The Detective....MAYUR part2 upded

I sat at my broken wooden desk. This was not how it was supposed to be. The chair creaked as I tried to make my self comfortable in it. Fiddling with the pen in my hand I tapped it on the table impatiently. Looking over at the bored faces around the room it seemed like everyone was feeling the same as me. I observed how everyone was facing the clock, it was 4.30 pm and in 30 minutes our weekend would begin. Nearby I could hear the editor yelling at someone on the phone, this was not something unusual. Coming to think of it, never in my two years of working for the local newspaper for Manchester had I seen that miserable budda smile.

Initially when I finished my University and started this dreary job I had dreams. I wanted to be one of the top journalists. Write about interesting and meaningful things. Instead here I am writing about pets. I mean what can I write about pets? I'm feeling a little repetitive now that I've been here TWO YEARS! I have the worst job in the whole office! No wonder the person before me was here for only 3 months, at least she had the intelligence to leave.

Sighing I glanced back at my laptop... 4.45pm. Damn! Does the time have to go so slow when you just want it to fly by. At least I have a good weekend planned with my best friend Zoah. Zoah is what one would call my chaddi buddy. We have always been bestfriends and after our university finished we decided to move to a new town. We both have our own flats but we are always staying over at each others for girly nights in. I started to tap into my laptop again, well at least I can pretend to do work, I thought.

I could finally hear people moving, quickly glancing at the clock, 'finally its 5pm' I said aloud. Unfortunately for me my grumpy, good for nothing editor Marc was walking past. 'Said something Nupur'. Trust it to be me to be caught out. 'No Marc, I was just going through some files'. 'That's what I like to hear Nupur' he grumbled under his breath. Great now I'm gona have to leave later so he doesn't think I'm rushing out. I hate this budda.

Finally leaving my grubby office I walked out into the fresh air. It was a nice sunny day for February. Feeling my phone vibrate in my pocket, I smiled it was Zoah's phone. 'Heyy sweety, I've just finished cannot wait for the weekend! I...'

'Nupur I'm in A and E can you please come to the hospital?'.

So here I am sitting in A and E with my bestfriend on a Friday evening. Turned out Zoah tripped over and hurt her ankle. She sniffled as I passed her the hundredth tissue. 'Zoah its a minor, don't worry'. 'But what if its not Nupur, what if this is the start of my doom' said Zoah as she tucked a strand of her long black hair behind her ears.

'Miss Zoah Malik' said a friendly voice behind us.

'Well if doom looks like this honey then bring it on' I whispered to Zoah's ear.

No joke this Doctor was gorgeous! He shouldn't be in a hospital, this guy looked like he lost his way off a ramp. He looked young, mid twenties, brown hair, piercing green eyes and very muscular.

'Hi, I'm Dr Facinelli, but just call me Peter' he smiled as he brought his hand out to shake it with us.

'Oh so who will I be looking at today' he questioned.

'Me' said me and Zoah in unison

'Oh I mean Zoah'

dats all for now! plz leavee your comments if you would like me to continue! 😳

love lots

xxxx

p.s. Zoah is my very own mod for this lil ff!! hehehe she's checking each and every comment! be aware! heeheh thanxs Zoah!

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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

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*EDITED*

See I am the first to read and comment *dances around the forum*

Congrats on your first FF 🤗

Honestly I didn't know you can write so well.

I am damn shocked (for good of course 😆)

Thanks for the dedication hun 🤗

I am so glad that you posted this 😛. I know you're going to rock with this FF of yours.

COming to the update:

Wow I am Nupur's best friend

Love you for this hun 😃

It was amazing start hun!

You sure know how to portray each character

Love your writing style

Like I said to you earlier, you're a basket full of surprises 😉

Continue soon

Can't wait to read more!

Needless saying PM me 😛

Love you loads

All the best with your FF :)

x x

zoeeeeeeeee sis

me reserving first read then unres! kk

luv yaaaa

EDITEDD

first big hugs to zoah for forcing zoe to do this cuz she is an awsome writer!!next thanks for the dedication, i'm sooo honoured sis!!🤗 and i bet the rest would be too!!anyway love the name of the story so different and unique! now love the begining but i'm confusedthough once the story starts to flow i'll understand!😆,... I'm sure you'll rock this ff and oh yeah no probz first uni than this okay! so don;t worry we will always support you!!

aww zoah is nupurs chadddi bhuddy how cute na!!,,,but swear to god when you said chuddi buddi that made me laugh sorry kya karoon!

Okay now i hope you updt soon but don't worry if you can't okay!!

luv yaaaaaaaaa

-sanam-

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

hey zoe

it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the start

waiting to read more

zoah's lucky to be nups friend!!

update soon

add me to ur pm list

love pebbzzyy