kasam se....jeena sirf mere liye part 9 on page 18

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Anjali

@Anjali96

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

hey mehr

Happy Birthday once again

and loved them all...aww karanika's part was so sad

and the rest were really gud

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KMH_Arjuhi

@KMH_Arjuhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Karanika part almost made me CRY it was sad.😭😭

But awesome update..

⭐️⭐️Once Again Happy Birthday!!⭐️⭐️

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

hey amazing part

do cont soon

-Lina-

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Surat

@mrs-sr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

HeyDear,
Wow nice intro!
Love all the couples, specially KaSh/Hedar & Sara
And part was amazing, totally great!
I am sure ur a brilliant writer hehe,
And i will comment every part par=)
Good job & Keep it up!
And ya plz add me to ur PM list and send me pm when u update, would love to read more and more hehe.

LoveSurat.

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Surat

@mrs-sr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

HeyDear,
Wow second part was also very good!
I hope all of them are gonna see eachother very soon,
Love Muskaan ka character i can see bohot baatein karti hai heheh,
Anywayz amazing part & keep it up.

LoveSurat.

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Surat

@mrs-sr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

I read the third part, lovely part!
I hope Arfeens mom will soon know that Saba is a very nice girl=)
and then will think to let his son marry to here hehe, and wow loved Shaan and Muskaan scene they are very cute, finally Hedar and Sara ek dusre ko dekhliya hehe and because of here he is gonna work in hospital! And i think Aamir abhi se in love with Zara right hehe so he is gonna see her again, so sweet hehe!

LoveSurat.

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Surat

@mrs-sr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Wow part4 was totally amazing, and arfeen also in love hehe nice.. i hope soon saba also cant wait for that, Shaan & Muskaan part was good and wow Hedar ko job milgaya great, cant wait for his scenes with Sara=) Aamir is too cute hehe.

LoveSurat.

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

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part 8

we will start with mayur (shaan n muskaan)
muskaan is @ her house
her mom comes
muskaan's mom: kya howa beta?? kya soch rahi ho??
muskaan: kuch nai mom....aap logo ne mera rishta wo larke k saath accept to nai kiya na??
m's mom: nahi beta tumhari marzi k bina tumhari life ka decision hum kaisi lenge...waise kyun pooch rahi ho?? tumhai koi pasand hai kya??
M: shayad
m's mom: kya?? koi acha lagta hai??
M: haan mom...but samajh nahi aata i luv him or lyk him
m's mom: beta kaun hai wo??
M: hai ek dost...main ek jaga organize karne k liye gaye thi to mujhai mila tha....ab hum bohat achay dost bangaye hain
m's mom: toh??
M: mom pata nai aaj jab mene usse mere rishte ki baat ki to usne aise way mei baat ki jaise he wants me
m's mom: beta toh tum uuse khud hi kyun nai pooch leti??
M: main usse kaise poochoon?? lekin wo mujhai bol sakta hai....pata nahi aisi batein karta hai jo bas pyaar jaisi ho
m's mom: beta ab jab uska phone aaye ya tum usse milo to usse apne dil ki baat keh dena...aise baton mei deir nai karte...acha beta i have to go on my job main chalti hoon Allah Hafiz
M: Allah Hafiz
now its cum to shaan
who is sitting with his friend
shaan's friend: to tune kya socha??
shaan: kis baare mei??
s's friend: wohi us larki k baare mei?
shaan: soch raha hoon us ko boldoon...kyun k ab to us k rishte bhi aane lag gaye hain
s's friend: to intezaar kis baar ka hai tujhai?? jaldi bolday
shaan: dar lagta hai agar us ne inkaar kardiya toh??
s's friend: aray haan bhi to bol sakti hai na....agar tune ab or intezaar kiya to saari life kash hi bolta rahega tu....ab jabhi tu usse mile usko bol dena.....khair main chalta hoon apni girl friend se milne bye
shaan: bye
now we are gonna come to monaya (saba n arfeen)
arfeen is calling saba
saba picks up the phone
saba: hello
arfeen: hello
saba: haan bolo?? kaise ho?
arfeen: kaisa honga ye sab sunke
saba: tum america ja rahe ho na??
arfeen: haan tumhai saath leke
saba: kya?? ye kaise ho sakta hai
arfeen: dekho saba...ab humara nikah ho gaya hai....hum donoon rukhsati karte hi america mei chale jayenge
saba: lekin tumhai 1 hafte mei america jaana hoga...itni jaldi ye sab rukhsati or sab kaise hogi??
arfeen: saba...main tumhare liye mera 1 saal waste kar sakta hoon humari rukhsati isi 1 hafte mei hogi...lekin america k liye apply or sab kuch karne mei 6 months to lagegngay hi to phir hum america chale jayenge
saba: lekin....humare parents abhi rukhsati nahi hone denge na
arfeen: main baat karoonga unse.....kyun k ye humari life hai..or hum ek dusre se bohat pyaar karte hain...to phir hum donoon ki isi mei khushi hai
saba: acha main rakhti hoon
arfeen: Allah Hafiz...main unse kal hi baat karta hoon
saba: acha theek hai Allah Hafiz
now we are gonna go on kash (hedar and sara)
next day sara and hedar are coming to hospital
sara sees hedar
saara goes to him
sara: hi hedar
hedar: hi...tum abhi itna jaldi kuch kaam tha kya??
sara: hedar....mere dad ki tabyat bohat kharab hai or unhai mere zaroorat hai.....wo london mei hain....
hedar: toh??
sara: toh ye bache ka case hai mere upper.... or main mere dad k pass jaana chahti hoon unhai heart attack aaya hai
hedar: main ye case akela handle karloonga....lekin tumne abhi permission li kya??
sara: main jaanti hoon mujhai senior doctor permission nahi dengi....kyun k pehle 2 months mei london mei thi apne dad k saath
hedar: toh?? abhi to tumhare koi case nai hai koshish to karo
sara: lekin agar nai jaane diya to
hedar: main unse baat karoon?? i mean if u dont mind
sara: haan plz i will cum with u
hedar: acha chalo
they both go to senior doctor's office
SD: app log yaha?? sab theek to hai na??
hedar: good morning mam....wo haan sab theek hai humain aap se wo bachay k case mei baat karni thi
SD: jee bole....wo bacha theek to hai na??
hedar: haan mam wo bilkul theek hai....mujhai aap se kehna tha k dr.sara london jaana chahti hai un k dad ko heart attack aaya hai wo 1 hafte mei ajayengi...main ye case akela handle kar sakta hoon
SD: oh to ye baat hai....lekin wo apni job se aise chutiya nai le sakti
sara: per mam
SD: or dr.sara....aap janti hai dr.hedar is new here...lekin ap to nai hai...ap itna important case chor k kaise ja sakti hain??
sara: mam main 5 din mei ajaoongi....sirf mujhai mere dad ko dekh lene dijiye unhai bohat bara heart attack aaya hai
SD: lekin 1 shart pe... k aake aap ko apni duty double tym karni paregi
sara: okay mam main karloongi
SD: aap ja sakti ho
sara: thanks
than sara and hedar walks out from there
sara holds hedar's hand
sara: thank u so much
hedar: 4 what?
sara: mere saath k liye
hedar: friends mei sorry or thanks nai hota
sara: acha main chalti hoon....waha phonchnay mei bhi 1 din lagega
hedar: acha bye
sara: bye
now we are gonna come on arjuhi (aamir and zaara)
zaara is sitting in hospital
suddenly a man comez
man: jee aap zaara hai??
zaara: jee haan aap kaun??
man: mujhai mr.aamir ne bheja hai....mera naam sharma hai
zaara: lakin kyun?
sharma: aap unse phone pe baat kar lijiye
than zaara calls aamir
amir: hello
zaara: hello sir main zaara baat karrahi hoon
aamir: haan zaara bolo??? kaise hain ab tumhare dad??
zaara: sir wo ab behtar hai lakin doctor ne kaha hai k un k saath har waqt koi help k liye un k saath betha ho
aamir: acha chalo acha hai
zaara: sir aap ne ye sharma jee ko yaha bheja hai mere pass
amir: haan mene socha k kyun na mr.sharma tumhare dad k pass bhet jaye help k liye or tum yaha aajao kyun k mujhai 1 assistant ki bohat zaroorat hai
zaara: lekin sir...main phir bhi kal se aoongi kyun k aaj to office ka tym khatam ho gaya hai
aamir: jee haan main jaanta hoon...lekin aap kal se aa sakti ho
zaara: jee zaroor agar mr.sharma mere dad k pass bethe toh
aamir: toh theek hai kal se aajana subah 8 bajay
zaara: jee okay sir bye
aamir: bye
than after cut the phone
aamir is so happy
that he will finally see zaara again!!

now this part is dont hope all of u lyk it=)
luv mehr=D

Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago