My MayUr/ArTi OS corner: ArTi OS Prt3 updtd Pg 23! - Page 2

Originally posted by: aish129

OMG Yamz Yamz Yamz........what have you done????????

This is absolutely amazing.......I have been telling you for such a long time that you should take up writing as atleast a side profession....and you just continue to prove that I am right 😳 again and again.........

I'm absolutely in love with what you have written there, such a beautiful portayal of ArTi in love! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

i have fallen in love with ArTi all over again....and you made me do it!

yamini............................................................YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE DOING TO ME!! 😆

i have read it over and over again for about five times, and then only have come to comment........!

luved how you brought through the confusion, especially "of Arjun"......and now this has sent me into dreamland....pull me out of it sometime soon cause I'm getting lost further and further in....😉

just loved it, you have to write more!!!! i can't get enough of ur OS's ever!!!!

luv ya.....

aish xx 😳

thnkss again 🤗 🤗 will deffo write more!!!!!😉

Originally posted by: Yamini.Arjun

haha😃 thanks sooo much Aish...OMG was it that good?😲 🤣 🤣 thanks man...well this is all my imagination about ArTi 😍😍😍😍😍 this pair can make me write pagess of their secret love 😆 and u know what Aish...ur comment really means so much to me....ya i think i shud start taking up writing as my profession too....because ArTi make me write so well...that i myself cant imagine i can think this widely 😆

thnkss again 🤗 🤗 will deffo write more!!!!!😉😳

Originally posted by: -MohitzPari-

awwwwwwww badiiiii

awsomeeeeeeee

loved it!!! awieeeeeeeee......I wish something like this happen!!!

the part when he came closer to her.....made me so excited🤣

and the way they were expressing thier love with fighting...sooo cuteee naa!!!!

ese ese ideas tere deemag me aate kaha se he??

for real..awsome one......though reading is not my hobby as u know...I enjoyed reading it!!!!!

ps

haaa uska naam dekhkar I was blusshing🤣...

this is the first time am thinking i should have better vocabulary....realy di i dont have the words to say how beautiful it was👏👏....i could feel the emosions of both rati and arjun so easily.... its like u write each line after dipping it in bowl of feeling😆..... u should be a writer proffesionally..every part was so believable and hopefully true😍... arti are extra adorable thanks for this treat dear!!! but i am not full yet 😳 waiting for more🤗

Originally posted by: theneha1992

this is the first time am thinking i should have better vocabulary....realy di i dont have the words to say how beautiful it was👏👏....i could feel the emosions of both rati and arjun so easily.... its like u write each line after dipping it in bowl of feeling😆..... u should be a writer proffesionally..every part was so believable and hopefully true😍... arti are extra adorable thanks for this treat dear!!! but i am not full yet 😳 waiting for more🤗

And thats one of the sweetest compliments i've ever recieved! Im so thrilled to know that you wish have a good vocabulary after reading my OS...🤗 thats actually a huge compliment..! thanks a lot Neha! Yup hopefully ArTi seriously think that they are meant to be!!

hey yamzzz

yaar bahut hi lamba tha....hw come...seriously it took me atleast 10 minutes to read it!!!😆..

jkss,,,🤣

awsume jaana

love the whole thing and each line ....

it was so toucyyy and agreed better late than never!😛

do write more

-sanam-