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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soooooooo nice part i hope soon samrat will come to gunjan

thanx am glad u liked it
soon we will see reeentry of samrat
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy tanzeelll............😊😊
really nice part...........😳😳
dis is d first time i m reading ur ff.............😉😉
and it was too good..........😛😛
do cont. soon..........😃😃
thnx for d pm............😉😉
loads of love ............😊
surbhi..........😳
tc.........🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhi_005

heyy tanzeelll............😊😊

really nice part...........😳😳
dis is d first time i m reading ur ff.............😉😉
and it was too good..........😛😛
do cont. soon..........😃😃
thnx for d pm............😉😉
loads of love ............😊
surbhi..........😳
tc.........🤗

hey surbhi
thanx am glad u liked it
will cont soon
and pm u
love tanzeel🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

wonderfull update dear

thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 11 a
hi everyone thanx alot for ur lovely comments here comes part 11 hope u enjoy it and dont forget to leave ur comments so i know wat u thought of it 😊
.............. 2 years Later ..............................................................
we see a city with people walking on the streets driving on the roads talking working lost in their own world.....................Yeh dilli hai mere yaar Bas ishq mohabbat pyaar, Bada kas ke gale lagata hai, Dhadkan ki dhoom sunata hai, Iske baaye taraf bhi dil hai, Iske daaye taraf bhi dil hai
Yeh sehar nahi mehfil hai, Yeh sehar nahi mehfil hai ,Yeh dilli hai mere yaar
Bas ishq mohabbat pyaar.........................................
yes it is delhi dilwalo ka dilhi or ishi sher mein hamme aik ghar dikh ta hai or samne bored pei likha wa hota hai Mr. and Mrs Sharma its a big beutiful house samne garden hai usme phool hai peeche swiming pool hai with pool side chairs ghar ke andar tasveere hi tasveere hoti hai zyada tar mayur ki kuch gang ki or bhut sahrhi tasveere hotie hai ek chothe se cute se boy ki with mayur and by himself...........................
house ki decoretion style pora filmy yet serious look deta hai ghar ko then we see a girl wearing red saree watching tv..........
ru ru ruru ru ru ruru
ru ru ruru ru ru rurru
hum yaha se kaha jayegeee
teri bahooo main mar jayegeee
n: by god kya sceen wah mere raj wah leja apni simran ko leja
then we see the girls face it is not other then nupur bhushan sharma watching her all time favorite movie ddlj phir peeche se do awwaze ati hai
1: phir se shru hogayi iski nautanki
2: heheeeeeeeeeeeee
1: ab beta tum ku has rahe ho tumhari ma na poori ki poori filmy heroine hai mene isse packing karne ko kaha tha ye yaha behthi ddlj dekh rahi hai
then we see their faces #1 is non other then mayank sharma hes standing there with a annoyed expressions on his face or uske barabar main is a cute little boy smiling at his mom and dad (guys that is mayurs son he is 1 year old oh and his name is sharukh sharukh sharma😆)
m: nupur nupur tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
n: uff ho mayank dikh nahi raha ddlj dekh rahi ho or kya (she says picking up sharukh in her arms)
m: nupur packing kon karre ga jana nahi hai kya
n: arre ha mayank mei tu bhol hi gayi packing ke barre main abhi karti ho
m; nupur tumharhi usse bat hoi hai ha
n; haan mayank kal hi hoi thi mayank humhe kuch karna hoga main apni bhen ka yeh hal nahi dekh sakti
m; par nupur hum kar bhi kya sakte samrat ka koi ata pata nahi
n; hmmm tum sahi keh rahe ho phir bhi (she becomes sad)
mayank walks up to her dekho nuper main puri koshis karaha ho hum sab kar rahe hai ab bas hum or kar bhi kya sakte hai abhi tum pakink khatam karlo because hamme ajj sham ki hi flight pakarni hai phir socho tum gunjan 2 sal bat millo gi
n; wakai mayank 2 sal ho gaye hai mujhe un sab ki bhut yad ati hai ab i just cant wait
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ab humhe ek paharhi ilaka dikhta hai with snow in few places and people are walking sweaters and hats to protect them selves from the cold lekin waha ki beuty dekhneh layak koti hai wat a view or trees or mountains just to beutiful or isse sab ke beech hamme ek pyara sa ghar nazar ata hai on top of a hill or us ghar ke andar ek larka apne bags pack kar raha hota hai with a cute smile on his face
boy: ma meri green walli t-shirt kaha hai
m: beta abhi layi
she bbrings it and gives it to him yele beta
boy: ma ap shur hai na main ap ko yaha chur ke ja sakta hu
m; ha beta meri tabyet ab bhut behtar hai or wese bhi abhi tumhe apni dost ke pas jana chaiye usko tum sabki zurwat hai
now the boy turns around and we see his face it is non other then benji and yes the place hes in is shimla
b; ha ma abhi mera jana bhut zarori hai pata nahi kya hoga waha woh sab kese hoge 2 sal hogaye un sab dekhe bhut yad sabki
m; main jante ho beta ke tu apne dosto ke bhut kareeb hai bas meri waja seh aya wah hai par dont worry sab theek ho jayga acha teri flight kab ki hai
b; ajj sham 5 baje ki ma
m; phir tu tumhe nikalna chaiye 4 toh baj gaya hai
b; ha bas jar aha hu ma and he starts to leaves when his mom calls out again
m; acha sunno wapsi mai meri honhe walli bahu koh bhi lekar ana is dafa wahi chur ke mat ana samje tum( she ment dia she knew about her)
benji just gave her a shy smile and said ma tum bhi na and walks away
his mom stands there smiling at him............................
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in the crowded city of mumbai..............................
bhear hi bhear sari taraf koi kaha jar raha hai pata hi nahi chalta sab apne apne kam mei laggei weh hai aisa lag ta hai jese ke log nahi cheetiyan hai yes this is mumbai celebrities or filmstars ka ada public ka favorite mumbai
isi mumbai shehar ke beecho beech ek barri bulding nazar ati it has atlest kuch 60 floars.. from the outside it looks marvelous outsanding the whole building is made out of glass windows i mean no wall sceen anywhear windows hi windows on the top of the building i big bold printing it has the name of the company wriiten on it or andar bhut sare lof focued apne apne kam main lagge wei hotai hai..............................
now we see a guy walking in the building black, black suit red tie as he enters everyone goes good mornig sir and he just says mornnig with no expressions on his face wat so ever yet all the girls still droo over him
girl 1; sir kitne handsome hai na
girl 2; ha yar but pata nahi ku hamesha depress rehtei ha
girl 3; tumhe pata yeh hamesha sei ase nahi the main in ke sat collage jati thi tul log onhe waha dekhtei toh behosh hojjati he was the star of our collage
girl 1; really
girl 3; ha actully mujhe job ki sakt zurwat thi ham sath sath parhe the same collage mein tu inho ne meri help kardi or apni pa ki job dede but iski life ke hadse ne iske life badal dhi yar i feel so bad for him he was in love..............
the guy hers the girls convo and goes into deep thought and keep walking expresion less and takes the elevator to the 60 floor where his cabin was
inside the cabin his PA enters while he was sitting on his chair facing the other way readin some files
pa; good morning sir
guy; morning annie (he says without turning around)
a: sir ap ki jis company ki boss ke sat ajj meeting thi woh parso ho gi actully woh unke boss busy hai but unki PA ayi hai keh thi hai ap se kuch important kam hai main unhe andar bhej dou?
guy: ya sure
now the other girl enters the room with annie
girl: morning sir
now the guy turns around and we see his face it is non other then SAMRAT SHERGILL!! but something is different about him his face no longer has that januable smile his choclate brown eyes no longer have that sparkle in them, he wears glasses and his hair is cut short he no longer is that samrat shergill who he use to be
s; morning
girl; sir actully mera sir ki shadhi chal rahi hai unke ghar main so he is busy and he is really sorry that he couldnt make it and he will not be able to come to mumbai for another month
s; wat😲 dekhe yeh meeting bhut zarori hai agar woh mumbai nahi a sakte then take me to him (he said with a harshness in his voice it no longer had that sweet charm in it)
girl; ok sir im going to attend the wedding also ap mere sat chal sakte hai if u wish
s: ok kab jana hai
girl: kal
s: annie meri sari meeting cancil kar do kal ki yeh meeting bhut important hai or yeh deal hamari company ke liye bhut important
a; ok sir main kardo gi dont worry
girl; ok then sir kal main yahi millo gi then we will go
s; ok
the girl turns to leave and then turns around once again and says sir ap se ek bat poucho
s; poucho
girl; yeh ap ki company ka nam is so swwet SAJAN COPPERATION but why is it call that are u a strong beliver in love
samrats face went blank and the room went quiet
girl; im sorry sir if u dont wana tell i just thought it was cool and thought i ask srry.......
s; its ok...........iska nam sajan copperation ikuke do log hai jab unke nam jur tei hai tu banta hai sajan
girl; wow really sir they must be two lucky people i bet unki love story will be forever kuke unkoe nam jur ke tu sajan ban ta hai na acha ab main chalti ho saying that she leaves
now annie speeks up: samrat sir yeh dou nam samrat+gunjan hai na mmujhe aj tak nahi pata chala ke kya hua ab dono ke beeck but u still love her alot and it is vissible in ur eyes saying that annie leaves
samrat is left alone in the cabin with his thoughts
samrats pov:
kash asa hota kei hammari love story forever hotie par chashmish toh ab kisse or ki ho chukki hai iski shadhi ko toh ab takreeban 2 sal ho gaye hai pata nahi kasi hogi woh ab toh shayad woh ma bhi ban chukki ho and then he teryed imagening his chasmish being with someone else and tears started coming out of his i really miss u chasmish i really love u but i guess kismat neh hamara sat nahi diya shayad god bhi hamme alag karna chata tha isi liye tum meri nahi kisse or ki hogayi
but i hope tum kush ho apne husband ke sat or tumharhe pas toh tumharhi family bhi hai na nupur mayank dia uday bauji bui sab hogey benji bhi hoga pata nahi woh sab log kese ho gain kya benji nain dia ko apne dil ki bat batai ho gei mayank or nupur bhut kush hogei apne married life main or pata nahi uday ko koi larki mille bhi ya nahi bas ek bar ek bar pata chal jaye tum kaha ho kesi ho bas ek bar main tumhe dekh na chata ho chashmish dekhna chata hou ke tum apni zindigi main kush ho ap tak toh shayad tum ne mujhe bhula bhi diya ho yah phir sochti ho ke ek waqt mei bhi ek samrat ko janti thi or kitni pagle thi main jo usse pyar karti thi 2 sal hogaye hai chashmish 2 sal or yeh 2 sal har pal mene tumharhe yad main kate hai bas ek bar main tumhe kush dekh lo phir tu maut bi ajaye mujhe koi fark nahi parre ga
thinking thie he leaves the building towards home as he leaves behind him we see his office the huge 60 floor building standing there and on top the company name was there sajan copperation he turns around looks at it once and leaves to go home.................................
ok guys bakki ki introse of dia gunjan and uday will be iin next part samrat is back i hope i did justice to his reentry and i hope i didnt make any big mistake pleesse for give me if i did
ab kya sajan mille gei
ya phir ho jaye gi gunjan ki shadhi
samrat ko lagta hai shes already married
kya ho ga jab ab 2 sal bat sara ka sara gang phir ek jaga ikhata ho jaye ga to find out keep on reading yadaii mjht
luv tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW Tanu WOW I couldn't stop reading ur ff, it was so perfectional. Very well done yaar, loved the way u brought everyone in(all the entries). Cant wait to read the other ff of yours :) 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Rocks

WOW Tanu WOW I couldn't stop reading ur ff, it was so perfectional. Very well done yaar, loved the way u brought everyone in(all the entries). Cant wait to read the other ff of yours :) 👏

thanx ayeshhoo
im glad u liked it so much
or hahaha meri dusri ff ko tu pata nahi main kab update karo gi
luv tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part i just like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
I havent read the previous parts!
Ok let me read it first 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awsm yaar too gud.superb.plz plz plz plz jldi cnt kro.i cant w8 for d nxt part.
luv u
vritika

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