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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: bhavana92

very touching story ZeeJay! so Nupur's sudden death made Gunjan awfully vulnerable....poor Mayank....

P.S:r u gonna continue this?

Hey dear, thnx! glad u liked it!
no i dont think i will😊
well nupur's death, i didnt mention that, i wanted readers to have free thought over it, i felt readers will connect it to the closest tragedy they have faced...and feel the emotions😊
but for me while i was writing this, nupur's death wasnt sudden, i intended to show her as a cancer patient, i didnt mention that, but tht was the picture in my mind while writing. Nupur's death wasnt sudden, her coming up with this disease was sudden. Gunjan finds it hard to cope up with the fact, that something which she had read in books, seen in movies, known tht in some part of the world ppl face such, had happened in her life, had affected nupur's life. thts the shock she's trying to move on with in 1st OS...that her sis had left, died a miserable death, and somehow life still moved on.
In second OS she still dreams abt her sis, bcoz nupur was the closest to her as a mother also😊 she dreams, they are gud or bad, again i let u have free reign of imagination, but she is disturbed bcoz after dreams end one faces reality, and the reality hurts gunjan.
Yet the next day reality shows her tht life has moved on and she is gunjan shergill.
ah! quite a long post! sorry for the long read!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
beautiful os.(socha na tha and its sequel)
bit of a sad ending but loved it all the same👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: marisol45

beautiful os.(socha na tha and its sequel)
bit of a sad ending but loved it all the same👍🏼

thnx 😳am glad u liked it!
sad endings hold a very different or lets say unique meaning to them😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

Hey dear, thnx! glad u liked it!
no i dont think i will😊
well nupur's death, i didnt mention that, i wanted readers to have free thought over it, i felt readers will connect it to the closest tragedy they have faced...and feel the emotions😊
but for me while i was writing this, nupur's death wasnt sudden, i intended to show her as a cancer patient, i didnt mention that, but tht was the picture in my mind while writing. Nupur's death wasnt sudden, her coming up with this disease was sudden. Gunjan finds it hard to cope up with the fact, that something which she had read in books, seen in movies, known tht in some part of the world ppl face such, had happened in her life, had affected nupur's life. thts the shock she's trying to move on with in 1st OS...that her sis had left, died a miserable death, and somehow life still moved on.
In second OS she still dreams abt her sis, bcoz nupur was the closest to her as a mother also😊 she dreams, they are gud or bad, again i let u have free reign of imagination, but she is disturbed bcoz after dreams end one faces reality, and the reality hurts gunjan.
Yet the next day reality shows her tht life has moved on and she is gunjan shergill.
ah! quite a long post! sorry for the long read!!

AWESOMELY EXPLAINED but u may had said this lines in the os too as some readers may get confuse anyways still u had wrote mindblowing OSs👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Zeeru
another fantastic OS!!!!
that was really sad
im so glad that Samrat is patient with her!!! =D
poor Mayu!! wat happend to her though??
plllzzz continue to write more!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: MoNaYaRoX

OMG Zeeru
another fantastic OS!!!!
that was really sad
im so glad that Samrat is patient with her!!! =D
poor Mayu!! wat happend to her though??
plllzzz continue to write more!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!!


thnx dear! am glad u liked it:D
about nupur..check the post right above urs😊
will definitely write many more such FF's and OS's
thnx for all the support!
luv ya!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

awesome..thanx 4 d pm...



thnx m glad u liked it!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys, im writing An os on sajan, thankyou zeejay for letting me post it here, luv u lotsss, ok here it starts

I Love You......The Way You Are........

Gunjans POV

It was deodher sirs class, i came n sat on the desk n waited for deodher sir to come n start the lesson, i liked to sit alone, i had friends, but i talked less.....deodher sir did not came, but then i heard some noises, i turned around n i saw him!!!....the one who i always liked, well i had a crush on him...but he would never like a nerd like me, ofcourse im a wookworm, it dont match.. but he is so cute...Samrat!!!.......(*freeze*).....Samrat Shergill, the coolest dude of our college...girls drooled over him...but i stayed away from him...maybe cause i didnt want him to know that i have a crush on him(*unease*)....he was sitting with his gang..just then dia waved at me.....(*freeze*)...Dia, Diva of the excel college..My cousin...n my friend.., she is the sweetest person ever....she always told me to hang around with them...but i refused her...she knows my nature...(*unease*)...I waved back at her....she signaled me to join them...i nodded in a NO....she knew why...cause deodher sir would be here any minute....just then he looked at me...i quickly moved my gaze..not to fall in his eyes...just then deodher sir came.

POV Ends

Deodher sir came in, all the class greeted him goodmorning n sat down.
D: Miss gunjan
G: yes sir
D: please come here
Gunjan got up n went upot deodher sir
G: yes sir
D: gunjan, ples give these notes to each person
G: ji sir

She took the notes n started to give them to everyone, she came to the gangs table, she gave them the notes n was about to go, when something stopped her, she turned around n saw her duppata stck with samrats watch, he didnt notcie that

Gunjans POV
Oh no....ab kya karun...kaise bolun isse....dia ko bolti hon
I went back to the table
G: dia....
Dia looked up n smiled at me, i knew he too was looking at me...but i tried to ignore him.
D: yes doll
G: dia...wo...mera duppata...
D: kya howa tumare duppate ko....theek to hai
G: han...wo...mera duppata phans gaya hai
I pointed towards his hand, dia understood, he too followed my direction.
D: oh....sammy
S: yeah
D: gunjan ka ..duppata.........tumare watch mein phans gaya hai
Without any word, he took out my duppata from his watch n slightly kept it on the table
G: thanks dia
I was about to go when i heard his voice n stopped
S: candy....agli baar..agar kisi ko koi kaam ho...to mujhse bole....na k mere dosto se.
I knew that he was saying it to me, i smiled at myself, n walked back to my desk

POV Ends

Later the class finished, all were getting out, gunjan got up n was about to go, when she putted her foot on a pencil, n sliped, but just then somebody caught her.

Gunjans POV

I was getting out of the class, when i nearly slipped, i closed my eyes in fear of hitting the floor, but something had stopped me from hitting the floor, i opened my eyes n i saw him....samrat!!....staring at me..n i too looked in his eyes n there.....i was lost....there was nowhere out.....just hten somebody cleared their throat

POV Ends

Both were lost in eachothers eyes, just then someone cleared there throat
D: ahem ahem
Both broke the eyelock n stood up straight
D: ah...gunjan....tumhe lagi to nahi na...
G: nahi dia..mein theek hon
D: r u sure..babes
G: han dia....ghar chalen
D: yeah come on...
They both were walking down the corridor
D: well babes...tumhe pata hai..kal prom hai...
G: han dia..to
D: to..tum aogi na
G: nahi dia..tum janti ho na...mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi
D: pless doll...sirf thori dair k liye...
G: nahi dia....
D: plesss...dekho agar tum nahi jaogi to mein bhi nahi jaongi
G: lek....
D: lekin wekin kuch nahi...kal tum mere sath chal rahi ho
G: theek hai..abhi to ghar chalo
They both went home

At night
Gunjan was sitting in her room, reading a book, just then she heard a noise near her window, she got up from her bed, n went upto her window, as she looked down, samrat came up n boths head banged, gunjan without seeing samrat just screamed.
G: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sam qiuckly came up n sat on the window n covered her mouth, but he lost his balance n fell on gunji, n both fell down, gunjan opened her eyes n saw samrat n got lost in his eyes, just then she realized that hes on top of her n she broke the eyelock n looked here n there, samrat moved his hand from her mouth, both got up
S: wo actully, mein diya se milne aaya tha...sorry...i think wrong room....
Gunjan didnt say anything, she just went out of the room, n brought dia there
D: sammy, tum yahan
S: han candy, mein tumse kuch pouchne aaya tha
D: what?
S: wo........wo...........wo mein tumse yeh pouchne aaya tha k kal kitne baje aougi....pro..prom mein...
D: r u insane.....itni raat ko tum yeh pouchne ayi the
S: ha..han
D: sammy, tum bhi na, chalo come with me....gunjan ko sona do
S: nahi..
D: kya..
S: i mean..mein abhi nahi aa sakta...hum kal milten hain ok
D: ok bye
S: bye
Sam went from there
D: goodnite gunjan
G: goodnite

The Next day Prom!!
Dia entered gunjans room
D: chalo gunjan ...............omg tum abhi tak tayar nahi hui
G: dia...mera man nahi hai jaane ka
D: lekin kyun...
G: mein kya karungi wahan...tum benji k sath rahogi...to mein akeli hojaongi..aur waise bhi..mujhe to pata bhi nahi hai k kya pehen na hai..
D: bas itni si baat.....pehli baat yeh hai..k i wont leave you...mein aur benji tumare sath rahenge..aur second....i think you need a makeover...
G: no dia..ples...tum janti ho na..k mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi...
D: dont worry doll....mein tumhe tayar karungi...lekin tumare style mein ok
G: lek...
D: blah blah...i dont want to listen to anything....i have a really pretty suit for you..just wait..i'll be back
Dia went from there n brought a beautifull red anarkali sleeveless suit with silver embroidery ( the one she wore on their second), gunjan was suprised
G: wow dia...kitna khoobsurat hai
D: i know...im glad u liked it
G: lekinn yeh tumare paas kaise ayi...i mean...tum to aise kapre nahi pehenti na...
D: ha..han...wo.......wo....choro na....chalo mein tumhe tayar karti hoon
Dia got her ready
D: wow, kitni khoobsurat lagrahi ho
G: thanks
(She looked exactly like, in roshni se date scene)
Later they took off, to the college, they reached the college, everyone was dancing and enjoying, gunjan was standing with benia
B: so gunjan, having fun
G: yeah
B: i must say...you look beautifull today
G: thankyou benji
D: afterall, mehnat meri hai
B: gunjan k uper mehnat karne k zaroorat nahi, wo waisi hi beautiful hai
D: i know
B: lets go for a dance
D: yeah, come on gunjan
G: no dia..its ok..tum dono jao
D: lekin tum akeli...
G: its ok...mein yahin hon...u guys enjoy
D: ok..mein jaldi ajaongi
G: ok..
Benia went from there, gunjan sat on sofa near the bar, she was looking around, just then some guys, came n sat next to her
Boy1: hey gunjan, how are you
Gunjan looked at them, they didnt look nice, so she ignored them
Boy2: humse to baat karlo...
It was enough, she got up n was about to leave when one of the boys caught her hand
Boy1: kahan jarahi ho, hamre saath beht k baten karo
She turned around n slapped him, the boys got angry
Boy1: tumne mujhe tapar maara...
He was about to slap her when somebody caught his hand, gunjan turned around n saw Samrat!!!
Boy1: samrat....isne mujhe tapar maara hai..mera hath chor...mein isse nahi chorunga
S: nahi...sochna bhi mat...
He moved gunjan at the back of him
Boy1: agar tu isse bachai ga to khud bhi pitega
Sam was now angry n started to beat the boys, the princi came there
P: samrat chordo inhe
S: sir, yeh log gunjan ko cher rahe the
P: i know, i'll deal with them, just leave them
Samrat let go, princi took the boys with him, sam turned around n saw gunjan crying, he went upto her, n was about to put his hand on her shoulder, when she moved back n ran from there
D: i think she ned me
S: wait.....i'll go
Dia nodded, sam ran out after her, he saw her in corridor
S: gunjan rukh jao
She stopped, but didnt turn, sam came upto her
S: mein janta hon k tum bohot hurt ho....lekin mera iraada marne ka nahi tha...i sorry
She was about to go, when sam caught her hand n pulled her into an empty classroom
G: kya karahe ho...choro mujhe...
S: Kyun!!....kyun karti ho tum aisa.....kyun mujhe ignore karti ho....
He tightend his grip
G: pless choro mujhe, mujhe dard horaha hai
S: aur jo dard tum mujhe deti ho...uska kya
Gunjan looked at him
S: jab tum mujse baat nahi karti na...to mujhe bohot dard hota hai....jab tum mujse nazare churati ho na, to mera dil dukhta hai.....tum kyun karti ho aisa.....us din.....us din..tumara duppata meri watch mein phans gaya to tumne candy se kyun kaha...tum mujse bhi to keh sakti thi na...pata hai..tumari iss harkat ne mujhe poori raat...poori raat nahi sone diya.....aur phir jab mein tumare ghar aaya...to tum mujhe bolne k bajai...dia ko bula k liyai...kyun!!!....tum yeh sab kyun karti ho..pata hai mujhe kitna dard hota hai
G: kyun hota hai!!!
S: BECAUSE I LUV YOU DAM IT!!!
Gunjan was shocked
S: mein tumse bohot pyar karta hon.....had se ziada.....
Gunjan couldent believe what he just said, but then she thouught, kahin yeh mazak to nahi?...samrat, hamare excel ka hero.mujh jaisi larki se pyar karega? is it a joke?
G: aur bhi to larkian hai yahan, mujhse bhi achi to tumne mujhe hi kyun chunna, mein tumpe kaise bharosa karlon...
She pushed him away n was about to go again, when samrat again caught her hand n pinned her against the wall again.
S: kyunke...tum sabse alag ho.....pata hai...jab tum mujse baat nahi karti na...to mujhe bohot dard hota hai.....agar tumara duppata meri watch mein phans gaya tha...to tum mujhe bolti...tumne dia ko kyun bola...tumari iss harkat ne mujhe poori raat nahi sone diya....isliye kal raat mein tumare ghar pe aaya tha...tumse yeh pouchne k tum aisa kyun karti ho....lekin bol nahi paya...pata hai kyun....kyunke tumhe dekhte hi...meri bolti band hojati hai....tumare pass aate hi..mein, mein nahi hota........muujhe nahi acha lagta...jab tum mujse baat nahi karti........tum janti ho, tumhe party mein lane k liye, mein dia ko bola tha aur tumne jo kapre pehenne hai na, wo bhi meine dieyn hain, mein khud to de nahi saka, isliye candy ko boldia tha.......tum sab mein se alag ho...uniqe ho...n thats why i love you.....lekin tumhe kya.....tumhe to mere pyar ki koi kadar nahi...
He let go of her, he moved back, he was about to go, when gunjan spoke

Sams POV
I let her go....i think she dont love me....maybe she dont deserve me..i was about to leave, when she spoke
G: i love you samrat
I was shocked, i turned around, but i was soooo happy, i got my world back, my peace back....she came running upto me....n for my suprise...she kissed me passionatly...i was shocked first..but then i responded her back...after sometime, she broke the kiss and looked at me...

POV Ends

She looked in his eyes
G: i love you samrat...mein tumse bohot pyar karti hon
Sam was sooo happy
S: i love you too gunjan
He hugged her
S: chashmish
Gunjan broke the hug
G:WHAT!!
He slietly hits her nose with his finger ( like he does in the serial)
S: meri chashmish..
Gunjan smiled
G: lekin samrat....tumne sab larkion mein se mujhe hi kyun chunna...i mean, mujhse bhi achi achi larkian hai yahan..to phir mein hi kyun...
S: Chashmish...tum sabse alag ho..jab tum akeli beht k books parthi thi na...to liberay k kone se chup k tumhe dekhta tha....tumar ek jhalak mera poora din kathi hai....tum sabse achi ho..tum un larkion k jaisi nahi ho...n thats why I LOVE YOU THE WAYS YOUR ARE!!!
Gunjan had tears in her eyes, she hugged him n he hugged her back...


End

Ok guys, do comment
Hope u all like it
Luv u all
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Edited by sweetsonal156 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii wow awesome ossssssssssssss lovely
aaaaaaaaaaaaah
such beautiful confession
too gud
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Posted: 15 years ago
i love ur os........man i am loving ur work more day by day.........keep up the good work

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