kasam se....jeena sirf mere liye part 9 on page 18 - Page 8

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part 6

this time i will start with kash (sara and hedar)
hedar was walking in locker room
suddenly the announcement starts...which is saying k sab meeting room mei ajao
so hedar and sara went there
sara to senior doctor: mam aap ne bulaya??
sd: jee haan dr.sara...mujhai aap donoon se bohat zaroori baat karni hai
hedar: jee mam boliye??
sd: dekhe aap donoon ko 1 week 1 saath kaam karna hoga
sara: per kyun mam??
sd: kyun k aaj 1 bachay ka case aaya hai jis ka bohat bara problem hai
hedar: kaisa problem??
sd: pehle main aap logo se poochna chahti hoon...k aap donoon ko 1 saath kaam karne mei koi problem to nahi hai??
sara: nahi mam...per case to bataye??
sd: us bache ka dimagi problem hai
hedar: kya??..per itne se bache ka??
sd: well ye aap log dekhenge...abhi mujhai kuch zaroori kaam hai..to main tumse baad mei baat karti hoon
hedar and sara: yes mam
phir senior doctor waha se chali jaati
hedar and sara start walks together
hedar: ye case kaise start karna hoga?
sara: ye to humain bache ko dekhe karna hoga....k wo kaisa hai
hedar: acha per kal se kaam start karna hai na acha main chalta hoon Allah Hafiz
sara: ok Allah Hafiz
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now this part will go to karanika (aamir and zaara)
1 hour passed....zaara cums again
zaara goes on information counter...and asks about aamir
the woman on counter calls aamir...and aamir say yes
zaara knocks the door
amir: come in
zaara goes in
and she sees aamir is talking to someone
aamir to the man: tum jao main tumse baad mei baat karta hoon
aamir to zaara: salam....aap yaha??
zaara: w.salam...je mene aap ko nahi pehchana??
aamir: please have a seat......pehchanogi bhi kaise?? kabhi tumne mujhai dekha hi nahi hai
zaara: aap ka naam aamir hai na??
aamir: jee haan
zaara: acha mera naam....
aamir: jee mujhai pata hai aap ka naam zaara hai...or aap ko mere cozn ne bheja hai...ap shamjiye aap ki job pakki
zaara: oh thank you so much.....per aap ne mere certificatez bhi nahi dekhe??
aamir: jee wo main aap ko janta hoon...mere cozn ne aap k baare mei mujhai sab bata diya.....to main aap ko mere assistant banne ki job deta hoon
zaara: thank you so much
aamir: aap ko koi problem to nahi hai na??
zaara: jee nahi thanks a lot.....ab main kal se ajaoon??
aamir: jee bilkul
zaara: jee okay Allah Hafiz
aamir: Allah Hafiz
phir zaara waha se chali jaati....or aamir wohi soch raha hota
k ab zaara us ki assistant hogi us k saath kaam karegi and all that
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now we will go on mayur (shaan and muskaan)
muskaan calls shaan
as shaan luks at his phone and sees muskaan's number
and gets so happy and picks up the phone
shaan: hello
muskaan: hello....wo sorry mujhai kaam tha is liye mene call kaat di
shaan: acha koi baat nahi
muskaan: waise tum mujhai kyun dinner per le jana chah rahe ho??
shaan dil hi dil mei: yaar shaan tu bhi koi idiot hai us ko direct hi dinner pe aane ka boldiya....koi bahana to sochta ab kya bahana banaoon??
muskaan: hello?? u there??
shaan: wo mene is liye kaha k mere aaj birthday hai...or mere saare dost kaam per hai to mene socha kyun na tumhai boloon aane ka
muskaan: ohh
shaan: to tum aogi na?
muskaan: haan...zaroor....kitne bajay?
shaan: 9 bajay theek hai??
muskaan: haan bilkul
shaan: okay Allah Hafiz
muskaan: okay Allah Hafiz.....and happy birthday in advance
shaan: oh thanks
phir muskaan phone rakh deti
and shaan dil hi dil mei: birthday to hai hi nahi....bs ab kuch ulta mat kardena shaan!!
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now we will go on monaya (arfeen and saba)
saba or uske parents arfeen k ghar dawat mei jaate
arfeen saba ko dekhe bas dekhta hi reh jata
saba to arfeen's mom: salam aunty
a's mom: w.salam beta kesi ho??
saba: jee aunty main theek hoon
a's mom: beta tum arfeen k room mei jao us k saath baatein karo..tab tak main or tmhari mummy daddy kuch baat karlete hain
saba: acha aunty
saba arfeen k room mei jaati
saba: salam
arfeen: w.salam.....bohat khubsoorat lag rahi ho
saba: thanks
phir ye part inke parents per jaata
a's mom: aaj mujhai aap se kuch bohat zaroori baat karni thi is liye mene saba ko bhi andar bhej diya
s's mom: jee aap ko aisi konsi baat karni thi??
a's mom: jee mujhai wo ap ko kehna tha k main chahti hoon arfeen america mei parhne jaye
s's dad: to is mei kya burai hai??
a's mom: per rukhsati k baad jayega to saba akeli ho jayegi na
s's mom: wo parkar aajaye phir hum rukhsati kar lenge
a's mom: chaliye aap ne mujhai samajh liya...ap saba ko to samjha lenge na
s's dad: haan saba ko kya aitraaz hoga 2 saal ki hi to baat hai
a's mom: acha phone pe dekhe aati hoon
phone per baat karne k baad sab log ek saath khana khake waha se chale jaate

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now this part is done...hope u all lyk it =)
Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
hey amaizng part !!!

so Mayu invited Nupur to dinner

saying that it is his b-day !!
wow !!!
wonder wat happenzzz if she findzz out itzz a lie!!!
do cont soon na !!
-Lina-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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fab updatee mehr
loved all the parts..esp the karanika one😳
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tht was sooooooooo awesome part
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All the parts were amazing
But As anjali said Karanika part was the BEST...
Cant wait to read more.

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