do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142 - Page 15

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

such a cute update

it is the bestest update you have ever ever written.......

it is perfect

maine life mein sikha hai you can't comment on perfection but let me give it a shot

this update had everything fun, anger, manana, dosti, nok-jhok, romance

mazza aa gaya es update ko padkar

mayur loker scene was so cute

mayank trying to talk to nupur

and nupur ignoring him

simply wow

and the hospital scene was rocking

mayank holding nupur's wrist was awesome

then trying to talk to her was so well described

and the outside hospital scene was so sweet

nupur petrol finishing...... perfect timing

mayank offering nupur lift was so caring

nupur ignoring it was so brave

and nupur saying "all iz well" was so cute

and then the goons follwing nupur was scray

but mayank apni nupur ko kucch hone kaise deta

waqt par akkar apni jaan ko baccha hi liya

phir humne mila ek magical mayur hug.....

and phir lightning and thunder

resulting in another magical mayur hug

and then the best part......

the heavenly confession

mayank's style of proposal was the best.....

har chez ke liye ek bar hi propose kar diya

current gf, future fionce, future wife, baccho ki mom, grandchildren ki grandmom, parents ki bahu, sister ki babhi,......

yeh mayank toh kafi fast hai

phir mila humme din ka thisra magical hug......

and nupur ka answer woh bhi yes.....

and phir ek perfect song sequence

kya perfect song tha

aur scenes were well described.....

and of course rain....... my fav

kamal kar diya by god

it was so romantic

precap sounds interesting

update soon

luv

mahima

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

😳 😳 😳
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omg yaar super duper update
itna romatic song and sweet words and propose
wow yaar waitng for th another update

Originally posted by: arunabehere

wow mast update hai

aur proposal karne ka tarika bhi mast tha wow mayur are together

I loved it

Song was awesome

thanks for the pm

update soooooonnnnnnnnnnnn

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

Omg omg finally thy confessed purely mayurish style loved it

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

well kia perfect comment diya tum ne yr

aj to mera mood buhat kharab hai but tumhara commnt parh k by god maza agya

luv u my frnd

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Very Nice Update...!!