The Detective....MAYUR part2 upded - Page 5

fabulous start dear.really looking forward to the story.plzz continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Thanks Zoah for pushing her!

i am so happy that u have started a new ff!

and besides its for all of us!

i am honored by your dedication!

i really can't believe this!

and i never knew that u write so well!

i am so damn shocked!

u never told me that u write!

and that too so exceptionally well!

and Zoah is here too!

she is chaddi buddy? that made me laugh! sorry!

I just loved the start!

u described it like awesome!

loved it........

and by the way, i am a little hurt.....where is my name in the pm list? don't talk to me now! u shud have had taken me as a default reader....

and i know that u would rock this ff!

do continue soon.....

and i am there if u need anything.....there for u!

love u loads,
Mahak

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

Heyyyy Zoe!!!!!!!!
Wowwww!!!!!
You sarted a new FF!!!!
Congratulationssssssssssssssssssss

Man!!! It's luvly...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I srsly didn't know you're such n awesum writer!!!!!
wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!
nd hey!!!! thanx a lottttt 4 d dedication!!!! 🤗
i luvvvvvd the starting!!!!!
it's wunnerful!!!!
plssssss do cont asap...
thanx 4 d pm......to zoah too...😆

Originally posted by: zoya_me

hellooooo.....firstly thanks for the dedication....i never thought i was worth any dedication...*gets emosanal* *sniff sniff*....anyways back to the start....lol...interesting beginning....doc sounds interesting....lol.....oh i know how it feels when you have to do somehting that you always wished for and it turns out everything you didn't want.....poor nupur....continue soon and yeah needless to say count me in your pm list

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

hey Zoe sachi mein

Im soooooo happy that u writing a FF n woh bhi on Mayur

and the title is amaznGG
n the starting is just faB!!!

so Nupur writing about pets

lol she does hate her job n itzz so funyy when she calls him buddha😆

n cool Zoah her best friend n then

later she calls her to the hospi

and they see a doctor

who Nupur thinks is cute

and his name Facinelii or Peter

wow thought it would be Mayank

just love this FF

plezzzz do cont soon

n dunn forget to add me in ur pm list

-Lina-

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

sis

a mod in training.. hehhe...😃

waise updt soon

bt if u have time kk no worries and abt my cofusion

it got solved i read the part over so yeahh dun wrry!!

sometimes i'm very slow at getting thingss😆😆

-sanam-