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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update.
sapna-ridz conversation was too good.
the way sapna made ridz realise was too goog.
armaan is too much. he just listerned to that one unnecessary thing and left. can't he hear the before or after words.deser
but this time i wish to see ridz confess first. after all that armaan had did to her, atleast he deserves this much right.
waiting for the next update.
thanks for the PM though i didnt reply to the previous updates.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mansi....fantastic update!

Am so happy to see Riddhima realizing Armaan's importance in her life. You described her confused emotions very well. I especially loved the ending ... "Someone was missing..........." These three words spoke volumes.

Do continue soon.

Richa

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Mansi its really a cute update Sapna is rocking at least she gave her a piece of brain now Ridhima open ur brain & eyes go and confess kahi bachar Almaan ko pagal mat kar dena apna pyaar mein plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm



hey nidha.. dont worry sweety the next part will have lil surprise too ab wo achha lagega ya nahi that i'll leave to you... Sapna is indeed a true friend sometimes someone else is required to make us realize what we are overlooking i guesss Sapna did the same for ridhhima but uska kitna asar hua hai , ya hua bhi hai ya nahi wo to baad main pata chalega.. till then thoda sa aur wait abhi exams aa gaye hain naa kya karu ??? but thanks for the comment dear😃



Originally posted by: naureen_aly

fantastic part

glad atleast sapna have brain she understand riddhima and armaan so well
beechara armaan he is soooooooooooo lonely without his princess
well cant blam riddhima completely she has gone through soo much hope she realized that armaan is more than a frd
plzzzzzzzzzzzz i want the confession from riddhima soon
cant expect anything from DMG
cant see armaan like this
all the best 4 ur exams my paper is also starting in june



hi naureen

i agree Armaan is soo lonely and that too without any fault of his i guess thats life its unfair, dnt worry i dnt expect from DMG either my story would be different and logical... thanks for the wishes dear i need them a lot😃


Originally posted by: sisgeo

muje jiska dar da wahi hogaya..........i guess this separation was necessary for her to realise that she loves him..........she mistook his gestures as an indication that he too wants separation....but theres more to come.......now they have to fall in love......i mean ridhima..arman is already head over heels in love with her....story of arman's past......waiting for the story to be revealed.......
i felt like crying reading arman's feelings..............😭you're too good di...........hats off for a super update............even though you warned me about something like this going to happen,when it actualy happen,i dont like it...........aur arman ko galat wakht par hi ana thaa!!!!..............feels bad......one of the saddest parts till date for me..............hope everything would be fine soon......now we have to wait till june 2nd week for the next update.............not fare....but the reason for this is more important.......so no problem..........we'll wait......best wishes for the exam's di..........i know you'll do well..........



hey sis.. i told you to b prepared , and u r rite dear the separation was necessary until we loose what we have we sometimes dont realize its worth... Sapna is trying hard to put some brain in ridz thick skull lets see how far she could go... and about the next update well agar kuch free time mila to i will write and update warna u r rite June 2nd week se pehle to mushkil hoga... thanks a ton for your lovely wishes hun...😃


Edited by mansibharti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


thanks arzu 😳


Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

Awesome update
thanks 4 the long update
loved it
felt so sorry 4 armaam
can't wait 4 ridzy 2 confess
con soon
good luck 4 ur exams



thanks for the comment and wishes dear 😳


Originally posted by: moonlight2630

woww gr8 part plz update soon



thanks dear 😃


Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awesome update! Ab inhe jaldi milla do!

Update soon!



dear impatient one 😆 thoda wait karo sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😉


Originally posted by: zara-KSG-malik

hey mansi.............

very touchy update................bus ab armaan to aur mat rulao plz
love the song n rain sequence
continue soon
best of luck for ur exams
tc
zara



hey Zara thanks for the sweet comment dear dont worry time keep on changing, glad you like the part and thanks a lot for the wishes...😃


Originally posted by: rinku28

LOVE....LOVE.....LOVE your ff....

Good luck for ur exams...and continue ASAP!
Can't wait to read more!



hii rinku.. thanks a lot for the wishes... continue jaldi hona to doubtful hai abhi busy wid exam preparations u c.. bas thoda sa wait kar lo then i promise u will touch the ceiling with joy 😉


Originally posted by: SuJaTa790

great part

can't wait for AR confession
and please don't make us wait very much for another update.



hey dear thanks for the comment u know the reason the next update might take some time... 😊


Originally posted by: diyaa1pk

AGAIN SUPERB WRITTNG....SAD THAT THEY R NT ABLE TO SHARE THEIR HEARTS FEELINGS...HERE IS SOME PIECE OF ADVICE FOR ARMAAN
Keh Do Jo Bhi
Mann Main Aaye
Aisa Na Ho
Khamoshi Main
Sun'nay Waala Hi
Kho Jaye
mann Jungle Main
Aag Lagay To
Mann Hi Nahin
Tann Bhi Jal Jaye
Kitnay Zamaanay
Bethay Raho
Phir Sawan Ki
Aas Lagaye
Saawan Ka Kya
Aaye Na Aaye
Keh Do Jo Bhi
Mann Main Aaye
Aisa Na Ho
Hum Jaayen To
Tann Sulgay Aur
Mann Tadpaye
Keh Do Jo Bhi
Mann Main Aaye
Mann Ki Baatain
Keh Denay Say
Chain Aaye Ga
Neend Aaye Gi
Roothay Hoye
Mann Jaayengay
Khushion Bharay
Din Aayengay
Sapnay Liye
Raat Aayegi
Keh Do Jo Bhi
Mann Main Aaye
Aisa Na Ho
Khamoshi Main
Sun'nay Waala Hi
Kho Jaye
Keh Do Jo Bhi
Mann Main Aaye



hey diya loovely words yaar, really touching... 😳 completely suit the situation... lets see what happens next like i said sabr ka phal meetha hota hai... to bas exams khatam hone ka wait karo baaki sab theek ho jaayega...😃 and yeah thanks for the lovely comment


Originally posted by: aati1429

WOW.. SEEMS LOVE WILL IN AIR SOON.. I AM WAITING TO SEE THE REALISATION OF RIDHIMA AND HOW THEY BOTH GET BACK TOGETHER..

AMAZING



hey aati thanks for the comment dear 😃




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

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Hey Mansi Di 🤗 hey baby


Di update ke liye kya kam rulaya tha ki ab update se bhi rula diya... 😭😭

aww dont cry baby trust me i'll make it up to you 😉

I swear di, i was literally crying like anything ...I mean the way u described everything esp Armaan's emotions ... i felt dey are like my emotions... i cud feel dem , be hurt with dem, cry cz of dem jst COZ u hav brilliantly written this part ....

well thats a BIG compliment 😃 ( nana not for i made you cry) for the part that you really felt it was real enough


U knw before posting the comment i literally had to freshen up my mind from the excess of crying ... Man, i hate being such an emotional fool....

na my dear emotional people are the most saneful of all, trust me i'm considered the hard one at home and my bro has officially marked me as th
e crazy one 😆

The way first armaan was praying to not let her go... den his crankiness coz of the sadness dat he cant stop the inevitable ... den the tym he left her home... den his days without her ...

there's more to come darling brace yourself... you are going to cry a little more then
but
... there is a but here... but i wont xplain it here thats for later😉 😆

and last bt not the least , his heart break again in the mall....😭😭...
U knw all his words and sentences portrayed such depth of hurt and pain dat i cudnt tolerate it at one point of time... though this is a fiction but its very realistic ...infact i should say its even practical .... all the situations which occurred in their lives whether good or bad seemed to be perfectly fit in the story ....

oh thank you so much dear you really made my efforts worthwhile coz i dont want my story to be a silly fiction devoid of any logic far from reality its good to see that you found it very much real...

Di , u really really made me cry like mad today ... had it been some one near me den dat person would definitely think dat sumthing greatly wrong happnd with me...😆 (gosh, m laughing at that my condition now...)

Btw, why is Ridz sooooo overlooking his Love ... doesnt the poor guy gave many hints to show dat ....kabhi kabhi toh i feel like dat ridz shud anyhow get his diary in her hand and know the whole truth ....like fully from A to Z .. dat he luvd her since long back n den he was ready to say no for marriage for her happiness , den vivek's truth revealed and so on......

she just need some time darling and a good whacking thats sapna had done some nd just a little is left then you'll see...😉

I mean for God's sake, she doesnt know anything ...as in like ANYTHING....!! She thnks all he did to her was coz he is gud to everyone around and moreover, he considered her gud frnd... ..!! U knw this is really bad on her part .... I mean she shud atleast know few things ...


i'll b back with more


She thinks he is ready to CALL OFF the marriage ... wat she knows dat how many dreams the poor soul had for his proposal, marriage and married life.... 😭😭

Today , m really soo shattered dat everything form the beginning to the end of the story is coming in my mind and i feel so helpless and depressed about the whole thing .. A person who leaves no stone unturned for others happiness is crying bitterly frm inside since months for getting his piece of happiness . ... makes me remind of the fact dat the ppl who are good actually have to bear loads... 😭😭😭

Di, you know the more i write all this the more sad thoughts are budding in my mind .. so, i jst end it here now.. Bt believe me , this was the most touching part i have ever read.....😭😭

Please its a humble request dat u continue soon coz we all really need to come out of this unpleasant shock...😭😭😭....

Luv
Vini / Vinz

P.S : Btw, how are you now ? R u fit n fine ?




vini sweety i'll be back soon with the reply 😃




Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

woooowww sweety...
amazing ud...
ridhi is soo confused...n the decision she took to leave him...make me lil scared too...n armaan thinking to find ways to stop her....
both r missing each other...differnce is armaan knows n ridhi dont know.....n sapna's words n the way she told her n make her face the truth....amazing....n armaan his heart is broken again.....n ridhi she got the answer....she is missing armaan....n armaan in rain...bimar na ho jae......n im really curious to know....wats next....
waiting for the next part.....
all the best for ur exams.........
thnx for the pm............



i'll be back for your reply too 😃

Edited by mansibharti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😊 thankx for the pm buh ive been through it already b4 ur pm...lolz 😆 soooooooo touchy part ....nycly written ....luv the transformation of emotions ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
comment updated on pg 60
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mansibharti



oye maanu updated the part padh lo aur gussa mat hona agali baar the part would be better...😊


i m not angry at all.. u know me that much atleast..

but u seriously test our patience...

and tell u the truth i m really a bad patient and i hate to be one

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Posted: 15 years ago
great part!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update the next part asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally she is relizing tht she has fallen for armaan!!!
wow di it was an amazing part and armaan trying to stop her...i wish he could really!!!

but then when i read tht he is going to tell her his feeling i was like zabardast ab maza aye ga!!!

for once i really thought this ff is ending!!😔
but then naah...abhi tou bohat parts hain!!
really di!!! it was too part!!
and really sorry for tht long update post!!
really sorry if i hurted you it wasnt meant though!!😔

please *sorry*
and yes!!
best of luck for papers di!!!😊
still hoping to update soon!!
love maleeha❤️

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