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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 10

guys i know mei har dafa kehti ho ke jaldi update karo gi phir nahi karti so really really sorry next time pakka jaldi karne ki koshish karo gi
well here comes part 10 i want to finish this ff of quick because i want to start others but i know i cant handle them all at once so here this will be long update and plese tell me wat u thought of it as ur views mean alot to me😳
Days past by with no news of samrat subha hothi hai sham hothi hai or phir se rat aja thi hai time is flying bye and now there is only 2 more days left before they graduate from excell collage and go in their seperate ways
woh hasti kehlthe gang of excell is not the same anymore they are all trying their best to find samrat to fix everything but they are unable to do anything or gunjan toh totthi hi challi ja rahi hai inhi dinno ki tara ek or din shrhu hootta in logo ka...........................
all sitting in canteen excell collage
sab kamhoshie se bethe hai bus apne kayalho mei kohe wei hai suddenly nupurs cell started to ring..........
n; ek minute
n; hello
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n; kya
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n;ye ab kya ke rahi hai (shock)
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n; really (now getting exited)
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n; do sal
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n; ok ok bye
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sab nupur ko dekh rahe hotei hai wondering who caleed
n; tum sab log belive ni karo gei ke abhi kya hoa
m; nupur tum batao tho
n; gunjan gunjan tujhe god ne ek or muka dia hai yeh sign hai kei woh bhi nahi chata ke tum dono alag ho jao
g; di yeh ab kya keh rahi ho
d; ha nupur wat are u talking about
n; dia abhi abhi bui ka phone aya tha unhoneh kaha ke kuch important buissness deal ke sil siley mei niel america ja raha hai or ab gunjan or uski shadhi 2 sal bat hogi infect woh ajj hi ja raha hai isliye engagement bhi nahi ho payi gi..............yeh mukka dia god nei hummhe im sure ap toh humhe samrat mil hi jaye ga
as soon as they heared that sab ke cherhoo pei ek kushi aja thi hai ek umeed....... sab thiek honhe ki umeed aja thi hai un ke cherhe happiness se glow kar rahe hhotei hai or un sab se zyada kushie gunjan ke cherei pei hotei hai or woh ajj sab ko nazar arahi hai us ki umeed uski kushie or uska pyar...............
gunjan pov; kya god ne wakai hammhe ek or mukka dia hai ............samrat tum nei kaha tha ke agar hammarie kismat mei hoa toh hum dubara mille gei or ab dekho na samrat god bhi hammarhi side pei hai ab koi kismat hammarhi zindigi decide nahi karre gi im sure mei tumhe in 2 sallo mei dhund nikallo gi or phir mei tumhe apne sei dur kabhi nahi jane dougi kabhi nahi saying this uski akkhon mei asso bar attei hai par ye dard ke nahi kushie ke or ek nayi umeed ke asso hotei hai
nupur uske asoon dekhthi hai
n; gunjan toh ro rahi ha
g; ha di mei ro rahi ho par ye dard ke nahi kushie ke asoon hai
b; par tumhe ye bhi allowed nahi hai kya hai na mere bhai samrat ko tumharhe akhoon mei asoon birkul passand nahi hai so unhe jaldi sei poch lo warna woh naraz hojayga
hearing this everyone smiles a little and gunjan wipes of her tears just for samrat sake...........
u; ab guys why dont we celebrate this good news
m; pehlih bar tune ek acha idea dia hai wese bhi bas 2 days mei we will graduate gunjan ke shadhi ka toh hal mil gaya hai but lets not forget mei or nupur dilhi benji shimla or toh england ja raha hai is liye ek outing hojaye wat say
d; not bad idea mayank par outing nahi hum yahi excell mei sat bitai pallo ke sat celebrate kar tei hai
or wase bhi abhi humhe excell ko decorate bhi kar na hia for our alvida
n; ha dia sahi kaha ku na hum sab mil ke decorate abhi karre ha drama department mei bhut kuch hoga hum isko bollywood style mei decorate kartei hai by god maza aye ga
eveyone just smies at her and say alright nupur is dafa bollywood hi sahi
d; is dafa ki theme bollywood
n; yes mayank tum raj banna or mei simran thiek hai
m; nupur plese kuch or kar tei hai na
n; nahi mujhe ye hi kar na hai hum ddlj ke raj or simren banne gei
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Its a new day in excell or charo taraf exicetment hi excitment hai excell is decorated in totall bollywood style everything looks so filmy or ku nahi lage gi hammari nupur bhushan sharma incharge thi
collage students sei barha wa hota or sab bollywood ka koi cherecter hotei hai kahi hummhei madhurhi kei adai dik rahi hotie hai toh kahi hammei salman khan nazar arahie hotei hai hero sei leki villan tak sab hotei hai waha or phir focus on entrence
and u see hummarei ddlj ki simran ki tara dress ki whi nupur bhushan or raj ki tara sar pei topie hat mei tuntunna liye mayank sharma they enter together hand in hand or background mei the mjht music can be heared
then entered uday he was dressed as amir khan in gajnii and all over his body it said u-d-a-y uday girls mujhe call kar sakti hai on this number 123 456 7983😆 or background mei uski special dodo music baj rahi hotie hai
then enterd dia and benji nt together but sepretly at the same time though benji was dressed as sahaid in jab we met or dia was dressed as kareena from jab we met (they were wearing the outfits from ye ishq hai dia was wearing the black and red outfit from it) they look at each other and smile they didnt plan on this but some how they ended up being a couple anyways benji extended his hand forward and dia excepted it and they walk in further with mjht tunes in the background
and then finally enterd our gunjan she was wearing rani mukarji white fairy outfit from thoda pyar thoda majic (the one she had in the bulbula song sequense) she was definatlly looking like a fairy and the mjht tunes played in the background as she enterd and joined the rest of them in the party
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party full blast thi or next day hoyi on ki graduation sab ko pata tha that this is it they will go to their destinations now sham ko around same time thi un sab ki flights mayur to delhi benji to shimla and uday to london leaving dia and gunjan in mumbai
in mumbai airport
m;so i guess this is it flights ka time ho raha hai
u; yup
un sab ki akhoon mei asoon the or gunur huged
g; di apna khayal rakh na or jiju ka bhi or humse milne zaror ana
n; hmm or toh bhi apna khayal rak nha or chinta mat kar hum alag hokar shayad zyada fayda hai is tara hum samrat ko bhut sari jagao pei dundhe gei or bygod jab woh mille ga na mei usse bhut maro gi or tu mujhe rok nei ki koshish mat karna samji toh
g; ok di
then they all hug and say their byes now bania were standing face to face everyoe made excuses and left them alon to talk
b; ummmmm take care...........
d; u to (said with teary eyes) or milne toh ao gei na (she said with hopes)
b; abhi toh mom ke tabyet thiek nahi hai par jab bhi mumbai ao ga toh milne zaror ao ga......tum apne is diva pan ko plese thorha kam karle na or mujhe bhul mat jana (he said in teasing tone)
d; benji!! plesee.....
b; bye
d;bye
they both hugged and cried with their silent tears and then everyone came back they wiped of their tears and bid godbye and all turn in oppisist directions mayur towards their gate benji towards his uday towards his and dia and gunjan towards the exit they all walked in silent looking back at each other and the mile jab hum tum tune played in the background as they all walked away with yadaii in their hearts...........
nagmie hai shikwei hai
kisse hai battei hai
batteii bhol jati hai
yadain yad ati hai................
ok guys i wanted to continue but it was becoming long so i will update next part very soon but later i hope u liked it sryy for any mistakes do share ur thoughts
luv tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear realy nice part.do cnt wid nxt asap.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.....im sooo happy that neil is gone for 2 years ab voh gunjan se shaadi itni jaaldi nahi kar sakta......ab hopefull samrat bhi mil jaye..aur sara gang ek saat fir ho gaye....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

Hey dear realy nice part.do cnt wid nxt asap.
luv u
vritika

thanx vritika
am glad u liked it
will cont asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety88

awesome update.....im sooo happy that neil is gone for 2 years ab voh gunjan se shaadi itni jaaldi nahi kar sakta......ab hopefull samrat bhi mil jaye..aur sara gang ek saat fir ho gaye....cont soon

hey am glad u liked it
well ab sam ki entry dhur nahi hai
btw wats ur name
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Posted: 14 years ago

reserved i'm gonna need to read the story from beginning ...then i can comment. so until then my comments are reserved.

thank you

Sajjal

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Posted: 14 years ago
M so glad!
That Neil went for 2 years!:D
cont soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

reserved i'm gonna need to read the story from beginning ...then i can comment. so until then my comments are reserved.

thank you

Sajjal

thats ok will wait for ur comments
i hope u enjoy reading it
luv tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey tanzeel awesomeeeeeee updt loved it thank god that neil wnt to america now they can easily find samrat and that bollywood theme was really good all in one uday's outfilt was sooo cool 🤣 infact i loved everyones outfit hope they find samrat soon continue soon

lov
--madiha--
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

hey tanzeel awesomeeeeeee updt loved it thank god that neil wnt to america now they can easily find samrat and that bollywood theme was really good all in one uday's outfilt was sooo cool 🤣 infact i loved everyones outfit hope they find samrat soon continue soon

lov
--madiha--

hey thanx am glad u liked it maddy
i had tones of fun making up udays costume actully
i didnt know wat to give him so i thought well he is always forgetting and he is very musculer so i just had to make him amir from gajni it was to perfect for himROFL
il try and cont soon
luv tanzeel

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