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relentless.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey everyone! Im posting after such a long time today, but Arjun-Rati always make me do so 😆 . Anyways, lately a lot of my friends here have been convincing me to write One-Shots on ArTi/MayUr, as i have written some earlier and they love the way i write, so im going to give it my best shot, im not at all good as a writer, im not that imaginative when it comes to writing, but the OS that im going to write is requested specially by my really close friend Palak (shinz), she's a really dear friend of mine, we have loads to discuss always, we laugh together, we get along like a house of fire, shes a total sweetheart! 🤗.

Debo, Nidz and Palak have been convincing me to write on MayUr, and its all their motivation for me. Debo and Nidz, i will write more OS's specially for you both, for now im dedicating this one to my bestie Palak, so here i am with a Study scene on MayUr :

After the auditions for the film get over at Excel, there's a sudden tension that arises among all students since their "surprise" exams are starting in 2 days time, they have really less time to prepare, so their share of fun is done for good, all that they have to do is concentrate on their books.

Mayank-Nupur are at their house, Mayank cleaning the house and Nupur cooking in the kitchen, and Mayank is all cool and chilled out since he's the topper of the college but Nupur is so not into it, she adds too much salt & spice to the food since she's really worried about the upcoming exams 😆.

Nupur : (yells for Mayank)...Mayankkkk! Tumhe main kitni baar kahungi ki khaana tayaar hai, please khaalo, mujhe padhaai karni hai, kyunki tum toh pass ho jaaoge, mera kya hoga!

Mayank : (shaking his head)...Nupur main aa raha hoon, tum kyun itna chilaati ho? aur batao khaane pe kya banaa hai?

Nupur : dal, sabzi aur roti

Mayank : accha kya baat hai, aaj itna saara khana, roz toh alloo ke paraanthe banaati ho, aaj kya ho gaya?

Nupur : (very mad at him) ...Khaana hai toh khao, nahi toh fek do!

Mayank : Nupur, tum bhi na, main sirf mazaak kar raha hoon, tum sabse acchi ho aur khaana bahot hi acchaa bana hai..

Nupur finally smiles after all that tension

Mayank : Accha Nupur tum batao, padhaai shuru karein, hamaare paas time bahot kam hai, sirf do din bacche hain

Nupur : Haan Mayank wo toh hai, chalo jaldi karte hain, kal college ke liye jaldi bhi toh uthnaa hai

Mayank gets all the required books, and by looking at those books, Nupur is already feeling sleepy.. 😆

Mayank : Chalo lets get started...

Nupur : Mayank mujhe bahot neend aa rahi hai, main kal padhti hoon, ok, bye, goodnight..

Mayank : ahh tumne kahaa aur maine maan liya? hargiss nahi, yahaan par aao, mere paas baitho, main sab kuch tumhaare saath revise karoonga aur aise tumhaara bhi revision ho jaayega

Nupur : theek hai Mayank, but please thoda jaldi karna, (and she yawns yet again)

Mayank : Ohhh yahaan dekho Nupur, Srk ki photo mere book mein....

Nupur : Kahaan Mayank, kahaan?? mujhe bhi dekhni hai picture srk ki

Mayank : Yahaan koi pic nahi hai, maine jaan boojh ke aisa kiyaa ki tum padhaai mein aur dhyaan de sako (Mayank's stern face)

Nupur : theek hai baba, main padhoongi..

Mayank : Nupur, tumhe khud accha nahi lagta ki jab padhaai acche se ho, toh exam bhi kitna easy jaata hai...aur agar hum acche se studies karenge....hum dono top karenge....

(Nupur interrupts) ...

Nupur : Haaann Mayank...(laughs) tumhe yaad hai wo din jab hum itne dushman hua karte the, aur uss project ke baad toh meri khair hi nahi thii..aur hum dono ne ek doosre ko challenge liya thaa ki dekhte hain iss baar exams top kaun karega...(Mayank interrupts)

Mayank : Haan by god Nupur, wo din hum dono ke liye kitne challenging the naa, mujhe ab tak wo din yaad hai jab tum library mein kitna research karti thii, aur mujhe neecha dikhaane ki koshish karti thii...

and both of them laugh out really loud...and give each other such a cute and a tight hug...

Nupur : Kya pataa tha ki hum dono ek doosre se pyar karne lagegein, aur phir hamaarti shaadi bhi ho jayegi..

Mayank : maine bhi aisa kabhi nahi sochaa tha, aur aaj hum dono sirf ek doosre ke liye hain aur hamesha rahenge

Nupur : chalo ab padhte hain Mayank, bahot baatein kar li..

Mayank : accha ab tum mere saath revision karo aur kal hum dono phir se doosre subjects ka revision karenge..

Nupur : chalo theek hai mere pati parmeshwar..lekin isske baad mujhe koi picture dekhi hai, aur please tum so mat jaana, hum dono ek saath dekhege...

Mayank : haan nupur, aur hum woh baad mein decide karenge...

They are both sitting so comfortable and cosily on their bed, and studying with real concentration....and Mayank is revising everything with Nupur, and Nupur does the same as well, shes learning well and shes also teaching Mayank ....with which Mayank is learning more than what he actually knew...!

Next OS will be probably a movie or something....you guys tell me what to write next...!!

PALAK, hope you liked it girl, Love you so much.. ! Well im not satisfied with this at all, because as i said, im not imaginative at all..🤣 But i still tried my best!

GUYS, please do leave comments and let me know if I should continue writing or not!!

Edited by Yamini.Arjun - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Yamz

It was amazing OS yaar

I am dying to see something like this in the show but *sighs*

Anyway I really loved your OS

Keep writing hun

x x

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 15 years ago

It was rili good yar........

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relentless.

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Posted: 15 years ago

thanksss so much Zo and sunshine girl! 🤗

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relentless.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
Yamz
It was amazing OS yaar

I am dying to see something like this in the show but *sighs*

Anyway I really loved your OS

Keep writing hun

x x

i will continue writing Zoah..ur comment means a lot...🤗

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relentless.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl
It was rili good yar........

thanks a bunch

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relentless.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey everyone, this is my second OS on none other than Arjun-Rati (ArTi), as as i promised the last time that i'll be continuing with the MayUr one, but i decided to write on ArTi instead, and this is dedicated to all my lovely friends i.e all my ArTians who are simply crazy about this pair..specially dedicated to Debzie & Nidz.. Hope you all like it ..

Arjun's View :

I could feel my heart thumping real loud as i saw her walk away from me, i could feel the moistness in my eyes when i saw those tears in her eyes, did her abscence actually affect me that deeply? Why dont i get affected by anyone else's absence or presence, is there a special connection between the two of us, does she feel the same way as i do, why dont i get this feeling with anyone else, whats that special relationship between us?

Why is it that everytime i raise my voice at her, and her tears roll down? Why does she get this deeply affected. If it were someone else, im sure that person would not be so deeply affected and why is it that i feel so low & shattered when i yell at her? Why do i yell at her, why cant i be more calm...

Rati's View :

As i walked away from him, i felt this weird pain in my heart as if i was doing the wrong thing by walking away on him, how would he be feeling at the moment, am i doing the right thing? Im not able to express myself, why dont i ever respond back when he yells at me!

But the question is, why does he yell at me? Is it because i spend more time with Abhishek & Mohit or is it because he dislikes me! No but if he disliked me, he wouldnt have cared to yell or be calm on the contrary..Should i call him tonight? I think i should since i cannot spend the rest of my evening & night without seeing Arjun or speaking with him....

Both are long lost in their thoughts & dreams, and then suddenly Rati's cell-phone rings all of a sudden......

R : Hello

A : Hey Rati, i just wanted to say....

R : umm Arjun, im not really in a mood to talk to you at the moment since im practising a "Love scene" dialogue for tomorrow's shoot. Bye.

A : Rati, can you please give me a chance to explain about yesterday..? please

R : I told you Arjun, im busy and now im hanging up on you..Bye and see you tomorrow..

A : Rati, look im SORRY, please dont do this to me, you have no idea how desperate i've been to talk to you..

R : See Arjun, you're actually wasting my time now, why dont you understand that tomorrow's shoot is going to be a busy and hectic one, i need to practise and then go to sleep...and the same goes for you too...

A : Okay Rati, i wont waste your time for too long, but you need to give me at least 5 mins to explain you everything..

R : Alright Arjun, go on, but only 5 mins..not more..!!

A : Okay now you dont have to make those funny faces, it really doesnt suit you (and he laughs)

R : OMG Arjun, how did you know that? Can you see me from somewhere..

A : Rati, dont look so shocked, just turn around & see, im outside your bedroom and you forgot to close your door, and thats how i can see you...(laughs some more)

R : (turns around and is shocked) ...Arjun what are you doing here so late? You should have been home, you have no idea how busy it'll be tomorrow, you need to understand that health is important too, and sleep is the most vital part of a routine..Arjun please go back, i promise we'll talk tomorrow...

A : Rati, will you please give me a chance to say something?

R : (looks at him strangely) - Okay go on..

A : Look, i told you over the phone that im very sorry for everything, but i didnt tell you the whole thing because you didnt let me do so..

R : But, Arjun our day is important tomorrow, we could talk tomorrow too, we have ample of time left with us

A : I cant wait until tomorrow...so Rati, im really sorry about everything that happened yesterday...i dont know but i get this feeling of insecurity when you spend most of your time with Mohit and Abhishek, i know that we both spend time most when we shoot, but thats shooting, not reality, why cant you give a little of your time to me also?

R : Ahh what is this new thing come in between us, does spending time with others affect you that much, Mohit & Abhi are my close friends, and thats why i spend my time with my close buddies, thats all, but you tell me why are you getting all insecure?

A : I dont know about that Rati, but i feel very lonely when you're not around, i think im getting too used to you being around me all the time...

R : I feel the same Arjun, i get this special feeling with you, why dont i get this feeling when im with other people on the sets..?

A : I have no idea Rati (and their look at the opposite direction, they are not able to look into each others' eyes).

R : (blushes a little and smiles) Arjun, this is getting really awkward for me, just say what you have to...please just say it...if i wasn't important for you, why would you yell at me...i simply told you yesterday that i didnt want to go out to a movie with you, you didn't have to yell at me...you could have just calmed down a little...you never behave this way with Sanaya or Navina..why me then?

A : Rati, how should i tell you this? im running out of words, i dont know if im crazy, i just dont know how to say this to you??

R : Arjun, please dont play hide n seek with me, simply say what you need to...did i abuse you, did i fight with you? did i insult you ever? or is it something else??

A : No no no rati, none of this yaar, its completely something else, and you know what im talking about...dont run away from your feelings...

R : what feelings Arjun?

A : Oh come on Rati...why are you pretending as if you dont know anything? When i get a small hurt on the sets, you literally run around & panic to get me cured, when the director yells at me, why do you yell back at him? why dont you yell back when the director mistreats other actors on-sets?? Why is it that when your mom makes special food for you, why do you always share it with me first?? When you host lunches & dinners at your house, why do your eyes eagerly look for me whenever you are with other guests? dont think i dont notice anything Rati, i note each and every move of yours..

R : OMG (shockedd) How do you know so much about me? and you note my every move?😲 Whoa Arjun! thats a shocker for me...? and if i said all this is true then what would you say?

A : You need not prove it to me that all this true or false....it is all in front of eyes, and you are talking about the truth.... you think im blind? i cant see anything? i know you feel the same about me as i do about you...and the first day i saw you, i had this feeling, we are both going to be really close..

R : Arjun, you are so right...its suprising how you know me this well..

A : do you know why i know you this well?

He went close to her, Rati was moving backwards and kind of shying away, Arjun walked closer to her, she moved back a little more, and he suddenly caught her by her waist...and she felt this shiver run down her spine...a really intense shiver..and he went closer and kissed her so gently on her cheek...Rati was astonished, shocked, happy and she could feel the heat on her face and she gave him back the most passionate hug ever!! They both were still hugging and talking to each other and Arjun finally said,

A : I love you Rati, i love you so much, i could not imagine i could love anyone this much..

R : Arjun, i never knew you loved me this much, or else i would confessed to you long back that how much I love you!

A : Rati, why didnt you say this earlier? We've spent so many beautiful times together, and you could have given me some hints about your love for me..

R : I was scared Arjun, scared of losing you...! thats why i was waiting for the right time and im so happy that we finally spoke our hearts out..it feels beautiful!

And they hugged even more tight and those tears of joy were rolling down their eyes...and they both thought......what a beautiful confession we had, why didnt we ever realise it earlier!

But as there's a saying....Better late than never!! 😍

HOPE you all liked it guys, its a LONG one, but please bare with me, since im a crazy ArTi maniac, also this is my imagination, its got nothing to do with their real life.

Love you all!!! Please do comment guys, everyones comments mean a lot to me and my writing skills! 🤗

And do let me know if you guys want me to continue with more?

Lotsss of love

Yamss!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Beautiful OS Yamz 👏
How I wish this happens 😍 😍
Puleez continue! I can read anything and everything related to MayUr and ArTi 😍

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG Yamz Yamz Yamz........what have you done????????

This is absolutely amazing.......I have been telling you for such a long time that you should take up writing as atleast a side profession....and you just continue to prove that I am right 😳 again and again.........

I'm absolutely in love with what you have written there, such a beautiful portayal of ArTi in love! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

i have fallen in love with ArTi all over again....and you made me do it!

yamini............................................................YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE DOING TO ME!! 😆

i have read it over and over again for about five times, and then only have come to comment........!

luved how you brought through the confusion, especially "of Arjun"......and now this has sent me into dreamland....pull me out of it sometime soon cause I'm getting lost further and further in....😉

just loved it, you have to write more!!!! i can't get enough of ur OS's ever!!!!

luv ya.....

aish xx 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: 2112ization
Beautiful OS Yamz 👏
How I wish this happens 😍 😍
Puleez continue! I can read anything and everything related to MayUr and ArTi 😍

thank you so much Ayesha!! 🤗 i knowwww how i wish this happened man....of course...i need you to encourage me more always, so that i can keep writing...Love you...and thank you soooo much for ur comment...really means a lot!

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