Arrange Marriage #2 [Mayur] : NTL : Page 147 - Page 96

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part love it

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Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

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Yaar... first of all im super super sowwy... dil se sowwy for the late comment 😕

I have 300 pmz and i jus didnt know where to start from....😆

nyways... you kno how much i love this ff... its so sweet... innocent and real....

the last three updates have been fantastic 👏

I love the slow and gradual feelings mayur are feeling for each other

the relationship between uday and nupur... i love that...

sajan being the annoying and irritating brother/sister to mayur is really funny... proper teasing them...

and the engagement card was cuteee..... really nicee and i loved the decription of her room... the diary part... hmmn someones being nosy... he should not have done that but.. still it was nice...

your doing a awesomeee job... im really really looking forward to the nxt update...

love lots

xxxx

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zoe yaar....i thought that u forgot to read this ff.....

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Originally posted by: rads14

awesome part..!!
really superb..!!
amazing..
waiting eagerly for next part..
cont soon

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Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

superb update dear!

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Originally posted by: yash.dilse

Ohhh Mahak.........

very cute update yaar..........u know I was waiting fr ur update........it ws vry sweet
loved Nupur's innocent act wid her diary
loved Mayank's answer to Uday bhaiya........vry cute
thnks fr d update
me tooo waiting fr engagement day 😊

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Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

heyyyy
just loved it
mayur were soo adorable
i really want to read the engagement
update quickly
cont soon

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Engagement will be soon.....

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Originally posted by: princess_52

nice

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Originally posted by: dua_adil

wow wow wow loved the name chocolate effects.....update was just too good.....nupur and uday are so adorable.....mayank is very naughty he read her diary.....waiting eagerly for their engagement......plz do update soon and plz pm me when ever u update next

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Mayank can be naughty too....

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Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

lovely update.cant wait 4 the next part...plzzz continue soon..

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Originally posted by: -sam-

My dear Mahaku,

First of all sorry for being late (Reason you know)...

I love this ff of yours among all others because of its simplicity....
I love simple things. Beauty lies in simple things....
And you have portrayed it so nicely....
Arrange marriage- is something in which I totally believe.
Its really amazing

The card you have made is really beatiful....
Mayank's feelings- Nupur's feelings, the way you have portrayed is really perfect!
Keep it up!
and do continue soon....

Loads of love
samidha....

Thanks a lot yaar.....

Sam its ohk.....i can understand u being late....

Thanks yaar.....i am glad that u love its simplicity....

Yup..same here......i too love simple things.....

I too believe in arrange marriage....

Card is made by daksha....i only chose the card...simple na?

Thanks yaar.......glad that i could portray their feelings.....

I will be continuing soon.....

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