MayUr OS Gallery: OS 19 - Upd Pg. 114 (5/7/2011) - Page 3

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi

Wonderful stories! Please PM me when u updatee

thanx.. glad you liked it

wow....... mayur are so cute......

You are a fabulous writer. I have thoroughly enjoyed every OS of yours.

The fourth one. WOW. so well written. and the point of the OS was beautiful and so true and so realistic. Im really lost for words to describe it. its almost a lesson....but a sweet one. Sometimes god gives us more than we dream for.

my fav line was your ending

The rose petals of her dream would dry in a day or two, the candles of her dream would melt sooner or later, the sea would wash out their names etched in sand on a beach of her dream, but Mayank's love, Mayank's love would adorn her forever. Mayank's love is, was and will be her every dream come true."

These lines - they cant be more true. Beautifully written!
Please write loadssssssssssssssssssss more OS. I love them. But make sure they are happy ones...

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow....... mayur are so cute......

nupur's dreams didn't come true......

but if reality is so beautiful and romantic.........

no one would like their dreams to spoil it.......

thanx a ton buddy..

And nupur's dream did come true.. not the in the way she had thought they would, but they did come true.. she got a guy who loved her loads and that was her ultimate dream.

once again, thanx a ton for commenting....

Originally posted by: x.Heena.x

You are a fabulous writer. I have thoroughly enjoyed every OS of yours.

The fourth one. WOW. so well written. and the point of the OS was beautiful and so true and so realistic. Im really lost for words to describe it. its almost a lesson....but a sweet one. Sometimes god gives us more than we dream for.

my fav line was your ending

The rose petals of her dream would dry in a day or two, the candles of her dream would melt sooner or later, the sea would wash out their names etched in sand on a beach of her dream, but Mayank's love, Mayank's love would adorn her forever. Mayank's love is, was and will be her every dream come true."

These lines - they cant be more true. Beautifully written!
Please write loadssssssssssssssssssss more OS. I love them. But make sure they are happy ones...

Thanx a ton dear..
i am glad you liked it...

i so loved ur os!

Dream come true was brilliant!

i totally adore it!

LOVED IT like mad!

its gorgeous and brilliant........

i sooooooooooooo loved it!

this was the best oneshot so far!

awesome!

love,
Mahak

Hey Dear

awwwwwspme OS ...

loved their journey from love to marriage......

It was beautifully written ....

Amazing I loved it to bits........

the last part was just terrific.....mind blowing.....

do write more.......

luv
Nidzy~

hey u write very well........... it was just amazing.........
especially the last four lines were just amazing...................


do write more...............

Fabulous OS Akansha....

It was really fab