'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 58

lovely update neela

i hope mayank soon 4gets his nupur n excepts the nupur he is being married to
i think it will be awesum if she turns out to be his nupur

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

hmm....what I feel is if this story were for real and maybe somewhere it maybe real too...
so wud this have been possible for that old nupur to come back and new one to go?? Haan it can be possible ....everythng is but not everytime.....
And who knws ths nupur knws the old nupur....you never knw....maybe that's the reason shez so close to shilpa aunty and mayank too.....

How can you just say to change the story line just bcz u are a mayur fan ??

Why aren't ppl Realistic or am I too much of an Idealist ??

Something must be there na in Neela di's mind jo woh aisa karrahi hai?
Aisa koi kehe I really dnt like !

If ur hurt I'm sorry in advance I just cudn't take it hence, said out load !

-fatima

finally the wedding yeepie

just loved it

do cont soon

wanna read further

thnx for the pm

love

sneha

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@fatima....tumhein yeah track pasand hai toh enjoy karo main ne tumhain roka toh nahi hai😆mujhe yeah nupur nahi pasand aur na hi yeah track toh as a reader mujhe apni baat kehne ka pura haq hai....n yeah i m proud to be a mayur fan😳aur mujhe Mayur aik saath hi acche lagte hai..😳aur yeah her aik ko apni opinion kehne ka pura haq hai agar hum story ko pasand karte hain toh criticise bhi kar sakte hain.

@maria: shukr hai tumhe bura nahi laga...hum toh darr hi gayee....post toh kar diya tha phir socha kahi tum bura maan gayee aur ruth gayee toh...aur hume yeh acha nahi lagta koi hamare wajah se ruthe !! 😊....sach kaha story hai aur sab ka apna apna nazariya hota hai .....chalo ek aur mayur fan aacha hai...😳 kuch log tum jasie bhi loyal hai, nahi toh aaj k zamane mein aise log kaha ! 😆

@neela di: updated my comment on page 78 ! do have a look !

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

@maria: shukr hai tumhe bura nahi laga...hum toh darr hi gayee....post toh kar diya tha phir socha kahi tum bura maan gayee aur ruth gayee toh...aur hume yeh acha nahi lagta koi hamare wajah se ruthe !! 😊....sach kaha story hai aur sab ka apna apna nazariya hota hai .....chalo ek aur mayur fan aacha hai...😳 kuch log tum jasie bhi loyal hai, nahi toh aaj k zamane mein aise log kaha ! 😆

amazing update
bt am sad abt mayank and other nupur marriage

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I just starteted reading ur FF yesterday nd im already done with it..

Originally posted by: princez_94

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I just starteted reading ur FF yesterday nd im already done with it..

And i have NO words to describe how amazing it is.. ITs... Amazing,awesome,uniqe,wonderful, the far most amazing FF i have

ever read... 👏

ONe thing i ADORE with ur FF is ur writing style u write so beautifully.. I love it u showed Nupur and Maynks love as a very PUre one... 😳

It was a pleasure to read it... & I have never ever cried soo much by reading an FF ur ff made me cry especially The balcony scene... it really touches ones heart... SIMPLY AMAZING... 👏😳😍

& one thing more that i just loved from ur ff is that I didn\t have to stop while reading like i read other ffs mostly written in hindi and Hndi & Urdu have their changes.. so always had to sop at sum point nd change the word to understand the sentence... I was soo happy with ur writing style....😊

Aur ek guzarish hai... Aap ne Mayank ka dukh, dard bohat achi tarah se bayank kiya hai please ab aap Nupur ki side ki story bhi bataye ke kaise woh zinda reh rahi ahi apne Zindagi ke bina... Please show Nupur\s side of the story soon how she ahs been.. how every moment has passed for her..😒😭

Anyways I can\t belive Maynk kis shaadi... Please contunue sooon i want Mayur meeting soon or atleast tell us more about Nupur condition...😳

awwww...such wonderful comments! I am really touched 😳 Dunno what else to say. About aap ki guzarish...filhaal to Mayank ki nazariye se zindagi ko dekh lijiye. Bohat jald hi Nupur ki khabar lete hai...Keep reading Laiba and thank you once again for liking my FF and such beautiful comments. I am honoured to have a reader like you on board.

-Neela

Originally posted by: sharneel

awwww...such wonderful comments! I am really touched 😳 Dunno what else to say. About aap ki guzarish...filhaal to Mayank ki nazariye se zindagi ko dekh lijiye. Bohat jald hi Nupur ki khabar lete hai...Keep reading Laiba and thank you once again for liking my FF and such beautiful comments. I am honoured to have a reader like you on board.

-Neela

Too good

loved it

hope their relationship works well