MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

OMG AK

what was that?

You got me all teary hun!

it was so painful update yaar

I could literally feel MayUr's pain!

Beautifully written dear

Absolute loved it

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Akansha

Ok, this update cleared a lotta doubts in my mind abt their past./

I liked the FB immensely and felt it was quite REAL ..

Strangely I thought both Mayank and Nupur were wrong at some point ...it was not one sided like I thought it was...ofcourse both had their reasons but those reasons r not enuf to give up on lov

ok, I m not going on abt this, loved it :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

i dunno what to say akansha.4 the timebeing i left so speechless that i decided to comment later.all i can say that i could visualize nupur and her pains through my eyes...4 a moment i brought myself in her shoes and tried to feel the condition....!!its intolerable....u overpowered my emotion so sucessfully through this update.i m spellbound dear.xeceptionally well written would also be an understatement....hats off to u.😊update soon.

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sruthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

well there is no need for u to be nervous....i mean seriously,it was really very natural..d flashbacks were just so well written..mayank wanting a luxurious life no matter wat comes in his way,described his character completely.....dat part was seriously emotional....great work akansha....one cud not expect more......luved it...

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sharanya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

fantabulous part!!!

seriously i have never read a better part dan dis!!

u must continue fast

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: ak12

Divya di,
I am glad you felt that it was both mayank and nupur's fault. I was hoping you would feel this way. I tried to make this SS as real as possible. and in reality.. My 17 years of experience(i know its not much, but still!) tells me that its never only one person's mistake... Every coin has two sides...
And i didn't want mayank to sound very unacceptable... you see...

Di, i really really want to know where you felt that nupur was wrong. Cause this would help me in knowing if my and your views match and if i have been able to write what i wanted to write...
Please please do tell me in detail where you felt nupur was wrong..
Once, again i am glad you pointed that out. Coz when i wrote the part, i never wanted this to be completely mayank's mistake...

Nevertheless, I agree with you that it was not enough to give up on love. but they never gave up on love.. Love never diminished. They were just not together cause of bigger mistakes made by mayank and comparitively smaller mistakes made by nupur..

I also feel that Nupur and Arjun have every right to be angry with mayank. Coz, even if nupur made some mistakes, Idealism is what we never find in real life...

Chalo enough of what i feel..
Please di, let me know what you feel and oblige me..

Love,
Akansha

Akansha :) U are far more mature than an avg 17 yr old I guess, cos ur writing sometimes defies ur age, though sometimes, it also shows its, both of which is good :)

coming to ur question, Mayank was wrong is the obvious conclusion and there are no 2 ways about it, but again, he had a background that may have coaxed him into such a decision..

though not a gr8 solution, it could have been handled with more maturity by Nupur who knew that

he grew up craving for things that he lacked as a young lad.. Now this may be very difficult in real life as well. Another point was he was going for work for 3 years,. she couldve let him have those 3 years, staying away may be different but people do make compromises in marriage for a better life, if Mayank did want to make more money then she could've supported the 3 yr shift, here the issue cud've been solved. Again ,..in fights and arguments people say unacceptable things especially to people they love the most.. That should never be considered a final word in any relationship and things must be worked out not based on fights of that nature.

I think if he really wanted to leave her he would ve not married her in the first place.

Where Nupur was right ofcourse is the obvious bits, him leaving her, inspite of her trying he dint give in. He spoke irrationally in anger, her pleadings had no work. He got to focussed on the career and forgot abt the 2 most percious people in his life.. she was more rational and practical and yes she does have a right to cut him off considering what he did.,

Sorry that was a long one :) Just my bits on what I think is the 2 sides of a coin!!