MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30) - Page 13

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

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hey akansha

thank u sooo much for updating today

it really a pleasure reading this ss.. Its my pleasure to write for readers like you.

and her i was realy happy

coz arjun is finally accepting his dad

actually the sseem more like a family now

except for the fact mayurs bond is a bit weak. Don't worry it will be fine soon.

loved the part when arjun decided to play ddlj

though he hates it😆 Yeah arjun is arjun. He is my fav character in this SS.

loved the mayur scene😳😳

i just love rati, though shes a minor

shell play a major part in re uniting mayur

she just like a daughter(hopefully)

and en really loving it

thank u so much for the update..

and res ing it Nething for you sweetheart..

love u loads Love you too

pebbbzzyyy

Akansha

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Originally posted by: arunabehere

I am speechless

This was the awesome update ,it was too romantic.

Loved ArTi's plan and comforting mayank.

Throughout it was holding me and i was really eager to know at the end what happened.

I simply loved it.loved it to the core

Thanks a lot aakansha

please update sooon

Thanks a lot for PM

Thanx aruna.. I am glad you liked it.. Will update asap..

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Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was good update

Liked that Arjun strted liking Mayu n evn forgave him

Rati was damn sweet here

Loved her

Arjun actually won somwat

Hop Nups forgive her

Thanx afsha.. I am glad ou liked it..
Yeah arjun has started liking to be with mayank.. Blood runs thicker and love thickest..
Nupur will forgive mayank..Soon..
Thanx for commenting..

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Originally posted by: Tapoor

Nice update
loved it
pls do cont soon

Thanx tapoor.. will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
I loved it to the core!

Thanx nidz.. glad you liked it..

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Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Loved the update...
looks like Arjun is able to accept Mayank but Nupur is gonna take time... Rati was great...!!!!!

It was an awesome update...
Pls continue soon...

Thanx dear glad you liked it.. and nupur won't take much time.. Its a short story right?
Will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: mayurg2010

awesome part akansha.................
that was really awesome............
waiting for the next part..........

thanx dear.. happy to know you liked it..
will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: kulsumd

wow...awwessomeee update...

Loved each n every scene of d update.

Thanx 4 d pm n giving super long update...

continue soooon....

*kulsum*

Thanx dear.. pleased to know you liked it...Will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: myownarea

Lovely build up and an heart break in the end..but things are as real as they get
loved it Akansha :)

yeah, i hoped to make it as real as possible.. I am happy the story is turning out to be acceptable..
thanx di, for your comment..

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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Beautiful update AK

Loved it

x x

Hey Zoah.. I am glad you liked it....

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Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

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Crap.........

why did nupur had to do this?? why she had to gain her senses at the very right moment??? Chill Pari.. Chill...

and why the hell mayank feeling guilty.. its none of his fault... nupur was responsible,.,, and mayank saying sorry??? why why why??? Coz, Mayank was equally responsible and i agree nupur lost her senses, but mayank did too.. and he had decided he should give her time to forgive him.. So, he is feeling guilty..

not fair.... firstly why did mayank leave his family??? You will come to know soon...and scondly nupur is behaving so wierd........ first she only hugged him and not he...... and now mayank is feeling sorry...... sorry for wat?? dont knw..... He is Sorry for losing himself, sorry for the three years of pain he put her through..

oh god wen will things go in favor of mayank?? waiting for that.. It'll happen soon..Its a SS.. Rem??

but it was a great update. Thanx pari.. aur apna mood theek karlo.. all will be well soon..

love

pari

Love,

akansha

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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

the update was perfect.......

wow.......

simply wow.........

really passionate update yaar......

loved the arti bonding........

best was the mayur scene.......

hope nupur forgives mayank soon..........

you wrote really well.......

they scenes were very romantic........ 😳

continue soon.......

luv

mahima

Thanx mahima.. pleased to know you liked it....Will continue asap!!!

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Originally posted by: x.Heena.x

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I really reallyyyy feel sorry for mayank!!!! I feel more sorry for nupur I know nupur went through a lot but so did mayank and hes truly sorry!! I hope nupur accepts him soon...She will soon accept him soon. I really though she wud this time! And i hope that next time she makes the first move- and a bold one too!!! Well, about this, you should decide after the next part.. Nupur will forgive him, but she won't make the first move..

Loved the part tho! Esp rati mayanks bonding and nupurs mind heart convo!!! And nupur kissing mayank!!! Thanx dear..

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Originally posted by: maloo19

it was superb

Thanx maloo..

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Originally posted by: hazraluvroka

plz pm me..my inbox was full...now pm me

Hey dear i've pmed you again..

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Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva

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hey crazy sis...Hey!
howz u??? You know how i am right? But, if you ask, i am just peachy!!
i was so waiting for u to continue this ff..
i just loved the arjun and mayu in this part.....!!I love arjun and mayu everywhere..
so, arjun forgave him... thank god,, Aww, this is not fair.. thank me.. I wrote the part, not god!!

rati is sooooo sweeeet:) I know, i like her too..

i know i m damn waiting for mayur track to unfold further....! It will.. have patience..

do make it as soon as possible.. u know impatient readers ;) Yeah, dunno about impatient readers, but i know you.. So, will update asap..

update soooooooooooooooooon... Ohk!

love
deepika❤️

Love you too..

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Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Really amazing part Akansha...

I'm waiting for Nups to forgive Mayank now...

Love the DDLJ part and also the intense scene between Mayank and Nupur!

Continue soon!

Love

Mina

thanx mina..
Nups will forgive mayu soon..
Will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: ghtk1

oh my goodness!!its amazing.such a spectacular update dear,continue soon plzz.cant wait 4 the next part.😃

Thanx dear... will continue soon...

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Originally posted by: mayur.forever

lovely part akansha....i just luved ArTi's chemistry...i mean,i just luved their friendship....their plans of getting mayur closer was super cute....n dat movie watching plan gets a hi-five from my side😆...luved it....

thanx dear.. glad to know you liked it... I'll convey your hi-fi to rati and arjun!!!

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Originally posted by: achoose

nice updte dear,,,,do continue soon dear........

Thanx dear...will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: Luv.MayUrArTi

OMG !!!
SPEECHLESS AGAIN!!
SO PASSIONATE
SO ROMANTIC
SO SAD AT THE END
BUT IT WAS SO MARVELOUS
I LOVED IT!!!

Thanx sonia.. i am pleased to know you liked it..

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Originally posted by: shaaranya

wow outstanding part!!! i've no words 2 describe it!!!

do update soon

Thanx sharanya.. will update soon...

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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

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u must look at me when i sleep on sundays! my ma keeps on bugging me to wake up......but do i? NO! infact i keep on hugging the pillow and turns from one side to another......but when she gives me the ultimatum, i need to get up! but usually she lets me sleep as much as i like on sundays! Ye toh ghar ghar ki kahani hai.. Matlab meri bhi.. But, a little correction here.. This is my everyday story..

wow! so rati did that! i am so obsessed with arjun bijlani that i love the names u used......rati is so well mannered.......rati managed to talk to him....but the moments u described were awesome.....i knew what he must have felt! Thanx mahak.. i just hoped that it would come out well.. i am happy it did...

rati as talkative? that's nice....i iwsh to see arjun bringing mayur together.....that statement one was cute! i loved that line man! rofling! mayank's tone is so detectable na? Yeah i can imagine mayank everywhere..i know that! even i can see that movie billions of time! i loved that! oh wow! mayank know arjun too well! aakhir beta kiska hai?

even i want to thank SRK for getting beaten up by the goons! wow! i so loved when u described how much nupur missed him.....i really loved the heart-mind convo......i usually hve it when i need to take decisions....and i loved the hug they shared......gosh! i am damn red now! I was too when i wrote it..

it was all soooooooooooooooooo romantic! i am so damn red! it was beautifully described....they were so lost when she stopped him! i knew why she did that! its not easy to forget na! Thanx mahak.. please pari ko bhi samjhana aur use shant karna.. I guess she is a little upset with me..

do update soon.... Will do so..

loved this update completely! Thanx again!!

love, Loads of love to you too..

Mahak

Akansha

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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyyyy akansha
Read the last three parts
Glad that arjun forgave him
Mayur scene was good
Plzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm

Thanx dear.. glad you liked it.. will continue soon..

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Originally posted by: pagli91

fabulous update... really nice to see Arjun is happy having his dad around... and Rati is too cute, she will play a great part in getting Mayur back together.. loved it, update soon. :)

Thanx dear.. pleased to know you liked it... Will upd8 soon!!

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guys, thanx a lot for your comments.....
Love,
Akansha

hey akki awesome update...........
u know what?
i got tears in my eyes when i read the part.......
actually i read it in morning itself but updating it now...........
but the update was awesome and the reason for which they separated was beautifully wriiten
you are a wonderful writer..........
if u see from mayu's pov he is correct but leaving his family for 3 years without any intimation is too bad and you have wonderfully described their pain in those three years.................
superb
fantastic

woow update vz amazzinggg.....

It vz full of flashbck n vz toooo emotional.....

So finally we got 2 knw y mayank leaved nupur 3 years bck....i dont lykd mayank in d flashbck he is so greedy in d flashbck....he hangs up d call widout hearin d news abt her mother death....

Itz good dat nupur didnt attended his calls n dint replied 2 his mails...

So samrat helpd nupur to move on in d life,..

Wel thanx 4 d pm n continue soon.

I must say you are a awesome writer ,you put everything so nicely
i did not even think that it was not planned reason
Trust me i started hating mayank but was relaxed when he apologized for we each time otherwise i was really angry.

It was holding my breath to know the reason what has happened and why did he leave ,and now the resaon is in front.

Akansha ,Love changes life but mayank how could he think of leaving his love his life and moving.Nupur was totally shattered because of his act.

But i just wanna see them together ,nothing else

Please Cont soon and i am really eager to know What nupur will decide (but really want a happy ending plzzzzzzzz)

hey akansha...........

u finnalyy updated

first of all thank u soo much for updating this so quickly and im really glad u did ths. 2 nd ly well thank u soo sooo much for this long part it was really worth the wait so here finally the whole past was revealed tellin g us about their whoke life. aku i must tell u uhave potrayed this really very nicely by putting it dwn in such a perfect way.

why were u nervous its just a perfect part truely fantastic and amazing

well do update soon

waiting to know now what happens

lov pebbzzyy

hey akansha...

Akansha
its an amazing update
really good
i feel so sad for nups
mujhe mayank per bohot gussa araha tha
he deserve the punishment
pls do cont soon

i just luved thiz part i was almost crying reading it feeling really bad for nupur ....waiting for ur next part plz update soon