Reserve Reserve Reserve lol I didn't wanted to post my comment as the thread was under attack of a demand of ur delayed update lol xo. MANSI!!
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Just wanted to say superb FF, u've been bring pretty high top notch with out spreading out the storyline like spreaded jam 😆 as the whole thing is darn addicting 😛
Part 52
Man... Arman had some guts to actually take Riddhima to Vivek But it's closer to the truth! But seriously can't believe she didn't recongized arman's worth Man this is going to be hard for her. promise me ki tum yeh din enjoy karogi, bina yeh soche ki kal kya hoga ... Bolo, will you do that..? For me... Please "
Aww I simply love Armaan, he's always making her smile with joy, argh god dammit! What's wrong with u woman!
I love how closely they are attached to each other with out realising it, sleeping on seperated bed/room, you've proven the character's hollowness of need of each other....AR forever ❤️ *sigh*
promise me ki tum yeh din enjoy karogi, bina yeh soche ki kal kya hoga ... Bolo, will you do that..? For me... Please "
Man Mansi! Thank God it was a DREAM of viviek coming at their hotel n Ridz leaving Arman, or else I WAS going to kill u! Poor Armaan he's so afraid, I can simply feel his fear, excellent writing!👏 as his reverse attiude of being depend on someone so much is easily understable, as he was trying to protect himself from getting hurt tremendously if Ridz was to leave him
The amusment park was a riot!👏⭐️
OMG! RIDDIMA invited ARman to sleep together, andHis hot breath on her waist created a havoc in her heart and body, again she felt very conscious of his touch.phew Woman *bring a fan here please*😆 But glad to see Riddhima coming more in touched with her thoughts...
He smiled, taking few steps he stopped just before her.. She looked up, still bent over her shoe. He soflty placed his hand over hers and just like magic put the clasp on, never breaking the eye-contact, his hands never left hers... She gasped as his fingers traced the length of her arm.. Standing there still looking deeply into her eyes he gently put her hair back, coming a step closer he cupped her face caressing those rosy cheeks with his thumbs..
Her heart beat frantically but could not utter a single word... He came even nearer... His face coming closer.. More close.. Their lips just a micrometer away... She closed her eyes knowing perfectly well what was going to happen next... Oh i def know what going to happen next ..... heart attack! Man ur good :)
The dance in the club was mesmerizing!
O_M_G THEY KISSED!!!! 🥳Hell yea those yucky Viviek lips never touched hers! Every word u typed was magical!
Ah the dance was romantic as hell.....uh oh....the ugly truth.....
Part 53
"He entered with the towel around his neck, water still dripping from hair... he looked hot ! standing there with his bare chest, his tattoos adding to his magnetic masculine personality... She stood there watching him, lost.
He found her staring at him, unblinkingly... she looked so beautiful, so tempting... Yesterday night rolled before his eyes... The magical kiss, her touch... He longed to feel it again... Feel her again... He stepped towards her. His eyes held hers. Her heart started beating rapidly... He came near... Very near, just few inches away..
" Ridhhima " he said in a husky voice. Her breath got stuck in her throat
" A..Armaan.." she could barely manage to whisper
" Ridhhima, aise mat dekho mujhe " he took a step ahead ,she took a step back " why do you keep testing me ? " she just kept looking at his face, he was looking into her eyes, deeply. There was nothing which could say he was kidding ,her mind started racing with her heart... She wanted to say something but all senses seemed to stop working, his masculine fragrance was creating havoc " Dammit! The sparks! Couldn't she not have seen that! Heck Vivek couldn't even cast her under such a spell!😳
Vivek🤢....Damn good that the woman had smacked him......even felt better when he gotten the punch from one and only Armaan😃
Seriously, I loved how your wrote Vivek's side of view of justifying of doing it all for Riddhima sake, brilliantly written of a pathetic mind of a charater, love how you get into the mind of the character 👏
Damn.....Armaan just keep better and better, can't believe he kept such a huge secret of finding out Viviek doings.....digusted...You keep making him more of a saint.....After reading this part...all of his aggresive behaviour has been justified, he simply did it to protect her and keep her smiling😳 <3 Damn ur good mansi!
Part 54
A very Emotional part mansi, you've have done comp.lete justice to the part of Riddhima's broken heart. 👏⭐️Like usual Armaan was such a sweetheart had my heart melting like butter😳 Uff coouldn't believe it was her b-day the next day!! Hehe Love the cake scenario!
" Open your eyes,
And don't you frown,
the thing you desire,
will be found around. "
This was definiately good mansi, 👏 for ur creativity
She looked at him for a moment her lips quivered, smile faltered and then she hugged him burying her head in his chest crying her heart out. Armaan held her wrapping her in his arms, umbrella long forgotten. They both stood there, none spoke. She sobbed in his arms, he just held her being the pillar of her strength to lean on... Till she felt better... *speechless woman* probably the second best scene on my list =D
Armaan made her b-day so beautiful...damn my expectation for my lover has gone up further 😛
Glad you have shown Riddhima has a strong woman in the end as she figured out Vivek isn't worth one tear 👏 Don't worry, i didn't forget armaan😳
Part 55
What and emotional rollar coster woman, I wonder how do you do it! this part was utter fantastic!!! U carry each part with strong entrance👏👏👏👏
Heheh, Muskan will always be muski😆, poor Rahul.
My heart really goes out to Armaan for this part Mansi! He's ignorant angry man behaviour as Riddhima wanted to go to Padma's place, just to make her stay somehow, what an idiot! It had made her go even farther !
Thank god someone had taked some sense into Riddhima's head! Sapna is an angel in diguse, ye girl you tell her!😆
Arghhhh Poor Armaan how many heart breaks his heart going to handle! Man talk about bad timing!! Had to come in the worst part of convo of Sapna n Ridz I really hope she'll make it up to him😛
Fantastic FF Mansi! Oh yes I'll be wating anxiously 😳
P.S. Request- if Riddhima does come back to Armaan in the next part, please don't haste the character of consumting their marriage in one go, I would like to see how their hearts start to actually open up like lovers, as I figure Riddhima still has a lot to learn about Armaan😳
Good Luck on ur Exams! May u pass with flying colours⭐️
Natsxo.
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