do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142 - Page 14

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

well this one

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

cool cause i don't mind any one as i love all three

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ya i knw

u knw wht i wanted to pdte kabhi alwad na kehna but

as it is a combine ff

i cant write nxt one

m stil waaiting for her to complete

Part 20

Early morning

Mayank got up

M: aj mujhe nupur ke dil ka haaal jaanna hi hoga bus aj me ye jaan ke hi rahuga k us k dil memere liye kuch ha ya nhe agar hai to zuindagi barh us ka saath nibhaoga aur agar nhe to chup chap us ki zindagi se dur chala jaoga

On other hand

Nupur was fighting with thots

N: by god! Aj tu monkey se bilkul baat nhe karegi

Per kaise

Nhe job hi ho bus baat nhe karni to nhe karni samjhta kia ha apnea p ko koi prime minister ka beta hai kia

But me us se pyar bhi to karti hu

But wohi tu the ignore karta hai

Bus ab jo bhi ho aj mjhe us idiot se nhe baat karni and thts final

At sanjeevani

Nupur went directly to locker

Mayank came from behind

M: hi kaise hu

She just ignored and cont putting things in her locker

MLin mind): shayad suna nhe hoga koi bt nhe phir se bolta hu

M: hi nupur

Nupur stared angrily at him

Mayank understand tht she is angry on yesterdays matter

Announcement

All the interns are requested to report at nursing station

After this announcement nupur directly went ignoring mayank completely

Dr keerti assigned them to do their duty in ICU ward

N: oh god! Kia kismet phuti hai meri ab is idiot k saath karni padegi kaise ignor karu us ko but mjhe is se kisi bhi haaal me baat nhe karni

M: yeah yhi chance hai nupur ko maanane k waise hi buhat gussaq hai mjh pe aur ye sab us samrat ki waja se hua hai jo mjhe phasa kea j khud gayab hai

Mayur were doing duty

Mayank tried to talk to her but she completely ignored him

But mayank didn't gave up

He came to her and hold her by wrist

This brings chill in nupurs spine

Both share cute eyelock

Thn they came back to their senses

N: plz mera haath choro

M: nhe chorunga jab tak tum meri baat nhe sunleti me nhe chorne wala

N:listen I am not in a mood to talk to you

Then she angrily pulled her hand

M: meri baat to suno(he placed is hand on her shoulder)

She jerked his hand and tightly slap him

N: dot you dare to touch me again samjhte kia ho apnea p ko

M: ok sorry to distrb you bye m leving

Whole they both of them didn't talked a bit

Although they had sum cute eyelocks

But they all were ignored in their anger

It was now about 8.30

Mayu duty was off now

Nurse informed them that city condition have been worsened

Nupur went in her car but unfortunately fue ended

N: oh shit ! petrol ko bhi abhi khatam hona tha kia ab me kiakaru

Mayank cums ther and saw here

M:me tmhari koi help kardu

N: no neeed I can go by y own

M: dekho gusssa apna side pe rakho is waqt shehar k haalat kharab hai

N: but I dnt need ur help u better get off

Then mayank left from there

And nupur started walking alone

She was a lot scared'all the way she was repeating same sentence

" nupur ghabra mat all iz well"

Three goons started following her

As soon as she noticed them

She found herself in a sunsaaan sarak

She starts running but atlast caught by one of the goon

N: mje jaaane do plz

G1: aise kaise jaane de tujh jase haseena ko

Then n tried to slap them but instead of it

One of them hit her hard due to which she fell down

Her hand got injuredan her lips too

Then goon tried to pull her dupatta but was stopped by some one

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It was mayank

M: larki ko haaath mat lagana teri himmat kaise hui use chooone ki

G2: kyu teri kuch lagti hai kia

M: ha tmhe koi problem hai behtar yhi hoga k tum yaha se chale jaog3: oh hum darr gaye

Then one of them started moving towards nupur and pulled her duppatta

This act of them bring mayan into complete anger

He started hitting them hardly

They all then run away

He then went to nupur covered her with duppata and touched her lips

N: ouch

M: kia hua nupur

N: mayank ,…………….

Saying this she tightly hugged him

N; aj tum na hote to mer kia hotaagar tum nhe ate to shyad me zinda hi nhe hoti

M: plz nupur aise baatein mat karo jab tak me hu tmhe koi kch nhe karsakta( his eyes were also wet) ab tum thik ho na

N: ha waise agar itni hi fikaar hai to itna ignore kyu karte ho mjhe

M: me aur tmhe ignore no ways

N: acha to kal kia karhe the

M: kal me pagal hogya tha jo kisi idiot ki bt sunli maine

Nupur started laughing at his comment then she startd moving

Suddenly their was a thunder storm

Nupur agan got frightened and hugged him tightly

M: (In mind) aj to kismet mere saath hai

Mayank smiled

Then nupur freed herself

And thn

Mayank ben down

M: aj me tum se kuch kehna chata hu shayad is ke baad tum mjh se nafrat karne lago shayad mabhi baat bhi na karo bt plz ye dosti kabhi mat torna

N; nhe torugi tum btao to sahi

Thn mayank forwarded his hand

M: may i?

N: sure!

Thn he hold her hand

M: me mayank Sharma sanjeevani ka intern aj nupur malik se apne pyar ka izhaar karna chata hu . kia tum aj meri gf thn my fiance thn my wifr mere bacho ki mom meri grand children ski granny mere parents ki bahu and meri behen ki bhabhi m=banoge

Will you be mine?
after lisrening this nupurs happiness had no boundaries

She was happy at all

She was feeling herself at top of the world

Tears started flowing from her eyes

Mayank extended his hand

She quickly ran upto him

And tightly hugged him

M: me is ka kia matlab samjhu(asked confused mayyank)

N: tum na bilkul budhu ho

M: btao na(curiosity rises)

N: ha baba

Mayank hug her more tightly

M: I love you you are my life

N: I love you toooooooo

Thn both were lost in each other's arm

Suddenly it started raining

baaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hain

jane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan dhadkan banee juban

(thn both came back to senses

nupur tried to move but was caught by waist by mayank thn both started dancing)

baaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hain

jane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan dhadkan banee juban

baaho ke darmiya........

(both were now very close thn both lips were going to meet but shy nupur got away)

khulte badan hote labon kee yeh ankahee

mujhse keh rahee hai kee badhane de bekhudee

mil yu kee daud jaye nas nas me bijliya

(thn mayank lifted her by his two strong arms and started dancing)

baaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hain

jane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan dhadkan banee juban

baaho ke darmiya........

(now both were lost in each others and were dancing

today boths happiness knw no bound

today their desire have met

today they have got their love)

aasman ko bhee yeh hasin raj hai pasand

ulajhee ulajhee saanso kee aawaj hai pasand

motee luta rahee hai sawan kee badliya

baaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hain

jane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan dhadkan banee juban

baaho ke darmiya.........

precap

mayur first date

do dil ek jaaan song sequence

thts it frndz

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luv sehrish

such a cute update

it is the bestest update you have ever ever written.......

wow...fantastic update. 👏

1stly mayank's morning promise k agar nups k dil may kuch hai to saath nibhaunga varna chup chap uski zindagi se chala jaunga....g8

Aur nups to tout ko lekar super confuse thi.

Nupur ignord mayu in d locker..so sad.

Woo ek saath icu may duty .
Bechara mayank nups baat karne ki kitni koshish kar raha tha par badle mein use ek zordar chaanta mila..very bad.

Ohh nups ki car ka petrol khatam hogaya par hamari angry nups ne mayank ka offer thukra diya...

Omg gunde nups ke peeche aur uske saath battameezi kar rahe hein aur uska dupatta kheench rahe hai..
Aise mauke par apni nups ko bachane k liye mayu na aaye aisa to impossibe haina....(aww dupatta wala scene remind me of ahmadabad trip.)

And d hug so shweet. 😳

Phir nups ki shikayatien & mayank tellng k kal mein pagal hogaya tha..

N & d bestest part d cute n simple confession...mayank ne kitni simple language use ki apni feelings batane k liye...

Wah kya song select kiya hai dance k liye..perfect choice...dance vz awsum.

Awwww precap looks soo sweet...pehli date aur dance seq....cant wait 4 d nxt update...sis
Continue soooon.

Luv
*kulsum*

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omg yaar super duper update
itna romatic song and sweet words and propose
wow yaar waitng for th another update

wow mast update hai

Omg omg finally thy confessed purely mayurish style loved it

wow mayur confession
nice updt
thanks for the pm