'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#541

Hey Neela di,

It was a good update loved it....but yet found something missing !!
Please don't mind !

"Abhi Na Chaer Muhabbat Kay Geet Aey Muttrib….Abhi Hayat Ka Mahaul Khushgavar Nahin"
this took my heart away !

tc
fatima

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#542

heyy neela

nice update but yaar i m not like mayur seperation n new nupur....plzzzzzzzzzz changed the story line..ab mayur ko seperate hue kafi updates ho chuki hain hamain nupur ki condition bhi batao n plzzzzzzzzmayur ko mila do

do continue soon

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#543

Finally u updated neela

fabulous upd8

loved it

do cont soon

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#544

that's a big twist

loved the style as usual

lets see wat happens next

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
Hey Neela di,

It was a good update loved it....but yet found something missing !!
Please don't mind !

"Abhi Na Chaer Muhabbat Kay Geet Aey Muttrib'.Abhi Hayat Ka Mahaul Khushgavar Nahin"
this took my heart away !

tc
fatima

hmm...perhaps you are right. Whilst writing this part, I was a bit undisciplined I guess and let my thoughts run wild. Riya's entry was completely unexpected. I was planning to bring her in after at least 2 or 3 parts later but then again thought introducing her now would create a stronger plot. The other thing could be the long gap I created since my last update. I had my readers exactly where I wanted them to be...the empathy they had for Mayank, the mystery and wild predictions about what happened to Nupur and sympathy for Shilpa...all those are now lost and the momentum is no longer there. I am aware of this and I guess to compensate to my readers (who are still with me) I need to work harder

Thanx for your honest opinion though. I needed to hear this 😉 The lines above, btw, are not mine 😊

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
heyy neela

nice update but yaar i m not like mayur seperation n new nupur....plzzzzzzzzzz changed the story line..ab mayur ko seperate hue kafi updates ho chuki hain hamain nupur ki condition bhi batao n plzzzzzzzzmayur ko mila do

do continue soon

Maria...yaar main kya karooon. Nupur ki divorce kara du kya? Mayank ko bhej deti hoon Nupur ke sasural aur woh usse bhaga ley aayega. Then they will live happily ever after 😆 yaar...I know Mayur separation koi bhi nahi chahta per haalat hi aise hogaye hai. filhal iss Nupur se kaam chalalo na!! itni bhi to buri nahi bechari...sab kuch jaante hue bhi Mayank se shaadi kar rahi hai...kaun larki aisa karegi bolo. Keep reading...u never know shayed ending tumhe pasand aajaye 😉 Thanx for your lovely comments...muah!

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#547

@sariska sorry for the delay yaar. I will try my best to be regular now.

@Pooja, Gopi, Alini thanks for the comments. Keep reading

-Neela

Edited by sharneel - 15 years ago

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
that's a big twist

loved the style as usual

lets see wat happens next

Mahiiiiii..🤗yaar kahan thee itne din? We need to talk...seriously. waqt mile to pm kar dena..ok? I am worried abt you. Summi bhi busy hai exams me...kisika kuch pata nahi chal raha..

-Neela

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#549

I know I owe you lotsa comments.. just some more time.. plzzzzzzzzzzzz...

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
I know I owe you lotsa comments.. just some more time.. plzzzzzzzzzzzz...

lotsa??? lotsa nahi looooooooottttsssaaaa (interest ke saath 😉 ) more time passes more O's will be added to the lotsa 😆 Dun worry sweetheart...jab aakhir me batting karogi to chhakka laga dena...saare ki saaron muh bandh 😃 Just keep reading ..haaan! Qayenaat ko beech me chhorke mat jaana..

Love u
-Neela