got injud while saving nupur so he is nt allowed to walk more)
at 11:59
M: sab kaha chale gaye gunjan bhi na boli thi k abhi aye aur dekho wo gayab hai
now he listened sum countings which confused him
10

9

8

7

6

5

4

3

2

1
blastttttttttt...............
nupur was seen while wishing him

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU ....
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR JAN
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU

Mayank was shocked < happy .in short he was having mixed feeling
M: umhe mera bday yaad tha
N: jinse humme pyar hota hai hum uski har cheez yaad rakhte hai
then nupur take him near cake
N: acha ab jakdi se eyes close karke ek wish karo
maank closed his eyes
" aey khuda meri zindagi ki ek hi wish hai .k mjhe har pal har lamha nupurka saath naseeb ho.yhi meri chahat hai .yhi meri zindagi hai,tu kabhi mjhe nupur se juida na karnaa,"
then mayank opend his eyes
N: kia wish kiya( excitedly)
M wish kisi ko nhe btate
N:sadu( giving disgussting look)
N: ( in mind) god mayank ne jo maanga hai wo use zaroor milna chaye
M: to cake kaate
N: ha ye lo knife
then mayank cut the cake and nupur fed him and mayank too
M: mera gift
N: hmmm is k liye tumhe apni aankhein band karni hogi
M: ok
thm mayank closed his eyes
nupur came forward and lock his lips with her
( remember mayank ask this in return of soup)
back to kiss
nupur locked his lips and mayank was feeling happy and he responed tooo
both were lost in ech other
as it was their first kisss
i didnt took a tym to turn into paasionate one
now rain also started bit sill both were lost in each other
soon rain turned into heavy rain which brought mayank and nupur back to senses
M: thnx ye gift sab se bestest gift tha
N just bluhshed
Aaa aa'.

(mayank take her hand and pull her closer)

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(nupur putting her arms around his shoulder)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

(now mayank kissed her on forehead thn on eyes)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(nupur just hugged him tightly)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

( nupur thn movedand satnd at corner and was blushing
mayank came to her and sat ion knees forwading a rose )
Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe

( nupur accepted it and also bent down and carresed his face and make hi mstand)
Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

mayank saw her and...)
Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga

( both were having tears as bith had suffered a lot in past few days and both
dont want to lose each other)
Hooo

( thn nuur put er hand on mayanks hand)

Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua

( mayank smiled and slightly hugged him)
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

( frndz i didnt show dance as mayank was injured si he cant dance)

nupur take hi to ward and make him rest as it wasnot good for his health to enjoy rain
2 days passed by
mayanks conditon got much better and he was discharged
and finally he was going home
meanwhile mayanks mom ,armaan and ridhimmacame to mayank and nupur

AR: ab kaise ho tum
M: better sir
AR: okie waise kal tum sab jo nupur k frndz ho ghar ana hoga
N: kyu bro( shocked)
ar: kyu ki ka tumhe dekhne larke wale arhe hai
mayank and nupur were completely shocked
N: kia
RIDZ: ha angel
MM: ok to kal hum sab nupur ko ready karne jayenge
N: but bro me t omayank se pyar karti hu
AR: arey jaanta hu me ...to maine kab kaha k me teri shaaadi kiisi aurse karauga
at this mayank nupur were relived
MM: aur nhe to kiya hum tum dono ki hi baat karhe the aur waise bhi kal mayank k dad bhi ajayege na to phir
M: ohhh maaa ap to best ho
MM: i nw beta
N: bro i luv u
nupur hugged armaaan
Ar: to angel khush haina
N: buhat
AR: to sab sunlo kal sab ko humare ghar aana hai
all: yesssssssss

precap
mayurs roka
entry of new intern
mayank jealousy
nupur teasing him
and lot more masti cuming up soooon

frndz here is nxt short part
chapal mat maarna yr
kiya karu busy hu na
final are near thts y
do commmnt
ur commnt meant lot to me

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#709

totally mast update
and hot too
yaar i enjoyed reading this lovley update
i was imgaine the dance lol but forgot maynk was injour
lovley update

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
totally mast update
and hot too
yaar i enjoyed reading this lovley update
i was imgaine the dance lol but forgot maynk was injour
lovley update

oh ths gr888

m glad u lyked it

i too fogot while writing updte😆😆😆

thnx dear

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