MN FF - Pride and Prejudice. . (Ch 5 - Pg. 37) ❤️

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Originally posted by: arunabehere
hey jiah,
I loved the CS and all the 3 chapters

and this is one of my fav novel too

please add me to ur PM list

it just need to add my friend request which i send alreday

thanks in advance dear

Aruna

Oh hi Aruna dear.. 😊

Thanks sistah . . yeah, I have added you.

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Greetings. 🤗

How are you all? 😊

Well, before we proceed, I'd like to tell you that . . this FF is an adaptation of the novel itself but is deviated . . be it the storyline, the situations or even the characters at some point. However the theme and most importantly the ESSENCE is just the same. 😳

Lemme know how you like it. Please do hit the like tab if you appreciate my work and also comment on it if you have some spare time. I'd be waiting for the feedback. Happy reading!! 😊

PS: I admit it's boring! 😕 I'd make it interesting and with more MayUr the next time. 😆

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Chapter Four -

Well, today the Uday guy's gonna turn up at some five o'clock in the evening. Today morning, before I and Gunjan were leaving for college, Dad discussed the whole thing with us. He told us that his estate was to be taken over by Mr. Bhasin, Uday's father initially and would have the authority to chuck us all out after his death. However, he assured that now that, Mr. Bhasin himself is no more, he'd find a way out and mend things up with his son, Uday. We listened to him with much anticipation for I had already told both Gunjan and Esha that I could somehow make out from his email that he is a Lil, you know . . stupid and silly . . basically, lack of knowledge has turned him into a fool. 😆 And that is why . . we believe that whatever plan Dad has in mind would work no matter how logical or illogical it is because the lad hasn't got brains enough to make that out, duh! And Mama, well she had some DIFFERENT plans in mind. Yeah, you might have guessed . . she thinks if she gets married to him, one of her three daughters (yes, Gunjan incuded) . . he won't turn us out after Dad's death. He was to inherit our property and wealth, that was certain and this made my Mother's wish to get her daughters married to only and ONLY rich fellows got more firm. Ugh! She wants us to be well settled, that's nice but the way she does all this is stupid and highly immaterial which I can't stand for long. Fuf..

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College's over for today. I submitted my Physics project and Miss Jyotsana's expression gave me a hint that she liked it, aah! 😆 Well, this is strange you know . . all of a sudden, not much though a Lil . . I do have started behaving like the old Nupur did. I don't what the reason behind this is, however I kind of like this change. It's refreshing and fun's almost back in life.
AND THEN . . accha khaasa din gaya tha . . is manhus ki shakal dekhni zaruri thi !

Mayank: Hey Nupur!
Me: Hey!
Mayank: I, I am sorry.
Me: Not again. How many times do you have to say you're sorry?
Mayank: No, not for the college thing but for what that happened at your place yesterday. I'm really sorry.
Me: That's fine.

And saying so, I immediately left. Aah, why doesn't this fellow leave me ALONE? Every time I WANT to dislike him a Lil more, he does something which you know, shouts in itself that I am wrong enough in judging his nature. Whatever! This might but one of the VERY few good habits he has that in spite of being very very very vain, he apologizes right away for his mistake but at times, he doesn't even make out it was HIS mistake. I spent four days with him at Pune, remember . . when Gunjan fell ill . .
I was sitting in the corner of the drawing room, however I did closely observe Ms. Suhaani Shergill's involvement in Mayank. I feel pity at her, she gives him all the attention in the world, praises him SO MUCH even though he doesn't deserve that.. poor thing! And then what happened was . . I was going to the kitchen while he was making his way out .. we bumped into each other, I don't even remember what reason it was THEN that we were arguing about but it WAS his mistake and he dint realize that even and therefore apologizing was out of the question. And all he said was, "Yeah, absolutely Ms. Kashyap. I am a fellow of that kind and you a fine young woman who actually has a DISEASE of misunderstanding people." My foot! 😡 Anyway . . anyway . . I finally realized I had to meet with a practical joker today, so I head straight to my house. 😆

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Uday Bhasin stepped into the house. He was being really formal, he greeted us all and gave a rose each to me, Esha, Gunjan and my mother. I found him sweet, though irritating as you know EVERYTHING he saw in the room, may it be the furniture, the pictures, the chandelier or even the DOOR MAT, he praised it all and repeatedly told Mama how beautifully decorated her living room was. We were all right on our parts and we had RIGHTLY judged his nature! And you know the stupidest thing, he KEPT talking about was his land lady, Mrs. Sharma . . boy!! Yaiks, he had no body else in the world to talk about. 😕
He right now is in our guest room and we're all relieved we don't have to listen to his crap anymore. 😆

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Mama still firmly believes the "marriage with a rich guy = lovely life, her daughter's gonna have" logic and though she dislikes Uday and doesnt believe him to be marriage material anyway.
And Uday, well! WELL! WELL! Gunjan surely was his first choice but mom indirectly made it clear to him that Gunjan's practically going to be engaged soon, however, I simply hat and I'm gonna continue hating of course, the idea of getting married to such a man just because he's WEALTHY. NOOO!! Not gonna happen anyway. He's sweet, really is but neither of us can manage to live with a man like him.
I was in the library with Dad, we were both reading the same book, he was reading the first volume and I was reading the second and then struck the old thing to my mind when . . Suhaani took the volume two of the book HER soon to be boyfriend, fiance whatever, Mayank was reading the first volume. 😆 That was funny. I grinned and then Dad asked me what the thing was, "Nothing dad!" I said and left.
After like some fifteen minutes, I got a call from . . guess who? Mayank. Why does this guy bug me ALL the time? Anyway, I picked up the phone and the conversation was something like THIS -

Mayank: Hi, am I disturbing you?
Me: No Mayank, say? What is it?
Mayank: Actually I called up to ask you if you have any of your old notes, the ones you made last year? I need them.
Me: Well, yes. I do have them.
Mayank: Can I have them for a couple of days?
Me: Sure. I'd get em tomorrow at college, is that okay?
Mayank: Actually I have a test tomorrow and I need the notes NOW so that I study the whole night with both your notes and the book . . for, I dint get time to make notes all this while.
Me: Fine. Come home, in an hour?
Mayank: Sure, thanks a million. Bye.

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After precisely an hour, came Mayank. I ruminated as to how does he manage to be so very punctual? As each step he was taking towards me, I could feel my heart beat faster, faster than ever. He entered the main gate and I could see him clearly now. He had worn a black tee with a pair of jeans which I dint notice in college and I believed him to be handsomer than all the guys I have met so far, however I wished he was handsome in nature too. SIGH! The only thing that's so not possible in my eye . . Mayank Anand's being someone handsome both in appearance and nature. Climbing up Mt. Everest would be easier than changing him. Really. I kept silent while he kept looking and looking and looking a Lil more at me. All through my Pune stay as well . . I was the only object of his admiration. His gaze was and still is intense, it makes me feel the warmth and concern in it, I don't know why but STILL. Can't help it. "NUPUR!" he said a Lil curtly, breaking my deep thought. "Oh, sorry! Here are the notes." I passed em over to him and smiled. He smiled back and left in haste. Without saying ANYTHING. Not even bye!
I was used to his rude behavior now but THIS was weird, WEIRD in particular this thing was. A minute before, this boy was staring at me . . and when I actually am talking to him and MANAGING somehow to talk nicely . . he bloody well leaves without even saying thank you or bye to me. Ugh!!

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Today morning, I woke up a Lil late and missed college, when I went downstairs . . I saw Maa and Esha sitting on the Sofa waiting for the men to come and have food with em. After some time, Dad and Uday joined us. I could make out how bugged up Dad must have been feeling then. 😆

My mother had a couple of sisters and one brother, who was the youngest of the four children. He lives in Thane, near Mumbai only and we often visit him and his wife, my Aunt . . Vaibhavi whom we call Vaibhavi Mami. And her husband, Mohan Mama . . we call him M2. We are planning to go to his house today. Esha doesn't have office today and we missed college. While an hour ago, we were planning the visit (we women are STILL planing it 😆) Uday offered to escort us to Thane and pick up us as well in his OWN car. Dad and Mom readily accepted the offer for they and especially Dad had some time in the day coming his way to spend away from this pain in the neck. 😆

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Uday kept on talking about his new job in Pune, his land lady and err . . and kept on talking non sense for whole three hours. However, some bits of it were really funny and all three of us silently laughed and as for Esha, it was tooooo difficult for her to control her laughter.
Finally, we reached our destination. FINALLY! We sighed in relief. We saw Uday off and dint even ask him to come inside with us because we had already had enough of the Uday dose. 😆
We made way to the house only to see the door locked. 😕 I called up M2 and he told us it would take him and Vaibhavi Mami almost an hour to return home. We were just walking about the building . . and then the garden and we went out of the premises and under a tree, we stood . . talking . . just then we were joined by M2's pyaari beti, Dia. She to me is one spoiled, flirtatious and innocent girl who knows nothing about the real world and is always in search for guys to flirt with and attend parties with. Dia is dear to Mom, more than all three of us are. We heartily welcomed her and continued talking . . just then we saw two guys coming towards us. Dia introduced us to em . . the guy she paid a hell lot of attention to was Rannivijay who did have something in him to gain so much attention. He had an attractive and appealing nature.
Just then a car stopped by, two guys stepped out of it and guess who they were? SAMRAT AND MAYANK? Oh God, ye jo ladke hain . . har jagey kahan se tapak jaate hain! They told us they happened to see us standing here and thus, came to ask why dint we turn up to college and they actually were going to a friends place. It really was strange to know Mayank actually had not just friend but FRIENDS, news to me. 😆 Shocking. Well, then . .I was talking to Rannivijay. Mayank glanced at him and vice verse. One was white and the other was red. Huh? Why was that? The moment Mayank realized it was him, he rushed up to Samrat who was totally engrossed in talking to Gunjan and asked him to leave...

Love,
Kanky 😳

Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

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ah! read the update at last!
i guess Nupur's mind hates Mayank's presence whereas her heart loves it!😆
dun like Mayank's attitude in this.....
whenever he needs help from Nupur, he talks sweetly & then his sweetness vanishes into thin air after itz done!😕😆
hmm...intro of new characters....
poor Dia seems 2 have fallen 4 RV's charms & SaJan already seem a couple now!😊
& maybe Mayank is literally peecha karing Nupur!🤣
only thing left now is 4 Esha 2 find her guy.....wonder who that'll be....🤔
anyways, cont. soon.....

P.S:shayad maine last update par comment nahi kiya....i'm sorry candy! *holding ears*😳

Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago